(Esto se lo escribo a todos) General feedback: These are the steps; you should

have chosen at least seven of them.

1. Charms are designed.

2. Stones are selected.
3. Gold and silver are melted.
4. Quality control is made.
5. Charms are ground/smoothed.
6. Gold details are added.
7. Silver is soldered onto gold.
8. Each stone is set by hand.
9. Charms are polished.
My comments:
- Excellent job! You were able to identify the steps and you wrote all of them in
Passive Voice. Amazing!

- Good use of passive voice.

- The stones are carefully selected. Carefully is an adverb, therefore it goes
before the main verb.

- This is correct, but you could have made the last sentence in passive voice.
e.g.: and an antique finish is given to the charm.

- … by polishing it to give it shine and elegance.