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General feedback: These are the steps; you should have chosen at least
seven of them.

1. Charms are designed.

2. Stones are selected.
3. Gold and silver are melted.
4. Quality control is made.
5. Charms are ground/smoothed.
6. Gold details are added.
7. Silver is soldered onto gold.
8. Each stone is set by hand.
9. Charms are polished.

My comments:
Good, you were able to identify the steps of the video. Some of them are
written using passive voice.

- Perfect. You used passive voice correctly.

- Remember that the structure of passive voice is Object + to be +
main verb + subject.
E.g.: The stones are carefully selected

- Para hacer una oración en passive voice puedes preguntarte:

Qué es lo que pasa?: melting  pasado participio de melting: melted.
Quiénes reciben la acción?: Gold and silver
Qué verbo to be uso?: Gold and silver son más de una cosa, por lo tanto
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Y la oración quedaría así:
Gold and Silver are melted.

- Quality control is made.

- The edges are smoothed.

- Gold details are added.

- Gold is soldered into silver.

- Cuál es el verbo principal/main verb?: oxidising

The charm is oxidised to get an antique finish.
- Well done!

- The stone is finished…