Name:Jacob

Assessment
Objective

Tasks

Comment

A01
Develop

Whatisaportrait
Brainstorm
Myragreenecontextual
Myragreeneresponce1
MyraGreeneresponce2
LewiskhanContextual
LewisKhancw
LewisKhanHw
Geneticportrait
Darkroomprocesses
Portraitobjectinstallation

Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
Informedbytheworkofotherphotographers
demonstratinganalyticalunderstanding.

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Myragreeneresponce1
MyraGreeneresponce2
LewisKhanHw
Geneticportrait
Darkroomprocesses
Portraitobject

Experimentwithdifferentresources
reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

Myragreenecontextual
Myragreeneresponce1
MyraGreeneresponce2
LewiskhanContextual
LewisKhancw
LewisKhanHw
Geneticportrait
Darkroomprocesses
Portraitobject

Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
insightsrelevanttointentions.
Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

Photographicportrait
finalpiece

Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstrating
criticalunderstanding

Awellthoughtoutfinalpiecethathasclearconnections
(Visually)totheworkoftheArtistsbutyouneedtoexplainwhy
youhavechosentheportraityouhaveandwhatitrepresents.It
isalsokeythatyouaddyourannotationsandthinkabouthow
youwouldimprovethepieceandalsohowyouwoulddevelop
thisprojectfurther.

A02
Refine

A03
Record

A04

WelldoneJacobyouhaveproducedgoodresearchandanalysis
forthemajorityartistslookedatfortheportraitunit.
Howeveryourfinalsectionislackinganyformofwritten
annotationtoexplainyourideas.Youmustrectifythisandmake
suretoaddtxttoyourvisualimages.
Yourdevelopmentthroughouttheprojectisgood,Ifeelthatyou
haveparticularlyengagedwiththevisualsideofthe
photographicobjectprojectyouarestartingtoshowsustained
investigationwhichiskeywhenaimingtoachievemarksinthe
confidentbracket.

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Youdemonstrateexcellentuseofmediathroughouttheproject
andareclearlycomfortablewithusingbothdigitalanddarkroom
manipulationtechniques.Whenitcomestoyourphotoshopwork
ithelpstoshowyourprocessbyusingprintscreentodocument
yourprogress
ThefocusinyourlewisKahnH/Wresponsesectionisoftenout
offocuspleasemakesurethatyourimagesareinfocusandthat
youareusingafastenoughshutterspeedtoavoidshakeand
blur.

15

Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecourseare
welldocumented.Thedescriptionandthoughtbehindyour
darkroomprocessisexcellentbutasmentionedaboveyoumust
gobackandaddthesamelevelofannotationtoyour
photographicobjectwork.

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