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    Frankie Irvin completed a photography assessment with the following objectives: 1) Develop work through sustained investigation of portrait photography, informed by other photographers. 2) Refine ideas as the work develops through experimentation with different techniques and resources. 3) Record observations, insights, and ideas relevant to the intentions of the project. The assessment provided feedback on Frankie's work, praising the personal nature of the work on artists but noting that some areas like the photographic object piece lacked sustained investigation. Refinements were needed such as expanding the analysis and ensuring all work was properly documented. The final piece was good but could be improved by adjusting the images and showing more investigation around the selected idea.

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    Frankie Irvin completed a photography assessment with the following objectives: 1) Develop work through sustained investigation of portrait photography, informed by other photographers. 2) Refine ideas as the work develops through experimentation with different techniques and resources. 3) Record observations, insights, and ideas relevant to the intentions of the project. The assessment provided feedback on Frankie's work, praising the personal nature of the work on artists but noting that some areas like the photographic object piece lacked sustained investigation. Refinements were needed such as expanding the analysis and ensuring all work was properly documented. The final piece was good but could be improved by adjusting the images and showing more investigation around the selected idea.

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    Frankieirvin

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    Frankie Irvin completed a photography assessment with the following objectives: 1) Develop work through sustained investigation of portrait photography, informed by other photographers. 2) Refine ideas as the work develops through experimentation with different techniques and resources. 3) Record observations, insights, and ideas relevant to the intentions of the project. The assessment provided feedback on Frankie's work, praising the personal nature of the work on artists but noting that some areas like the photographic object piece lacked sustained investigation. Refinements were needed such as expanding the analysis and ensuring all work was properly documented. The final piece was good but could be improved by adjusting the images and showing more investigation around the selected idea.

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    Name:Frankieirvin

    Assessment
    Objective

    Tasks

    Comment

    A01
    Develop

    Whatisaportrait
    Brainstorm
    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject
    installation

    Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
    Informedbytheworkofotherphotographersdemonstrating
    analyticalunderstanding.

    16

    Experimentwithdifferentresources
    reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

    A02
    Refine

    A03
    Record

    A04

    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    Welldonefrankieaninterestingproject.Howeveratpresentthe
    majorityofyouranalysisisratherbriefyoutendtogivean
    overviewoftheprojectanddonotgointodetailaboutindividual
    picturethisneedstobeaddressed.YourworkontheArtistis
    excellentitisverypersonalandhasrealscopetobedeveloped
    further.
    Yourdevelopmentthroughouttheprojectisgood,butIfeelthe
    photographicobjectpartoftheprojectlackssustained
    investigationofasingleidea.Toimprovetheprojectyoushould
    developyourideabasedontheworkofMayXiongfurther.

    16

    Youdemonstrategooduseofmediathroughouttheprojectand
    areclearlycomfortablewithusingbothdigitalanddarkroom
    manipulationtechniques.Howeveryourworkdoeslack
    refinementinplacesthesecondsetofobservationsfortheMyra
    GreenesectionaremissingandyourimagesfortheUlricCollette
    responsehavenotbeenmerged.

    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
    insightsrelevanttointentions.
    Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

    Photographic
    portraitfinalpiece

    Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstrating
    criticalunderstanding

    Thefinalpieceisgoodyouhaveclearlythoughtaboutyour
    responsehowevertheimagesarealittledarkandthewrong
    formatpleaseadjustaccordingly.Youmustalsoshowsustained

    14

    Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecourseare
    welldocumented.Howeverasmentionedpreviouslyyourwriting
    documentationisfartoosmallandmustbeimprovedand
    expanded.

    15

    investigationaroundtheidea,toimprovethisprojectyoushould
    revisitthefinalpieceanduseitasdevelopmentpoint.

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