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(Esto se lo escribo a todos) General feedback: These are the steps; you should

have chosen at least seven of them.

1. Charms are designed.


2. Stones are selected.
3. Gold and silver are melted.
4. Quality control is made.
5. Charms are ground/smoothed.
6. Gold details are added.
7. Silver is soldered onto gold.
8. Each stone is set by hand.
9. Charms are polished.

My comments:

- Excellent job! You created each sentence using the Passive Voice. Amazing!

- The edges are ground/polished.

- N1, N7, N8, N9, N10: Remember to write the before the subject.

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