Hong 1

Jianyu Hong

English 101

March 16, 2019

Prof. Hofmann

Conclusion Activity.
Identified Weaknesses and Solutions.

The conclusion makes a final appeal although its statement phrase is weak. The

restatement of a thesis sentence is crucial, but the provided conclusion lacks the statement.

Thirdly, it does not bring the content of the paper into the end: it never displays the argument

presented in the entire essay but rather personal opinions

Proposed Conclusion.

In conclusion, marijuana legalization results in both positive and negative impacts and

being a psychedelic it is mostly looked upon. Cannabis is known for its wrong reasons although

people lean on the positive effects. People need to be educated on the useful unknown facts

about Cannabis to create a positive outlook of the drug. The consumption of marijuana relatively

boosts the nation's economy just like alcohol and tobacco. Accordingly, the death penalty for

drug abuse is still valid. The most effective way is formulating a law that protects and outlines

the legal aspects through which marijuana can be preferred. Therefore, the legalization of

marijuana is paramount not if people would focus on its positive impacts on human life.