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    Tamsin Ellis completed a portrait photography assessment with the following objectives: develop work through sustained investigation of ideas informed by other photographers; refine ideas as work develops through experimentation; and record insights and progress. Feedback noted the photographic object and final piece lacked sustained investigation of a single idea and the images were too small. It was recommended to further develop the ideas based on Dryden Goodwin's work, make the images more prominent, and add more annotation to the documentary section.

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    Tamsin Ellis completed a portrait photography assessment with the following objectives: develop work through sustained investigation of ideas informed by other photographers; refine ideas as work develops through experimentation; and record insights and progress. Feedback noted the photographic object and final piece lacked sustained investigation of a single idea and the images were too small. It was recommended to further develop the ideas based on Dryden Goodwin's work, make the images more prominent, and add more annotation to the documentary section.

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    Tamsin Ellis completed a portrait photography assessment with the following objectives: develop work through sustained investigation of ideas informed by other photographers; refine ideas as work develops through experimentation; and record insights and progress. Feedback noted the photographic object and final piece lacked sustained investigation of a single idea and the images were too small. It was recommended to further develop the ideas based on Dryden Goodwin's work, make the images more prominent, and add more annotation to the documentary section.

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    Name:TamsinEllis

    Assessment
    Objective

    Tasks

    Comment

    A01
    Develop

    Whatisaportrait
    Brainstorm
    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    responce1Myra
    Greeneresponce
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject
    installation

    Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
    Informedbytheworkofotherphotographersdemonstrating
    analyticalunderstanding.

    15

    Experimentwithdifferentresources
    reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

    A02
    Refine

    A03
    Record

    A04

    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    WelldoneTamsinyouhaveproducedgoodresearchand
    analysisforthemajorityofartistslookedatfortheportraitunit.
    Yourdevelopmentthroughouttheprojectisgood,butIfeelthe
    photographicobjectpartoftheprojectlackssustained
    investigationofasingleidea.Toimprovetheprojectyoushould
    developyourideabasedontheworkofdrydengoodwinfurther.I
    wouldalsoliketoseeyourimagesplayamoreprominentrolein
    onyourweeblyatpresenttheyarealittlesmallandlackimpact.

    16

    Youdemonstrategooduseofmediathroughouttheprojectand
    areclearlycomfortablewithusingbothdigitalanddarkroom
    manipulationtechniques.IparticularlylikeyourUlricCollette
    response.Howeveryoumustshowhowyoucreatedan
    image.Whenitcomestoyourphotoshopworkithelpstoshow
    yourprocessbyusingprintscreentodocumentyourprogress

    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
    insightsrelevanttointentions.
    Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

    Photographic
    portraitfinalpiece

    Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstrating
    criticalunderstanding

    Thefinalpieceisokaybutitlacksimpactonyourweebly
    becausetheimagesaresosmall.Youalsodonotshow
    sustainedinvestigationaroundtheideatoimprovethisproject
    youshouldrevisitthefinalpieceanduseitasdevelopmentpoint.

    15

    Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecourseare
    welldocumented.Thedescriptionandthoughtbehindyourideas
    areallgoodwiththeexceptionofthedocumentarysection.You
    mustgobackandaddthesamelevelofannotationtothis
    section.

    14

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