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    This document contains an assessment of a student's photography portfolio. It includes: 1) A list of tasks and projects the student completed, including responses to other photographers' work and experimental portraits. 2) Feedback that the student developed their work through investigation and was informed by other photographers, but their final piece felt like a development piece rather than a finished work. 3) Praise for the student's skills in photoshop and darkroom techniques, but criticism that their written analysis lacked detail and sustained investigation of ideas. 4) Recommendations to revisit the final piece, develop their idea based on another photographer's work further, and improve annotation of their photographic process.

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    This document contains an assessment of a student's photography portfolio. It includes: 1) A list of tasks and projects the student completed, including responses to other photographers' work and experimental portraits. 2) Feedback that the student developed their work through investigation and was informed by other photographers, but their final piece felt like a development piece rather than a finished work. 3) Praise for the student's skills in photoshop and darkroom techniques, but criticism that their written analysis lacked detail and sustained investigation of ideas. 4) Recommendations to revisit the final piece, develop their idea based on another photographer's work further, and improve annotation of their photographic process.

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    This document contains an assessment of a student's photography portfolio. It includes: 1) A list of tasks and projects the student completed, including responses to other photographers' work and experimental portraits. 2) Feedback that the student developed their work through investigation and was informed by other photographers, but their final piece felt like a development piece rather than a finished work. 3) Praise for the student's skills in photoshop and darkroom techniques, but criticism that their written analysis lacked detail and sustained investigation of ideas. 4) Recommendations to revisit the final piece, develop their idea based on another photographer's work further, and improve annotation of their photographic process.

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    Name:lionelmarsden

    Assessment
    Objective

    Tasks

    Comment

    A01
    Develop

    Whatisaportrait
    Brainstorm
    Myragreenecontextual
    Myragreeneresponce1
    MyraGreeneresponce2
    LewiskhanContextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroomprocesses
    Portraitobjectinstallation

    Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
    Informedbytheworkofotherphotographers
    demonstratinganalyticalunderstanding.

    14

    Myragreeneresponce1
    MyraGreeneresponce2
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroomprocesses
    Portraitobject

    Experimentwithdifferentresources
    reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

    Myragreenecontextual
    Myragreeneresponce1
    MyraGreeneresponce2
    LewiskhanContextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroomprocesses
    Portraitobject

    Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
    insightsrelevanttointentions.
    Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

    Photographicportrait
    finalpiece

    Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstrating
    criticalunderstanding

    Thefinalpieceisokaybutitfeelslikeadevelopmentpiecerather
    thanafinaloutcome,Youalsodonotshowsustained
    investigationaroundtheideatoimprovethisprojectyoushould
    revisitthefinalpieceanduseitasdevelopmentpoint.

    A02
    Refine

    A03
    Record

    A04

    WelldoneLionelaninterestingproject.Howeveratpresentthe
    majorityofyouranalysisisratherbriefyoutendtogivean
    overviewoftheprojectanddonotgointodetailaboutindividual
    picturethisneedstobeaddressed.Yourworkonthegenetic
    portriatisexcellentanddemonstratesexcellentphotoshopskils.
    Ifeelthephotographicobjectpartoftheprojectlackssustained
    investigationofasingleidea.Toimprovetheprojectyoushould
    developyourideabasedontheworkofMayXiongfurther.
    15

    Youdemonstrategooduseofmediathroughouttheprojectand
    areclearlycomfortablewithusingbothdigitalanddarkroom
    manipulationtechniques.Iparticularlylikeyourexperimental
    darkroomimages.Whenitcomestoyourphotoshopworkit
    helpstoshowyourprocessbyusingprintscreentodocument
    yourprogress

    14

    Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecourseare
    goodbutyouneedtobemoreindepthwithyourwritten
    documentationdescribingtheprocessinvolved.Youmust
    improvethelevelofannotationtoyourphotographicproject.

    14

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