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(Esto se lo escribo a todos) General feedback: These are the steps; you should

have chosen seven of them.

1. Charms are designed.


2. Stones are selected.
3. Gold and silver are melted.
4. Quality control is made.
5. Charms are ground/smoothed.
6. Gold details are added.
7. Silver is soldered onto gold.
8. Each stone is set by hand.
9. Charms are polished.

My comments:

- Excellent job! You wrote several steps in Passive Voice. It is complete.

- Stones are carefully selected.

- Gold and silver are cast.


- Jewellery is finished by hand.

- Gold is soldered onto silver.

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