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General feedback: These are the steps; you should have chosen at least seven of

them.

1. Charms are designed.


2. Stones are selected.
3. Gold and silver are melted.
4. Quality control is made.
5. Charms are ground/smoothed.
6. Gold details are added.
7. Silver is soldered onto gold.
8. Each stone is set by hand.
9. Charms are polished.

My comments:
- Excellent job! You wrote several steps using the Passive Voice. Perfect.

- The past participle of choose is chosen.


The stones are carefully chosen.

- The object of this sentence is gold details, so when we make it Passive, we


change the order, and it is transformed into the subject. (Recuerda que damos
vuelta la oración en el passive voice):
Gold details are added to the charm.
- Lo mismo sucede en la N8

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