The two maps illustrate various changes in Grange park from its opening in 1920 to the present.

Overall, the park has been extensively reconfigured, and more entertainment amenities, such
as play areas and a café, have been added over time.
Visitors could enter the park either the North Gate on Arnold Avenue or the South Gate on
Eldon Street in 1920, but the park now has a new entry through the underground car park.
Meanwhile, the park's centerpiece is a fountain, with a big stage for musicians to the left. The
former has been replaced with an extensive rose garden surrounded by many chairs, while the
latter has been removed to make room for a music arena.
There used to be two rose gardens to the north and south of the stage and one to the right of
the north entrance, with several seats adjacent to it, but there is now only one on the north
side. However, The northeast corner was once home to a water plant pond, while the southeast
corner housed a greenhouse. Finally, In today's photos, they've been replaced by cafes,
children's play spaces, and water parks, respectively.
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