Paper Proposal Checklist

1. Is the writer’s statement of purpose clear and in keeping with the assignment guidelines? How could
it be improved?

What do you mean when you say pronounce have on other

Do you mean pronouns? Pronunciation?

2. Has the writer clearly described his or her main argument? If not, where is it lacking clarity?

yes

3. Has the writer made a strong case for why his or her argument is important? If not, can a strong case
be made for the argument, or would you recommend he or she consider a different argument?

yes

4. Is the preliminary evidence and/or reasons the writer’s lists to support his or her claims compelling?
Why or why not?
Its interesting but may not be enough