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Final Draft Essay 1
Final Draft Essay 1
Jorge Guardiola
Professor Sharity Nelson
English 1301-122
09 September 22
Welcome week
The office of Student, Orientation, Leadership, and Engagement established the Class of
2026 Facebook group. The Class of 2026 was established with the shared goal of individuals
hoping to graduate in that year. The group is followed by an online welcome poster for returning
students and new freshmen. In order to entice students to attend at least one of the social
gatherings the Facebook post exhibits interest in setting up various times, days, and social events
Going out to work or play seems to be the goal of (SOLE) as the community seems to be
energetic, enthusiastic, due to the non-stop activities placed in the online poster, “We are one
week away from the first day of school and we have a whole week of exciting events planned
out! Join us for an amazing start of the school year!” (SOLE). The projects go from “donut
divas”, “laser tag”, to “cabchella” (SOLE). A music festival, a game where large group of people
are needed, and free donuts are some creative ways to gather students. It really goes on to show
that not only they want students involved yet it shows that they have the interest and energy to
continue with their daily life and mixing it with school activities that take much effort and the
On the other hand, students seem to face the online poster as something good. Feedback
from students in the post from Facebook had only one comment towards the online post yet there
were several reactions going to a total of twenty-one reactions to the post. The reactions differ
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from love reactions to likes. The only comment posted on the online poster says as follow “can a
Tamiu employee attend laser tag or is it only for students?” (Ruby Alejandra), August 18 2022,
Facebook. No response was given back to the user not sure because it was faculty and not a
student that commented and that can give the audience a bad image to the poster because they
are not sure if they can go to the event or not. While the students can be well informed by all the
information provided, the staff seem to lack more information to them. Some users also shared
the post a total of twenty-seven users shared the post to other audiences such as sharing them to
The layout of the online poster is very informative in the sense that contact information is
posted “for more information contact the office of Student, Orientation, Leadership, and
Engagement” (SOLE). Putting contact information such as a phone number, e-mail, and site of
their office is a big jump that can help the community answer any questions they have instead of
commenting on the post. Time, date, and place of the event also helps in understanding what is
going on around the campus. The online poster shows times as early as eight in the morning as
late as six or seven in the afternoon. Dates appear at the top followed by the activities of the day
with their respective time. Place of meeting is placed next to the activity in their own acronym
according to the building in the campus like blk for the building bullock.
Bold, colorful words are another big thing in the online poster. Big neon blue and purple
letters really attract the students and other people in the community like parents. “TAMIU
WELCOME WEEK” (SOLE). Just by looking at the title in neon anyone can get into reading the
poster and post it hooks the audience by the bright colors and the big letters that can’t go unseen.
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Days of the week such as Monday and Tuesday also have their colorful scent and bold look so
you don’t miss any days and activities throughout the week.
Also, putting the information out to Facebook can spread the information of the poster in
a much rapid pace then having the poster at school. The community of Tamiu can only do so
much to spread the word in campus for example putting signs in between hallways, posters, and
flyers. The problem with that would be that a lot of students are distracted with music, friends,
and phones. That is where the Facebook community enters to spread out the word on the
welcome week poster and because students are most of the time on their phone, we get to see
Overall, bringing forward organizations and activities to new students is a great way to
not only bring students into school activities, but also make students feel at ease when looking at
all the major events they can attend and be part of the community. Having information placed for
further explanations is a great way to take any doubts from the community. Having clear and
basic information like dates, time, and place is very helpful to the audience seeing the post and
the online poster so the feedback goes on with shares and likes instead of too much questions and
doubts in the comments. These qualities of the online poster in connection with the social
platform Facebook help bring two communities in one place and facilitate the flow of
information.
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Works cited
https://www.facebook.com/txamiusole/photos/a.289268355218736/1242833313195564/