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    This document contains notes from a photography assessment for a student named Charlie Meall. It includes feedback on assignments to develop work through sustained investigation of ideas, refine ideas as work progresses, record insights and reflections, and present a final piece demonstrating critical understanding. The assessor provides feedback that Charlie's analysis and documentation of individual photos needs more detail, the object installation could be developed further, and writing documentation should be expanded overall. Sustained investigation of a single idea is encouraged to improve the work.

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    This document contains notes from a photography assessment for a student named Charlie Meall. It includes feedback on assignments to develop work through sustained investigation of ideas, refine ideas as work progresses, record insights and reflections, and present a final piece demonstrating critical understanding. The assessor provides feedback that Charlie's analysis and documentation of individual photos needs more detail, the object installation could be developed further, and writing documentation should be expanded overall. Sustained investigation of a single idea is encouraged to improve the work.

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    Charliemeall

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    This document contains notes from a photography assessment for a student named Charlie Meall. It includes feedback on assignments to develop work through sustained investigation of ideas, refine ideas as work progresses, record insights and reflections, and present a final piece demonstrating critical understanding. The assessor provides feedback that Charlie's analysis and documentation of individual photos needs more detail, the object installation could be developed further, and writing documentation should be expanded overall. Sustained investigation of a single idea is encouraged to improve the work.

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    Name:CharlieMeall

    Assessment
    Objective

    Tasks

    Comment

    A01
    Develop

    Whatisaportrait
    Brainstorm
    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject
    installation

    Developworkthroughsustainedinvestigation
    Informedbytheworkofotherphotographersdemonstrating
    analyticalunderstanding.

    14

    Experimentwithdifferentresources
    reviewandrefineideasasworkdevelops

    A02
    Refine

    A03
    Record

    A04

    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    Agoodprojectthatcontainssomeinterestingwork.Howeveratpresent
    themajorityofyouranalysisisratherbriefyoutendtogiveanoverview
    oftheprojectanddonotgointodetailaboutindividualpicturethis
    needstobeaddressed.YourworkonyourMumsshopisexcellentitis
    verypersonalandhasrealscopetobedevelopedfurther.
    Yourdevelopmentthroughouttheprojectisgood,butIfeelthe
    photographicobjectpartoftheprojectlackssustainedinvestigationofa
    singleidea.Toimprovetheprojectyoushoulddevelopyourideabased
    ontheworkofLucasSimoesfurther.

    14

    Youdemonstrategooduseofmediathroughouttheprojectandare
    clearlycomfortablewithusingbothdigitalandmanualmanipulation
    techniques.Howeveryourphotoshopworkneedstobedocumented
    makesureyoushowyourprintscreenstoshowtheprocess.

    Myragreene
    contextual
    Myragreene
    response1Myra
    Greeneresponse
    2
    Lewiskhan
    Contextual
    LewisKhancw
    LewisKhanHw
    Geneticportrait
    Darkroom
    processes
    Portraitobject

    Recordvisualandotherwaysideasobservationsand
    insightsrelevanttointentions.
    Showabilitytoreflectonworkandprogress

    Photographic
    portraitfinal
    piece

    Presentapersonalandinformedfinalpiecedemonstratingcritical
    understanding

    Thefinalpieceisgoodyouhaveclearlythoughtaboutyourresponse
    howeverIfeelyoucouldhaveusedmoreimagesandcreatedalarger
    piece.Youmustalsoshowsustainedinvestigationaroundtheidea,to
    improvethisprojectyoushouldrevisitthefinalpieceanduseitas
    developmentpoint.Oneideayoucouldthinkaboutiscreatingamoving
    giffofthedifferentportraits.

    13

    Theimagesyouhavecreatedforallaspectsofthecoursearewell
    documented.Howeverasmentionedpreviouslyyourwriting
    documentationisfartoosmallandmustbeimprovedandexpanded.

    14

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