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INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPHS

Grade 7A – Introductory Paragraphs – Writing Skills


Prepared by Miss Maya Khater
Let’s Edit… Mercy killing is the act of
terminating a person’s life in order
to relieve his sufferings . People’s
lives are not a game , and must not
be decided by any one . In addition ,
Teachers are often discussing about any hopeless case could cure
banning the cell phones from miraculously. Mercy killing should
school. Students are not taking class be forbidden globally because it is a
work seriously because they are crime and against humanity.
playing with their cell phones for  
this teacher are becoming up of an
idea of banning phones from the
school. In my opinion phones have
to be banned from school for How do you see high school? Most high
students to pay more attention on schoolers look at school negatively because it
the class work and to play or talk takes away time on their phones or time with
with someone in the middle of the outside friends and family, and with no way
class. to communicate with them, including the
time that homework takes. Obviously a good
way to partly solve this issue is by not
banning phones from high schools with
comfortable restrictions.
Let’s Edit…

Banning phones in high schools is now happening in a lot of Everyone is a part of killing
countries and I think that’s not a good idea and here’s why. First the nature and destroying it.
cell phones are useful in many ways and one of the ways is Workers are burning and
researching. Students can research information and learn more cutting trees and building in
knowledge faster with the teacher in class. For example if you their place. Other people are
are learning a selection about a true story that happened a long throwing garbage on the
time ago you can research it and know more information about floor. They have to take care
it. Another reason is that if you got sick or if you hurt yourself of the nature because plants
you can easily call your parents. For example if you caught a take carbon dioxide and give
virus you can just call your parents from your mobile and they oxygen, pollution makes a
will come pick you up. Cell phones being banned in high schools whole in the ozone layer, and
isn’t a very great and helpful idea because it is safer to keep killing many animals will
them with us and can help us in class. make them extinct.
Let’s Edit…
One million children are abused every year, just in the United
States. That one million are just the children who have spoken up
about it. Parents these days think it’s okay to hit their child either
because they assume it teaches discipline and respect, or because
they have been abused in the past. Both physical and mental abuse
are extremely harmful, especially if they’re practiced on someone
at such a young age. Child abuse is completely unacceptable, for it
leaves the child traumatized and scarred. In some cases, it might
even lead to death.

Banning cellphones in high schools is similar to cheating on


your exams; they’re equally terrible decisions. This decision
avoids many teaching opportunities and risks students safety.
Most students feel unmotivated and less excited when having
their phone taken away from them. Cell phones are necessary
and shouldn’t be banned in high schools, for they can be used
educationally, and help with communication and organizing.
 

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