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Name:EmilyPride

Assessment
Objective

Tasks

Comment

A01
Develop

Whatisaportrait
Brainstorm
Myragreenecontextual
Myragreeneresponce1
MyraGreeneresponce2
LewiskhanContextual
LewisKhancw
LewisKhanHw
Geneticportrait
Darkroomprocesses
Portraitobjectinstallation

Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
Informedbytheworkofotherphotographers
demonstratinganalyticalunderstanding.

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Myragreeneresponce1
MyraGreeneresponce2
LewisKhanHw
Geneticportrait
Darkroomprocesses
Portraitobject

Experimentwithdifferentresources
reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

Myragreenecontextual
Myragreeneresponce1
MyraGreeneresponce2
LewiskhanContextual
LewisKhancw
LewisKhanHw
Geneticportrait
Darkroomprocesses
Portraitobject

Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
insightsrelevanttointentions.
Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

Photographicportrait
finalpiece

Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstrating
criticalunderstanding

Thefinalpieceisgoodbutitisnotimmediatelyobviousthelink
ithaswiththeworkofRupertShrive.Itmightbeworth
researchingtheartiststhestarntwinsthatworkwithimagesin
gridform.Toimprovethisprojectyoushouldrevisitthefinal
pieceanduseitasdevelopmentpoint.

A02
Refine

A03
Record

A04

WelldoneEmilyanexcellentproject.Youhaveproduced
excellentresearchandanalysisforthemajorityofArtistslooked
atfortheportraitunit.
Yourdevelopmentthroughouttheprojectisgood,andI
especiallylikethelewisKahnresponsethissectionhasreal
potentialfordevelopment.
HoweverIfeelthephotographicobjectpartoftheprojectlacksa
littlesustainedinvestigationofasingleidea.Toimprovethis
sectionyoushoulddevelopyourideabasedontheworkof
RupertShrivefurther.

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Youdemonstrategooduseofmediathroughouttheprojectand
areclearlycomfortablewithusingbothdigitalanddarkroom
manipulationtechniques.Iparticularlylikeyourphotographic
objectexperimentimages.Whenitcomestoyourphotoshop
workithelpstoshowyourprocessbyusingprintscreento
documentyourprogress

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Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecourseare
goodandyouranalysisisalsoveryindepthshowingfluent
recordinganddevelopment.

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