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Name: Catalina Manriquez

My comments:
Good, you were able to identify each step.
Remember, a sentence is passive voice when we have an subject (object) +
verb to be + main verb in past participle + object (subject)*** not always
N1: a design drawing of the charm is made, which are made in Thailand
- It is perfect!
You have your subject + is (to be) + made (past participle of make)
N2: pandora is the creator of these jewels.
- The jewels are created by Pandora.
Jewels antes eran tu objeto, pero en passive son tu sujeto. Viceversa con
pandora.
N3: They make a careful selection of stones
- The stones are carefully selected.
N4: then the grains of pure gold and silver melt them in fire
- Grains of gold and silver are melted.
N5: Pandora is passionate about perfection and concerned with details, finishing her jewelry by
hand.

- Pandora is concerned about details. Their jewelry is finished by hand.

N6: perform cuts and quality control
- The jewels are cut. A quality control is performed.
N7: They also smooth the stone by polishing it
- The stone is smoothed.
N8: finally, they add details to the charm by soldering gold onto the silver
- Details are added to the charm by…
N9: applying an oxidant
 - An oxidant is applied.
N10: Then each stone is placed by hand and at the end of the process the stone is polished
- Excellent.