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GROUP: IELTS 8.0 KHO NG KHO

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a

year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided
to do this.

Before entering colleges, high school graduate students are advised to take a
gap year travelling or working. This essay will consider the pros and cons of
this issue.

m bi chuyn nghip hn:

Before the door-step (ngng ca) of further education, adolescents who are
high-school leavers, are advised to take a gap year for either travelling or
working. Both the pros and cons of this trend are taken into account (xem xt)
and draw out an appropriate/reasonable view.

(h m c 2 s la chn, em nn nh n ch either or ( n im ng
php tt hn) nh)

Mo m bi: suy ngh hai ln v c gng chn b ng

On the one hand, after a year away from school, young people may lose their
academic momentum. This means that their study skills could be Comment [SCD1]: good

diminished (gim st trm trng) suffer if they let them out of practice for Comment [SCD2]: t ny ch dng au kh
hoc chu ng bnh tt
a long time. Secondly, taking a year off does not only mean they start Comment [SCD3]: o ng tt
university a year later, but also means that they finish university a year later. Comment [SCD4]: ny s b lp (bt u tr,
kt thc mun ^^, tng i nhm chn trong din
This may delay slow down (lm chm li) their process of learning, t )

leading to losing may job opportunities success in todays competitive job Comment [SCD5]: ch sa li ny
market where work experience is considered as the most important factor . In
addition, a gap year may be a waste of time. If the youth do not organize their Comment [SCD6]: ngi tr

plan well and take make their efforts to achieve their goals, they could end up Comment [SCD7]: effort ko i vi take em nh

spending a year sitting on the couch.

Ghi nh: Suffer ch dng chung vi collocation ch cm gic v d nh :

pain(ni au) , hu qu (consequences) hoc bnh tt (diseases)
Trng hp ny khi mun din t nhng k nng hc hnh th phi din
t ng l b gim st/ b tt li be diminished (l 1 t rt hay trong
trng hp ny)
taking a year off does not only mean they start university a year later,
but also means that they finish university a year later ( ny s b lp (bt
u tr, kt thc mun ^^, tng i nhm chn trong din t )
cu ny nn vit o ng li nh sau :
taking a year off does not only mean they start university a year Comment [SCD8]: o ng mang tnh hn ch

later,
Taking a year off, not only does this slow down their process of
futher learning, it aslo discourge them (lm thoi ch h) in the
learning spirit (tinh thn hc tp) /

On the other hand, a gap year between high school and university provides
the youth plenty of time to Make clear (lm sng t) narrow down their
career direction. For instance, a student who dreams to become a teacher may
have opportunity to find out whether this job is suitable to her/him while
when working as English Teacher for remote children as a volunteer. Comment [SCD9]: v d cha c hay lm

Furthermore, it is a chance to save money for college. Those who cannot

afford tuition costs immediately after finishing high-school level could Comment [SCD10]: thm vo lm r

spend a year working and preparing their finance for education. Finally,
young people could develop their non - academic skills during their gap year.
Becoming a volunteer or travelling to foreign countries trains students new
life skills such as time management, problem-solving skills .

while l t cha trong khi

 y em phi dng when din t khi m tham gia vo vic ging
dy ting anh cho tr em vng su vng xa
v d cha c thc t cho lm, n gin bi v, lc cc bn cng
cha c bng + kin thc chuyn mn th ly u m i dy nn vit
li: The youth, in some cases, when joining the labor market for a short
time, are likely to find out their career passion. (ni ti y ng ta hiu
ri 1 s trng hp khng nht thit lc no cng lit k)

In conclusion, taking a gap year is not completely beneficial, there still exists
noteworthy drawbacks. Students intending to have a year off should put both
these advantages and disadvantages into consideration.