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• Instructions:
Write an essay to answer the questions below. In writing your essay, always remember
the three Cs (content, clarity, cohesion). Always be mindful of the content, be clear on
what you say, and be disciplined in ordering your ideas.
• Topic:
According to Mahatma Gandhi, one must "be the change you want to see in the world."
In this light, how can you embody this ethos in your status as an individual?
REFLECTION 1. ME, MYSELF, AND I
• Guide Questions:
• What are the things you want to change?
• How do you intend to do this feat?
• Why do you think this change is a necessity today?
EXCELLENT SUFFICIENT FOUNDATION DEVELOPING RATING
CRITERIA 97-100 90-96 AL 80-89 70-79
REFLECTION 1. ME, MYSELF, AND I
Clarity Almost all of the Majority of the More than half of Most of the ideas 35%
ideas are ideas are the ideas are presented are
presented with presented with presented with unclear
clarity clarity clarity
Cohesion The work The work The work The work 30%
presented, presented, presented, presented,
overall, is overall, has some overall, has overall, is
cohesive in both inconsistent ideas several inconsistent or
ideas and and structure inconsistencies in unrelated
structure idea and structure
Content Accompanying Accompanying Accompanying Accompanying 35%
main points are main points are main points are main points are
relevant and somewhat slightly relevant not relevant and
critical relevant and and critical critical
critical
Total 100%