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    Beatrice Piesold completed a portrait photography project, researching artists Myra Greene and Lewis Khan. She produced a video portrait of her brother that showed potential but could be improved with still images added. Beatrice demonstrated excellent use of both digital and darkroom techniques. The assessor provided feedback that the documentary portion had more potential and could be extended. Some shots in the video were too dark, and Beatrice was advised to document her photoshop process by including print screens. Overall, the project showed thorough research and development, but could be strengthened by further developing the video portrait.

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    Beatrice Piesold completed a portrait photography project, researching artists Myra Greene and Lewis Khan. She produced a video portrait of her brother that showed potential but could be improved with still images added. Beatrice demonstrated excellent use of both digital and darkroom techniques. The assessor provided feedback that the documentary portion had more potential and could be extended. Some shots in the video were too dark, and Beatrice was advised to document her photoshop process by including print screens. Overall, the project showed thorough research and development, but could be strengthened by further developing the video portrait.

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    Beatrice Piesold completed a portrait photography project, researching artists Myra Greene and Lewis Khan. She produced a video portrait of her brother that showed potential but could be improved with still images added. Beatrice demonstrated excellent use of both digital and darkroom techniques. The assessor provided feedback that the documentary portion had more potential and could be extended. Some shots in the video were too dark, and Beatrice was advised to document her photoshop process by including print screens. Overall, the project showed thorough research and development, but could be strengthened by further developing the video portrait.

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    Name:BeatricePiesold

    Assessment
    Objective

    Tasks

    Comment

    A01
    Develop

    Whatisaportrait
    Brainstorm
    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject
    installation

    Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
    Informedbytheworkofotherphotographersdemonstrating
    analyticalunderstanding.

    17

    Experimentwithdifferentresources
    reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

    A02
    Refine

    A03
    Record

    A04

    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    WelldoneBeatriceyouhaveproducedexcellentresearchand
    analysisforalloftheartistslookedatfortheportraitunit.
    Everysectionisextremelythoroughandwellthoughtoutwithclear
    andthoughtfuldevelopment.Thevideoofyourbrotherisexcellentand
    definitelycouldbedevelopedfurther.Youcouldaddstillsintothe
    videointhestyleoflewiskhan.Thephotographicportraitworkalso
    developswellbutIfeelthedocumentaryhasmorepotential.

    17

    Youdemonstrateexcellentuseofmediathroughouttheprojectand
    areclearlycomfortablewithusingbothdigitalanddarkroom
    manipulationtechniques.Howeverwhenitcomestoyourphotoshop
    workithelpstoshowyourprocessbyusingprintscreentodocument
    yourprogress.
    IfyoudorevisitandextendthefilmIwouldlikeyoutobealittlemore
    awareofthelightingasthereareafewshotsthatarealittledark.

    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
    insightsrelevanttointentions.
    Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

    Photographic
    portraitfinalpiece

    Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstrating
    criticalunderstanding

    Thefinalpieceisgoodanddemonstrateexcellentuseofprocesst.As
    mentionedpreviouslythereisscopetodeveloptheprojectfurther
    usingthevideoasadevelopmentpointandexperimentingfurtherwith
    addingstillstothefilm

    17

    Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecoursearewell
    documented.Thedescriptionandthoughtbehindallunitsareexcellent
    butasmentionedaboveyoumustgobackandaddyourphotoshop
    printscreenprocesses.

    17

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