Self-Review Commentary
Name(s): MUHAMMAD ADLIN BIN ABDUL HADI
Class: A20G
Owner of the Commentary: Muhammad Syazwan Bin Mohd Faizal
Identify and fill in the items below
No. Items
1. Is there a selected IA prompt? Please state. Yes ( How does the way we organize
or classify knowledge affect what we
know ?)
2. Is there any unpacking/discussion of the IA
prompt? Is the unpacking/discussion
relevant to the context of the object?
Suggestion(s) for improvement
3. What is the IA prompt
questioning/challenging? What aspect of
knowledge does it explore?
Suggestion(s) for improvement
4. Is there an object? Is it a generic object or
have a specific real-world context?
1
Yes/No.
Sentence(s) from the commentary.
Yes ( Nobody is perfect enough to be
an expert on every knowledge in this
world. Everyone will always make
the wrong idea about knowledge
and sometimes can lead to a
different perspective about the
knowledge.)
Yes(The theory knowledge theme,
which is Knowledge and Knower
explains how the knower perspective
individually about the knowledge
when the interpretation is not
organized enough.)
A specific real-world context ( a
tweet from a political leader tweets
about the issue French hatred
towards Muslims).
5. The link between the object and IA prompt
is clearly explained and justified
Suggestion(s) for improvement
6. Strong justification on the choice of object
and effectively link to the IA prompt
Suggestion(s) for improvement
7. The justification is done within the context
of the core theme, or one of the optional
theme
Suggestion(s) for improvement
8. All points are well supported by evidence
9. Use of relevant core concepts and
effectively discuss the link between the
object and IA prompt
Suggestion(s) for improvement
10. Concise wording technique is applied in
the writing
11. TOK concepts and tools used are explained
2
Yes(The interpretation of the political
leader tweets which we can see in
the left of the picture, about the
knowledge of Muslims did not
practice “eye for an eye” law is what
the political leader meant, but the
interpretation about the knowledge
brings the controversy to the world
because of the perspective from the
people individually. Based on the
object, it shows that misorganized
knowledge can lead a false
accusation towards certain people.)
Yes
Yes ( The core theme : Knowledge
and knower is relevant.)
Could have elaborate more rather
than state it on the introduction
part.
Yes
Yes ( the usage of perspective and
interpretation is relevant for this
commentary).
Yes
Yes ( the cognitive tools used is
 implicitly in the writing reason)

12. Summarize and very briefly synthesize Yes, on the last sentence
what the object have shown is the answer ( organizing or classifying knowledge
(or are the answers) to the IA prompt can affect the way we know from
question. interpretation and perspective).

13. Use the object to comment on the Prompt
question and to talk about how Theory of
Knowledge manifests in the world around
us.
Yes (we can see that the way we
organize or classify knowledge is
important as it would not create a
misunderstanding towards each
other.)

Marks: 7/10

Overall Comment: The commentary is easy to understand. A concise word used. Perhaps the
introduction could be a little short to give a enough space word to relate the object and the IA prompt.