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    This document contains feedback on a student's photography portfolio project. The assessor provides feedback on each of the project's assessment objectives: A01 - Developing initial ideas through research and experimentation. The assessor notes the project contains interesting work but could benefit from more detailed analysis of individual photos. A02 - Refining ideas through further experimentation and review. Good development is shown but some assigned tasks like darkroom experiments and further developing ideas are missing. A03 - Documenting the creative process through notes, observations and reflections. The documentation of ideas and process is good but could be expanded, especially for photoshop edits. A04 - Presenting a final piece demonstrating understanding.

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    This document contains feedback on a student's photography portfolio project. The assessor provides feedback on each of the project's assessment objectives: A01 - Developing initial ideas through research and experimentation. The assessor notes the project contains interesting work but could benefit from more detailed analysis of individual photos. A02 - Refining ideas through further experimentation and review. Good development is shown but some assigned tasks like darkroom experiments and further developing ideas are missing. A03 - Documenting the creative process through notes, observations and reflections. The documentation of ideas and process is good but could be expanded, especially for photoshop edits. A04 - Presenting a final piece demonstrating understanding.

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    This document contains feedback on a student's photography portfolio project. The assessor provides feedback on each of the project's assessment objectives: A01 - Developing initial ideas through research and experimentation. The assessor notes the project contains interesting work but could benefit from more detailed analysis of individual photos. A02 - Refining ideas through further experimentation and review. Good development is shown but some assigned tasks like darkroom experiments and further developing ideas are missing. A03 - Documenting the creative process through notes, observations and reflections. The documentation of ideas and process is good but could be expanded, especially for photoshop edits. A04 - Presenting a final piece demonstrating understanding.

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    Name:KimBaninreid

    Assessment
    Objective

    Tasks

    Comment

    A01
    Develop

    Whatisaportrait
    Brainstorm
    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject
    installation

    Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
    Informedbytheworkofotherphotographers
    demonstratinganalyticalunderstanding.

    14

    Experimentwithdifferentresources
    reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

    A02
    Refine

    A03
    Record

    A04

    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    Agoodprojectthatcontainssomeinterestingwork.Howeverat
    presentthemajorityofyouranalysisisrathershortyoutendtogive
    anoverviewoftheprojectanddonotgointodetailaboutindividual
    picturethisneedstobeaddressed.Yourworkonyoursisteris
    excellentitisverypersonalandhasrealscopetobedeveloped
    further.

    Yourdevelopmentthroughouttheprojectisgood,andthesecondpart
    ofyourphotographicobjectsectiondemonstratesthiswell.butwhere
    isthedarkroomexperimentwork?.Toimprovetheprojectmoreyou
    shoulddevelopyourideabasedontheworkofMayXiongfurther.

    12

    Yourrefinementthroughouttheprojectisgoodbuttherearegaps
    whereisthegeneticportraitwork?Whereistheclasswork
    experimentsforthephotographicobject.Youdemonstrategooduse
    ofmediathroughouttheprojectandareclearlycomfortablewithusing
    bothdigitalandmanualmanipulationtechniques.Howeveryour
    photoshopworkneedstobedocumentedmakesureyoushowyour
    printscreenstoshowtheprocess.

    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
    insightsrelevanttointentions.
    Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

    Photographic
    portraitfinalpiece

    Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstrating
    criticalunderstanding

    Itisunclearwhatisyourfinalpieceis,shouldtheimagesbeviewed
    asaseriesorshouldtheybeindividuallylooked?Pleasegobackand
    explainalongwithanevaluationoftheproject.Thefinalworkisgood
    butwhereareyourclassworkexperimentations.Youmustalsoshow
    sustainedinvestigationaroundtheidea,toimprovethisprojectyou
    shouldrevisitthefinalpieceanduseitasdevelopmentpoint.One

    14

    Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecoursearewell
    documented.Howeverasmentionedpreviouslyyourwriting
    documentationisfartoosmallandmustbeimprovedandexpanded.

    12

    ideayoucouldthinkaboutiscreatingamovinggiffofthepattern
    appearingonthemodelsface..

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