Aissam Belghiat

25 Augest 2023
Upper-Intermediate

Friend From a Different Generation

Having a friend from a different generation is something wonderful in your life for
multiple raisons. The first one is that you have a big or a little brother. This means someone
who can advise and guide you if he is older that you, or someone who can teach you new
things if he is younger than you. The second raison is to have information about the life
before and after your generation. Actually, you will learn a lot about how the life was before
you and how it is after you. The last raison is to bridge the gap between generations. In fact, it
allows reducing intergenerational conflicts and increasing understanding of each other. In
conclusion, having a friend from a different generation helps in having a peaceful society
whose members tolerate each other.

Relevance 5/5

Organization 4/5

Structure 4.5/5

Vocabulary 4/5

Coherence 4/5

Level 4/5

Total 8.5/10
 Ashwaq Ahmed Baseham
August 25, 2023
Upper-Intermediate A

The Advantages of a Friendship with an Age Gap

There are many advantages from having a friend from different generations, and in the
following paragraph_ I would mention some of it from my point of view. First, this type of
friendships helps you improve your personality, because it is similar to having a mentor who
advices you and correct your mistakes. Second, by interacting with them and observing their
way of dealing with life and all the hardships you can actually learn alot. Finally, shareing the
same hobbies and interest such as art and music for example allows you to become more
open-minded and have better understanding of how differently others view things. To sum
up_ I take my relationship with my sister who is eight years older than me as an example.

Main idea (short, simple, clear) >>>> Support (examples, details, etc.)

Relevance 5/5

Organization 3/5

Structure 3.5/5

Vocabulary 4/5

Coherence 4/5

Level 3.5/5

Total 7.7/10
 Asmaa
Apper intermediate
Friday, Aug 25

My story of doing first aid for a person

One day, when I was 13, I was walking to school, and I saw a pregnant woman who was
about to give birth. She was screaming and sitting in one of the chairs that are on the road. I
couldn't go to her because I didn't know what to do for her_ Then I started screaming to make
people help the woman because at first, they thought she was crazy or something like that. At
that moment a speeding man came_ it seemed to be one of her family because I saw him he
was very worried about her. He called the ambulance immediately furthermore, he used to tell
me to hold the woman's hand until the ambulance arrived because she was so scared and
cryed. and when the ambulance came, they took her with the man who helped her and went
away. And I went back to continue my way to school. At this moment, I felt that I should
have helped her more, but I was afraid of making a mistake. From that day on, I told my
teacher that I wanted to learn all first aid, and when I started learning some of them, I ended
up falling in love with medicine, and now I really want to enter the field of medicine at
university to help people and not be afraid of any similar situations.

Relevance 5/5

Organization 5/5

Structure 3/5

Vocabulary 4/5

Coherence 4/5

Level 4/5

Total 8.3/10
 Baredah Qatran
25/8/2023
Upper-intermediate

Friend from a Different Generation

There are many advantages to having a friend from a different generation. First, they
benefit from their different experiences and help each other. For example, if you have friends
who are older than you, you will learn from their previous experiences because they faced a
lot of problems, and they learned how to solve them. They are more experienced and wiser
than you. Second, they learned how they should be when they get older if they have old
friends. They consider them as their role models, and they learn a lot of things from them that
they should do in the future. For example, if your old friends respect other people or
sympathize with the little ones, or they are patient and helpful, you will be like them because
you consider them as your role models as I said before. Finally, they will relive their
childhood or young adulthood moments if they have young friends. They see how their
friends spend it. For example, you have young friends, and you spend many times with them.
You will see a tape from your childhood and youth, and you will renew your memories when
you see theirs. To sum up, the age-gap friendship has a lot of advantages that are help us in
our life.

There are many advantages to having a friend from a different generation:

1. They benefit from their different experiences and help each other
2. They learn how they should be when they get older if they have old friends.
3. They will relive their childhood or young adulthood moments if they have young friends

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 Bian Ali Alfakih
25, Aug 2023
Upper-Intermediate A

A Friend From A different Generation!

A friend from a different generation is an interesting thing. To have someone who can
understand you even if he is from a different generation gives you the advantage of getting an
advice from a loving person with a completely different mindset. For me_ I could not get this
type of relationships before_ and also I do not know if I want to get it but it still an interesting
thing. I notice that I only make my friends who are as my age. I can create a good relationship
with people who are older or youngest than me but I can not call it "friendship", still it is
different. we can make a long and lovely conversation but they is not never friends to me. So I
think it is great if you could create a friendship -as it could be- with a different generation.

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 Laila Mufadhal
25/08/2023
Upper-Intermediate

The Advantages of Having Friends from Different Generations

There are many advantages to having friends from different generations, for three main
reasons. First, friends from different ages can see the world in different ways. They have
different experiences and memories, and they can teach you about their point of view. For
example, a friend who is older than you can tell you about what it was like living without
phone. Second, friends from different ages can help you learn new things. They can introduce
you to new movies, books, and ideas. For example, a friend who is younger than you can
show you the latest fashion trends. Third, friends from different ages can be there for you.
They can offer support and advice when you need it. For example, a friend who is older than
you can help you deal with problems at work. In conclusion, having friends from different
generations can be a lot of fun. It can help you to learn and grow, and having _ more
interesting life.

Relevance 5/5

Organization 5/5

Structure 4/5

Vocabulary 4.5/5

Coherence 5/5

Level 4/5

Total 9.2/10
 Moataz

Tips for a Smooth Travel

Traveling can be smooth for you in many ways. If you want to enjoy smooth travel,
you should follow my best three tips which will bring you comfortable and smooth travel.
Firstly, choose the appropriate time which can go with the weather. For example, one day, I
traveled, and the weather was summer. However_ it was really hot, _ I chose the morning bus
to travel. It was awful, and I regretted it because when I arrived, I was extremely tired.
Secondly, try to book the best seat. Instead of booking the middle seat, book the window seat.
It has a couple of benefits such as fabulous views, fresh air from the window, and no one will
disturb you if they want to go somewhere. Finally, bringing some food and drinks with you
will help you to get smooth travel, as well. If you obtain a slight delay in the bus, you can eat
or drink until you start to move. From my point of view, these tips will help you a lot because
I have tried them. Moreover, I got amazing results.

Relevance 5/5

Organization 4/5

Structure 4/5

Vocabulary 4/5

Coherence 4/5

Level 4/5

Total 8.3/10
 Muntaha ali
25th August
Upper-intermediate

Friends from different generations

Friends from different generation have a lot of advantages and make their relationship
wonderful. First, they can give each other advices about there different generations. For
example, when you have a friend who is older than you and their children are your age_ they
can ask you how to treat them or have a good relationship with thier children how to
understand them. Secondly_ you can learn a lot of from there experience in live, they lived
more than you and had experience with jobs, people, love, live and more things that you can't
imagined so try to learn some of them. Third, you can help them to catch our world, we live in
a new world but also it is difficult for them to get around, especially with technology's so they
will need your help. Finally, having a friend from a different generation it could be useful for
you and them in plenty of ways.

Relevance 5/5

Organization 3.5/5

Structure 2/5

Vocabulary 2/5

Coherence 2/5

Level 2/5

Total 5.5/10
 Nada Alarasy

Upper-Intermediate

Tips for Smooth Travel

Travel is going to be such a nice experience or either a nightmare that the earlier planning.
Here there are three tips _ will help you to have an unforgettable journey. First of all, for sure,
before you plan to travel to a place_ you have to make a quick research about it. Here are
three important things you have to know about your direction. First, the weather is important
to be known due to you clothes. If the weather is cold_ bring some extra coats, boots and
scarfs. however, _ it's hot or cool do not forget your sunscreen, some pairs of sandals and
shorts. Second, googling the prices over will make you feel better financially. Read reviews of
that place's visitors on social media then decide whether your financial state is Okay. Third,
the communication is very important to deal smoothly with people over there. Memorize
some basic phrases will make you feel familiar. Imagine that a tourist in your country greeted
you using your language, you will weclome to help him. The weather, the expenses and the
communication are the most important things you have to know before travel any place , what
is your opinion, what can you add?

Relevance 5/5

Organization 4/5

Structure 2/5

Vocabulary 3/5

Coherence 3.5/5

Level 3/5

Total 6.8/10

If you sneeze, you blink. [0: facts]

If it rains, I’ll wear a jacket. [1: possible situations & results in the present/future]
If I were you, I wouldn’t accept the offer. [2: imagined situations & results in the present/future]
If I hadn’t stayed up late, I wouldn’t have overslept. [3: imagined situations & results in the past]
 Nizel
August 25th 2023
Upper-intermediate

A friend from another generation

Friendship is a word small in size and big in meaning, friendship is love, trust, and
safety. And these days there is no person who doesn't have a friend. actually, I wish I had a
friend from another generation, but from a generation before me not after me for several
reasons. Firstly, if I had a friend who is older than me, this would help me understand life
better, by talking to me about his experiences, because he would have more experiences and
attitudes than me. Secondly, when I have any problems or need help, I can ask her anytime
and anywhere without shame. Finally, when I have a true friend who is older than me, I will
feel more mature, because, she will give me advice on everything, Also, this can help change
my life completely, especially if this friend is funny, sociable, lively, and active. In
conclusion, having a mature friend in your life is really important because you will take your
strength and confidence from her.

Relevance 5/5

Organization 2.5/5

Structure 3/5

Vocabulary 3.5/5

Coherence 3/5

Level 3.5/5

Total 6.8/10
 Raghad suliman
25/08/2023
Upper-Intermediate

Having a Friend from

We are all surrounded by people from different generations; our family members,
classmates and people from the scope of work. It does not matter how huge is the age-gap
between you and your friends; the most important thing is to get on well with them. Having
an older friend will help you with your life experience because they have been to different
kinds of conditions_ and now they have enough knowledge to know how to sort it out. For
instance, if you are having a problem with your boss, partner, mother or child_ they will
definitely give you the appropriate advice that you need, for the reason that, they have been
through it or they know someone _ has. On the other hand, you won't only benefit from older
people: having a younger friend will extend your point of view. The new generation tend to be
more open-minded and accept all kinds of human beings and know about contemporary
fashion, art and music. Accordingly, you are more lucky to have the chance to easily go with
current life's conditions. Overall, since you want to be a better person_ try to have friends
from different generations and get benefits form that.

Relevance 5/5

Organization 2.5/5

Structure 3/5

Vocabulary 3/5

Coherence 3/5

Level 3.5/5

Total 6.7/10
 Rawan Hazza
Upper- Intermediate
25 August

Older Friends

Older friends often bring a lot of good into your life. In fact_ there are benefits of making
friends with older people. First of all, making friends with older people can bring a lot of
wisdom and life experience into your life. For example, they can offer valuable advice,
insights, and guidance based on their years of experience. Second, an older friend may have
common interests and things that you can share together. Third, they usually have a wealth of
stories and knowledge to share, which can be both entertaining and educational. Fourth, they
can offer a different perspective and help you see the world in a new way. They can also
provide a sense of stability and reliability. In addition, with the friendship of older people, you
can also learn a lot about history, culture, and different life experiences. In general, making
friends with older people always has benefits.

Relevance 5/5

Organization 3/5

Structure 5/5

Vocabulary 4/5

Coherence 3.5/5

Level 3/5

Total 7.8/10
 Sera Bitar
25.08.2023
Upper intermediate

Friendship

Having friends from _ different generation allows us to see the world from different
sides. My grandmother and I are good friends. Talking about the advantages, first_ she always
advices me when I need to make decisions. When I wanted to choose my major_ she advised
me to choose engineering. Second, she takes care of my feeling, she tells my parents to not
make me sad. Third, she encourages me to study and work hard. She tells my about her
experiences so I can take it as an example. We spend great time together, _ it is not like
having _ teenager friend who want to spend time for fun and do not care about the future. To
sum up, In my opinion_ the age gap is something that we should not care about while Making
prindships.

Relevance 4/5

Organization 4/5

Structure 3/5

Vocabulary 3/5

Coherence 3.5/5

Level 3/5

Total 6.8/10
 Taisir Albishari
Upper intermediate A

My Perfect Journey

If I want to have a perfect journey I s would to do many steps before the trip. The first
one, I'll take a pen and paper afterwards I will write everything we will need it for the journey,
then I go to the market to buy these items. Second, If I will go to beach journey I will take a
summer clothes because it is the weather will be hot and sunny. Third, and that is most
important it's don't forget the skin sunscreen , sunglasses, and a sun hat. When I prepare
myself I should to take my passport and ID from the beginning . I think that's very importance
thing forIu can travel.The fourth thing,also is most necessary that is booking at hotel online
before you travel.But before All of these steps you should be checking how much do you
have? and how much do you will need to this journey. Maybe you have the enough money
maybe not you don't know that unless you make checking.In conclusion, I think that's
something you need it for a smooth travel.