Scribd Logo
Upload

Welcome to Scribd!

  • Ernielee

    Uploaded by

    api-270135867
    70 views2 pages
    This document appears to be an assessment of a student named Ernie Lee's portfolio work for a photography class. The assessment provides feedback on four areas: [1] developing work through sustained investigation, [2] refining ideas as work develops, [3] recording insights and observations, and [4] presenting a final piece demonstrating critical understanding. The assessor provides positive feedback on Ernie's research, analysis, development throughout the project, and use of different media and techniques. However, suggestions are made to further develop the idea behind the photographic object work and make images more prominent on the web portfolio. The assessor recommends revisiting the final piece and using it as a point of further development.

    Original Description:

    Original Title

    ernielee

    Copyright

    © © All Rights Reserved

    Available Formats

    PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd

    Did you find this document useful?

    Is this content inappropriate?

    Report this Document
    This document appears to be an assessment of a student named Ernie Lee's portfolio work for a photography class. The assessment provides feedback on four areas: [1] developing work through sustained investigation, [2] refining ideas as work develops, [3] recording insights and observations, and [4] presenting a final piece demonstrating critical understanding. The assessor provides positive feedback on Ernie's research, analysis, development throughout the project, and use of different media and techniques. However, suggestions are made to further develop the idea behind the photographic object work and make images more prominent on the web portfolio. The assessor recommends revisiting the final piece and using it as a point of further development.

    Copyright:

    © All Rights Reserved
    Download as PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd
    Flag for inappropriate content
    70 views2 pages

    Ernielee

    Uploaded by

    api-270135867
    This document appears to be an assessment of a student named Ernie Lee's portfolio work for a photography class. The assessment provides feedback on four areas: [1] developing work through sustained investigation, [2] refining ideas as work develops, [3] recording insights and observations, and [4] presenting a final piece demonstrating critical understanding. The assessor provides positive feedback on Ernie's research, analysis, development throughout the project, and use of different media and techniques. However, suggestions are made to further develop the idea behind the photographic object work and make images more prominent on the web portfolio. The assessor recommends revisiting the final piece and using it as a point of further development.

    Copyright:

    © All Rights Reserved
    Download as PDF, TXT or read online from Scribd
    Flag for inappropriate content
    of 2

    Name:Ernielee

    Assessment
    Objective

    Tasks

    Comment

    A01
    Develop

    Whatisaportrait
    Brainstorm
    Myragreenecontextual
    Myragreeneresponce1
    MyraGreeneresponce2
    LewiskhanContextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroomprocesses
    Portraitobjectinstallation

    Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
    Informedbytheworkofotherphotographers
    demonstratinganalyticalunderstanding.

    15

    Myragreeneresponce1
    MyraGreeneresponce2
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroomprocesses
    Portraitobject

    Experimentwithdifferentresources
    reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

    Myragreenecontextual
    Myragreeneresponce1
    MyraGreeneresponce2
    LewiskhanContextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroomprocesses
    Portraitobject

    Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
    insightsrelevanttointentions.
    Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

    Photographicportrait
    finalpiece

    Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstrating
    criticalunderstanding

    Thefinalpieceisokaybutitlacksimpactonyurweeblybecause
    theimagesaresosmall.Youalsodonitshowsustained
    investigationaroundtheideatoimprovethisprojectyoushoud
    revisitthefinalpieceanduseitasdevelopmentpoint.

    A02
    Refine

    A03
    Record

    A04

    WAGTARGET

    WelldoneErnieyouhaveproducedgoodresearchandanalysis
    forthemajorityofartistslookedatfortheportraitunit.
    Yourdevelopmentthroughouttheprojectisgood,butIfeelthe
    photographicobjectpartoftheprojectlackssustained
    investigationofasingleidea.Toimprovetheprojectyoushould
    developyourideabasedontheworkofdrydengoodwinfurther.I
    wouldalsoliketoseeyourimagesplayamoreprominentrolein
    onyourweeblyatpresenttheyarealittlesmallandlackimpact.

    16

    Youdemonstrategooduseofmediathroughouttheprojectand
    areclearlycomfortablewithusingbothdigitalanddarkroom
    manipulationtechniques.Iparticularlylikeyourexperimental
    darkroomimages.Whenitcomestoyourphotoshopworkit
    helpstoshowyourprocessbyusingprintscreentodocument
    yourprogress

    14

    Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecourseare
    welldocumented.Thedescriptionandthoughtbehindyour
    darkroomprocessisexcellentbutasmentionedaboveyoumust
    gobackandaddthesamelevelofannotationtoyour
    photographicobjectwork.

    14

    You might also like