Bobadilla 1

Gissell Bobadilla
Jennifer Rodrick
English 115
23 October 2016
Second Essay Progression
When I first received the prompt for my first essay I had no idea how to start my
introduction, my mind went completely blank. I felt that my points were not backed up
with strong evidence. Everything was rushed and last minute. As for my second essay
everything was going smooth more ideas were flowing. I made sure to cite correctly,
check my grammar/punctuations, and create a stronger thesis statement than my previous
one. I learned not to leave everything for the last minute because it is a pain and it will
turn out to be poorly written essay. I used readings from my other classes that related to
the topic, I made an outline before even typing my actual draft, and I took my time. I am
feeling confident about this one.