Alex Abbasi

Nice sharing sir...bht umda

KhUsHi
Great sharing
Zabardast

http://www.urdutehzeb.com/showthread.php/19724-%D8%AD
%D9%81%D8%A7%D8%B8%D8%AA%DB%8C-%D8%AA%D8%AF%D8%A8%DB
%8C%D8%B1

KhUsHi
Buhat umda
Zabardast
muzafar ali
good work
http://www.urdutehzeb.com/showthread.php/23397-%D8%A8%DA%91%D8%A7%D8%A2%D8%AF%D9%85%DB%8C

muzafar ali
boht hi nice sharing
http://www.urdutehzeb.com/showthread.php/28601-%DB%8C%DB%81-%DB
%81%DB%8C-%D9%81%DB%8C%D8%B5%D9%84%DB%81-%DB
%81%D9%88%D8%A7-%D8%AA%DA%BE%D8%A7

patriot19472001

Hamaisha ki tarah, Bohat hi Umdah

Dr. Sb.
http://www.urdutehzeb.com

UmerAmer
Bohat Khoob

KhUsHi
Nice sharing
Arosa Hya
awesome
http://www.urdutehzeb.com/showthread.php/13799-%D8%B5%D8%A8%D8%AD%DA%A9%D8%A7-%D8%A8%DA%BE%D9%88%D9%84%D8%A7

UmerAmer

Bohat Khoob
12-04-2014, 03:25 PM
http://www.urdutehzeb.com/showthread.php/13798-%D8%A7%D8%B3%D8%AA
%D8%AD%D9%82%D8%A7%D9%82%DB%8C-%DA
%A9%D9%B9%D9%88%D8%AA%DB%8C

UmerAmer
Bohat Khoob
http://www.urdutehzeb.com/showthread.php/13797-%D8%AA
%D8%A7%D8%B1%DB%8C%D8%AE-%DA%A9%DB%92-%D8%B3%DB%8C
%D9%86%DB%92-%D9%BE%D8%B1

BDunc
KHoob kaha
http://www.urdutehzeb.com

intelligent086

BDunc
KHoob
http://www.urdutehzeb.com/showthread.php/2858-%D9%BE%DB
%81%D9%84%D8%A7-%D9%82%D8%AF%D9%85

:
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:

Alex Abbasi
bht uda tahreer
share krne ka shukeria.

patriot19472001
Excellent......!!!
Dr. Sb, hamaisha ki tarah aik sabaq
aamooz aur dilchasp tehreer.....
Lajawaab...!!!
Ria
Behtreen,
Aap ki tehreer by shak by misal hy,
aur es k bary me main kuch kahoun
to ye soraj ko chargh dekhny k
mutradif ho ga...
share krny k liye shukria..
CaLmInG MeLoDy

baa kamaal tehreer. kisi taareef ki

mohtaaj nahi. aap ki aamad baa
barkat ho. aamen.
BDunc
Bohat khoob
illusionist
AoA Dr sub ........ aap yahan agayay
mairi umeed bur agayii , kafi dino sai
aap ko yahan invite karna chaha raha
tha laikeen bula na saka ...... laikeen
khush amdeed zah e naseeb ...
MashALLAH bohot umda tehreer hai
http://www.urdutehzeb.com/showthread.php/2067-%D8%A7%D9%86-%D9%BE
%DA%91%DA%BE

KhUsHi

Location: Karachi
http://www.urdutehzeb.com

saba
buhut alaa...............
12-06-2012
resham
aakhri khabrain anay tak..........

bohat acha likha ha

khush raheye
12-10-2012
BDunc
My beloved boy......u really have
outdone urself
!

http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/299201-%D8%A2%D8%AE
%D8%B1%DB%8C-%D8%AE%D8%A8%D8%B1%DB%8C%DA%BA%D8%A2%D9%86%DB%92-%D8%AA%DA%A9
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/299180Aakhri-khabrain-aanay-tak

http://www.bazm.urduanjuman.com/index.php?topic=10256.0

BDunc
MAsha Allah v good!
01-21-2013
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/304298-%D8%A2%D8%AE
%D8%B1%DB%8C-%DA%A9%D9%88%D8%B4%D8%B4

singer_zuhaib
Assalam o Alaikum...Dr sahb boht he
umda o La jawab o ba kamaal post
share ki or fk writer korner mai mere
khiyaal se ap se betar or pakke writer
ki tarhan koi bhi likhne wala nahe hai.
08-15-2013
intelligent086


http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/326723-%D9%85%DB%8C
%D8%B1%DB%8C-%D9%86%D8%A7%DA%86%DB%8C%D8%B2%D8%A8%D8%AF%D8%B9%D8%A7

nizamuddeen
Karachi

07-29-2015
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/368760-%D8%AD
%D9%81%D8%A7%D8%B8%D8%AA%DB%8C-%D8%AA%D8%AF%D8%A8%DB
%8C%D8%B1

nizamuddeen
Location: Karachi

07-25-2015
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/368651%D9%84%D9%85%D8%AD%D9%88%DA%BA-%DA%A9%D8%A7-%D8%AE
%D9%88%D8%A7%D8%A8

resham
Pakistan

11-09-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/359313-%D8%A2%DA%AF%DA%A9%DB%8C-%D8%A8%DA%BE%D9%B9%DB%8C

Savi Abbas
Location: UK
zabardast!!! thanks for sharing
God bless you Sir!!!
06-07-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/348802-Daein-hath-ka-khail

Unparh
Greatpaki
Bohot Khoobsoorat tehreer
janab
05-27-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/348310-Unparh

................

khwj k dwn
Assalamualeikum
MashaAllah , Bohut achi or dilchasp
tehreer he , Share krney ka bohut
shukriya
05-18-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/347643-%D8%B3%DA
%86%D8%A7%D8%A6%DB%8C-%DA%A9%DB%8C-%D8%B2%D9%85%DB%8C

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Savi Abbas
Location: UK
taswauf ke huwale se aik be inteha
khubsurat tehreer !!! thank you so
much for sharing it Sir
God bless you
05-12-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/347113-%D9%85%DB%8C
%DA%BA-%D8%A7%D8%A8%DA%BE%DB%8C%D8%A7%D8%B3%D9%84%D9%85-%DB%81%DB%8C-%D8%AA%DA%BE
%D8%A7

khwj k dwn
Astaghfirullah,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Gurbat , Jahalat Or pasmandgi ka

kesa naqsha kheencha he , !!!
05-12-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/347257-%DA
%A9%D8%B1%DB%8C%D9%85%D9%88-%D8%AF%D9%88%D9%86%D9%85%D8%A8%D8%B1%DB%8C

Savi Abbas
Location: UK
wah kiya hi haseen tehreer
hai..waqyee woh khushnaseeb log
hote hain jinhien Rab e kainaat se
eshq hota hai...thank you so much
for sharing it Sir!!!
blessings
05-08-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/346938-%D9%BE
%D9%B9%DA%BE%DB%8C-%D8%A8%D8%A7%D8%A8%D8%A7

BDunc Bohat khoob,,,,,,

04-19-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/345938%D8%A7%D9%86%D8%A7-%DA%A9%DB%8C-%D8%AA%D8%B3%DA%A9%DB
%8C%D9%86

Savi Abbas
Location: UK
very nice!!!
thanks for sharing
04-13-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/345264-jawab-ka-sakta

nizamuddeen

08-06-2015
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/368952-%D8%AD
%D8%B6%D8%B1%D8%AA-%D8%A8%DB%8C%D9%88%DB%81%D8%B4%D8%B1%DB%8C%D9%81

nizamuddeen

07-25-2015
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/368651%D9%84%D9%85%D8%AD%D9%88%DA%BA-%DA%A9%D8%A7-%D8%AE
%D9%88%D8%A7%D8%A8

Savi Abbas
Location: UK
wonderful!!! i really liked it!
thank you so much for sharing Sir!!
keep it up
blessingss

04-13-2014
http://www.friendskorner.com/forum/showthread.php/345564-%DA
%A9%D9%85%D9%84%D8%A7-%DA%A9%DB%81%DB%8C%DA%BA-%DA
%A9%D8%A7

nice sharing

http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?
f=13&t=27419

nice post....
keep sharing
http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?
f=13&t=27430

Admin

wah bohat umdah Dr. sahib... :)O

share karnay ka behad shukriya...
yunhe post kartay rahiye.
http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?
f=13&t=27453

Admin
Dr Maqsood Hasni ji, aap ki tamamtar post behad pasand ati
haiN....thanks for sharing with us...
issi tarah post kartay raha kareiN..
http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?
f=13&t=27472

Admin
how true... hum apne liye aur
dosrooN keliye kitna alag khayalaat

rakhtay haiN.. dosrooN keliye baDi

asaani se , bina sochay kah jatay
haiN.
keep sharing ...
http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?
f=13&t=27471

Admin
Bohat umdah... Allah aesay logooN ki
rassi dheeli chorh deta hai... Khush
naseeb log hotay hain jo zindagi
mein falah pa laitay haiN. Allah hum
sab ko naik hadayet de aur dosrooN
ke bajaye apne aaiboon pe nazar
rakhnay aur durst Karne ki toufeeq
ata farmaye. AMEEN
Nice post ..!!
http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?

f=13&t=27480

gIg_triangle
hamashan ki trhan lajawab sharing
hy
http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?
f=13&t=27433

gIg_triangle
Moderator
Location: Data Ke Nagri
bohat umda afsana hy ... khoob surat
sharing
keep sharing

Desert
Moderator
Location: DG KHAN

?http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php
f=13&t=27260

gIg_triangle
bohat umda ...
Desert
agree
?http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php
f=13&t=27390

Desert
yaqeenan aanchal jalta rahe ga. Agar
zameer zindaah rahe to.
http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=27389

gIg_triangle
bohat umda shring :buke:
keep sharing :buke:
Desert
Dr Maqsood Hasni,
la-javaab ,moashray ke haqaaiq par
mabni hai ye tehreer, bahut pasnd
aai.

http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=13&t=27400

gIg_triangle
hamashan ki tarhan bohat umda
sharing hy ... :b)b:

http://www.shairy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?
f=13&t=27410

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zeeshanshafi
Senior Member Pakistani
Nice 14 August is very special day ....
well nice sharing
Sat Aug 13, 2016 11:30 am

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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
aap ne tovajo farmaee is ke liay bari
bari meharbani
Sun Aug 14, 2016 8:24 am
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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Tamaam Ehliyaan e Wattan Ko 69 Wi
Jishan e Azaadi Mubbarak
Ho.Shukriya Hasni Sahib!!!!!
Sun Aug 14, 2016 7:30 pm
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aguest-ik-din-hait128168.html#ixzz4HPLHFVoS
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ch0c0
Star Member
bht bht allwww...
xactly....
khush rahen
http://humfriendz.com/showthread.php?2524%26%231670%3B%26%231608%3B%26%231583%3B
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wah ji wah nice sharing ki he
humare sath share karne ka
shukrya
muzafar ali
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ZABERDAST SHARING
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BOHAT UMDAH
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tovajo ke liay ehsan'mand hoon.

Allah aap ko khush rahe
jald hi tafsilun arz karne ki koshesh
karoon ga
lane lay janay ka kaam jabreel hi
karta hai.
aql-e-kul bhi maroof hai
adami bila aql kaam chala rara hai
natijatun jo ho raha hai samnay hai
maqsood hasni

2014 ,07 :

aql-e-kul bhi maroof hai

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muHabbatoN se muHabbat sameTne
waalaa
Khayaal aap kee maiHfil meN aaj phir
aayaa

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is mohabat aur izzat afzaee ke liay

mamnoon hoon
Allah aap ko khush rakhe
maqsood hasni
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bari bari meharbani janab

Allah aap ko salamat rakhe
maqsood hasni
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 2014 ,16 :
adaab
cholo daiar baad sahi, Allah ke ehsan
se aap se baat karnay ka mujh
na'cheez ko sharaf to hasil howa. aap
ka her lafz mujhy shakti daan karta
hai. sachi baat hai taza dam ho jata
hoon. thakan aur bimari shamari
bhool jata hoon. aap ke lafzoon se
andaza ho jata hai chalo khuch
na'kuch to kar hi raha hoon. janab
bohat bohat shukarriya.
Allah aap ko khush rakhe
maqsood hasni
2014 ,17 :,
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Kabi Waqt mila to Suljhaonga teri
Uljhanein
abhi Uljha hon bht Waqt ko Suljhane
me !!!
iqbal
Full PK Member
Wed Dec 19, 2012 2:39 am
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tovajo ke liay shukarriya janab
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:07 pm
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EyMan
5 Star Member
Nice....
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bari bari meharbani janab
Allah aap sab ko khush rakhe
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Thu Mar 14, 2013 7:26 pm
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Esa karty hn, tum py marty hn,
Hum ny yun bhi to mar he jana hy
Ibn
5 Star Member

Sun Mar 17, 2013 1:35 am

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os pe is pe marme ki baat na karain
Allah aap ko Allah par marne wali
zindgi ata farma'ay
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Sat Mar 23, 2013 9:53
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Esa karty hn, tum py marty hn,
Hum ny yun bhi to mar he jana hy,,
Ye sahi hey.....
EyMan
5 Star Member
Tue Apr 09, 2013 3:49 pm

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haan marna to hai hi kayoon'na halal
mout mara ja'ay. zindgi eak bar milti
hai is se bai'waqat kisi bare kaz ke
hawala se monh mora ja sakta hai.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:24 pm
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Very Nice and beautiful heart
touching poetry
IramShah
Lahore
Wed Jun 05, 2013 9:30 pm
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ahbaab ki tovajo ke liay ehsan'mand

hoon. Allah aap sab ko khush rakhe

Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Jun 24, 2013 8:45 pm
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nice poetry shair ki ha ap ne
thanks dear friend
77tahmina
Thu Aug 01, 2013 4:34 pm
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shukarriya janab.............
Allah aap ko khush rakhe
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab

Sat Sep 21, 2013 10:03 pm

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So Nice and more beautiful poetry. I
like your sharing. Well Done
faiza222
Senior Proud Pakistani
Pakistan
Wed Nov 13, pm
_________________
Some time it is difficult to express
ones feelings.Or to convey what is in
the heart inside.Sometime the other
side do not conceive what you want
to convey.But it is correct to say what
you want say:
I K QAZI
Moderator

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Thu May 29, 2014 7:27 pm
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Thu Jul 24, 2014 9:36 pm

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Hamesha hi nahi rehte kabhi chehre

naqabon main
Sabhi kirdar khulte hain kahani
khatm hone par
mobi_loger
islamabad
Thu Sep 11, 2014 3:53 pm
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khoob
atay rahiay aur kuch na'kuch zaroor
share karte rahiay
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:40 pm
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bohot nice Dr saab,,

n Mobi yu wer also v nice,,,,,,keep

sharing,,
Ibn
5 Star Member
Sun Sep 14, 2014 7:09 pm
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is khasusi tovajo ke liay ehsan'mand
hoon
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Sep 22, 2014 9:12 pm
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boht umda sharing Smile
Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member

Thu Jan 08, 2015 11:27 am

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Wah g Wah bht zaberdast k yah hamy
Poetry daikny ko mil rahe hn.... Razz
doragames
Islamabad
Tue Oct 13, 2015 8:37
http://www.forumpakistan.com/kis-monh-set114540.html#ixzz4HPL2FmUT

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Dr.Hasni aap kaa qalaam behtreen
hai, dheron daad lekin Janaab kitne
log isse parh sakte hain yeh mujhe
maaloom nahin. Main khud agar text
books kee tarah se likhaa ho to urdu
asaanee se parh saktaa hoon warnaa
zaraa mushkil hotee hai.
icon_flower

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surindarn
September 26, 2014
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/
urdu-poets/%DA%A9%D8%B3%D9%85%D9%86%DB%81%D8%B3%DB%92-t117236.0.html
Dil kay goshoon par
Sagar pi kar
Her qatra piyas somondar
Palkoon ka sawun
Janay kab barsay ga
Faraat ka damun
Sholay lay kay bhaga hai
Sahil shakti kis say mangay?!

Mothi band kar lo

Palkoon kay os par
Ratoon kay sapnay
Suraj ki aankhoon main
Bheek kay kokray
Kali zulfoon kay mundar
Maskan hain kali jiba waloon kay
Janay say pehlay
Aankhoon main dhonwaan bhar lo
Chand ka chehra
Rawan ki bhagti lay kar
Mosa kay koon say
Dil kay goshoon par
Raban hi rab likh raha hai
2009 ,30 :,

janaab Hasni SaaHeb: aadaab!

aap kee naz^meN dekheeN. maashaa
Allah aap bohat likh rahe haiN.
meHnat aur shauq ke saath
mut^aali,a'h bhee mil jaaYe to teHreer
meN nikhaar baRh jaataa hai. apnee
taKhleeqaat par meree daad qubool
keejiYe. is ke ba's do teen baateN
kehne kee ijaazat chaahataa hooN.
buraa nah maaneN. in baatoN se aap
kee qadr-afzaayee maqSood hai,
tanqeed naheeN.
ek saath itnee bohat se naz^meN
lagaane se log in ko dekh naheeN
paate haiN. kam likhiYe aur dostoN
ko paRhne aur raaYe dene kaa
mauqa' deejiYe. warnah faa,idah kam
ho gaa. doosree baat yeh keh Roman

Urdu kaa koyee saadah aur achhaa

niz^aam apnaa leejiYe aur usee ko
ista'maal keejiYe. maujoodah shakl
meN aap kee teHreer paRhne aur
samajhne meN diqqat hotee hai.
teesre yeh keh likh kar Khud bhee
paRh liyaa keejiye taa.k Ghalat^iyaaN
kam se kam hoN. aur sab se aaKhir
meN yeh a'rZ^ hai keh agar naz^m
kaa markazee Khayaal apne Zehn
meN saaf rakheN aur us kee
adaa,igee meN waZ^aaHat kaa
ehitmaam kareN to sab ko ziyaadah
faa,idah ho gaa.
maiN is Khat^ ke tawassut^ se apne
deegar dostoN se bhee iltimaas
kartaa hooN keh woh Dr Hasni aur
doosre nau-waarid dostoN kaa
Anjuman meN istiqbaal kareN aur un
kee taKhleeqaat par chand alfaaz^

hee sahee lekin kuchh likh diyaa

kareN. isee t^araH chiraaGh se
chiraaGh jaltaa hai. ham ek doosre se
Ghaafil hoN ge to yeh chiraaGh bujh
jaaYe gaa.
2009 ,01 :
Sarwar A. Raz
http://www.bazm.urduanjuman.com/i
ndex.php?topic=3347.0
Raam bhali karay ga
Hath kay badlay hath
Khon kay badlay khon
Jan kay badlay jan
Adoo nay
Magar loot liya hai

Kis say faryaad karain

Wohi monsaf howa hai
Jis kay hath main pathar
Baghal man khanjar
Maqola yah baqi hai
Char ja baita suli
Raam bhali karay ga
,2009 ,01 :
mukarramee Hasni SaaHeb: aadaab!
aap ko UrduAnjuman meN dekh kar
masarrat huyee. Khush-aamadeed!
yaqeen hai keh yahaaN ke dost aur
maaHaul aap ko pasand aaYeN ge aur
aap apnee shirkat se Urdu kaa kaam
baRhaane meN hamaaree madad
kareN ge. shukriyah.
aap kee muKhtaSar naz^m dekhee.

aaj kal ke Haalaat par achhaa

tabSirah hai. aur is Haalat kaa koyee
Hal bhee naz^ar naheeN aataa. aap
ke Khayaalaat achhe haiN aur in kaa
iblaaGh bhee Zarooree hai. bayaan
meN behtaree kee gunjaa,ish hai.
meraa Khayaal hai keh aap ko sab se
pehle yeh sochnaa ho gaa keh kaun
see Sinf meN likhaa jaaYe, ya'nee
paaband naz^m, aazaad naz^m yaa
nacree naz^m? us ke ba'd unheeN
uSooloN par likhaa aur parkhaa jaa
saktaa hai.
Anjuman meN aate rahiYe. hameN
aap kee Z^aroorat hai. aur apne
dostoN ko bhee da'wat deejiye.
shukriyah.
Sarwar A. Raz
2009 ,01 :,

http://www.bazm.urduanjuman.com/i
ndex.php?topic=3369.0
PALKOON PAR SHAAM
Godaz palkoon par shaam
gozari
Her mosam yaad ka nishter
Her subh Sehra ka pather
(Suraj) Binaee ka mamba
Aakhain kho baitha
Her Aasha zakhmi zakhmi
Her nagama
Izraeli Israfili
Khoon main bhiga Aanchal
Gunga ka

Her rasta
Chup ka kaidi
Darya kinaray
Moun daikhay hain
Bai'aab nadi main
Gulab ki kashain
Pani pani
Palkain,
Sanpoon kay ghar
Janein kidher
Palkoon ki shaam
Her shaam par bhari hai
*********
bahut umdah Janaab, dheron
daad.

surindarn
December 08, 2014,
http://www.yoindia.com/shayari
adab/urdu-poets/palkoon-parReply
Mujh ko mun mandar main saja
lo
Kah aankh darichoon say
Qos-e-qaza kay rangoon main
dhal kar
Ganga jal main dhol kar
Baharoon kay mosam jhankain
Khursheed shabad
Jiwan dharti ko binaee
bakhshain

Tairi aaghosh main palti

moskanain
Mairi tairi mirti ko
Amarta kay bardan main
tankain
Mujh ko mun mandar main saja
lo
Kah Kaam Daiva
Her bar kab,
Khush bahti ka mangal sutar
Golab galo main rakhta hai
Kali ratoon main
Hontoon ki hidat bharta hai
Mujh ko mun mandar main saja
lo
Kah tairay aankh darichoon say

Baharoon kay mosan jhankain

***
Bohat khoob Dr Maqsood ji...
honeyrose
March 29, 2009, 08:53:11 AM

Good One Hasni Ji !!!!!

March 30, 2009,AM
http://www.yoindia.com/shayari
adab/shairi-e-zindagi/aankhdarichoon-say-t44935.0.html
Sheh ki lathi
Anarkali kay
Diwaroon main chonnay ka

Jab bhi mosam aata hai

Aas kay mosam mar jatay hain
Her jatay hain
Chand aur suraj
Aaksh aur dharti
Ziast kay sab rang
Phikay par jatay hain
Kal ki mang sajanay ko
Ishq phir bhi zinda rehta hai
Dukh sukh sehta hai
Yah khail shazadoon ka hai
Shazaday kab martay hain
Sheh ki lathi
Anarkali kay sar par
Mandlati rehti hai

Kamzoor ozoo par

Sab mosam bhari hotay hain
***
accha likha hai aapne Dr. ji
Roja
March 30, 2009, AM
***
Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji,./
Nice One.
Azeem Aarzu
March 30, 2009, AM
***
aap ahbaab maira sarmaya
hain.
Allah Sahib aap sab ko kush a

Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 30, 2009, AM
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/sheh-ki-lathi-t44994.0.html

*********
Shaam bhi mairi hai
Tairay jivan ki her nikhri subh
Dar mairay par, sajda kartay
gozri
Khushoon ki sari kalyaan
Mairay qadmoon main dhar kar
Eak naam maira tairay hisay
aaya
Yah kali ratain
Khoof par bhari ratain

Damun main tairay rakh kar

Aasha ki mirti ka
Kayoon saman karoon
Tairi subh mairay mathay ka
jhomar
Tairi shaam maira oran hai
Tairi subh bhi mairi thi
Tairi shaam bhi mairi hai
***
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai
aapne..
{Angel}
March 30, 2009, AM
***
Bahut khoob Applause
Roja

March 30, 2009AM

***
aap donoon k liay mairay dil
main bari izzat aur ehtaram hai
Eshvar aap donoon ki her
kamna puri
Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 30, 2009AM
***
Nysha
wah wah very nice gain.
superb!
March 30, 2009, PM
***
mohabat aur itna piyar dainay
k badlay mein na'cheez kiya

day sakta hoon.

mairay pas duaoon k siwa kiya
hai?!
Allah sahib aap ko barkat day.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 30, 2009, PM
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/shaam-bhi-mairi-hai-t44996.0.html

Mujhy ik Khaab likhna hai

Mujhy ik khaab likhna hai
Aankhoon main mahtaab likhna
hai
Aankhain hi kiya
Sar Bil ki tajori main para hai

Mairay purkhoon ki yah

kamaee
Os kay hath kaisay aaee
Mairay kisi apnay nay
Apni zarorat kay liay
Kuch takoon main
Kahein os ko na day aaya ho
Pochna to ho ga
Maira sar borida jism
Mohtasib tak jaay kaisay
Faraz ka qaraz chokaay kaisay
Kiya sonay, sonaay kaisay
Aaj baishak,
Mal-o-manal aziz rakhta hai
Apni aankhoon kay evaz

Day sakta hoon mein

Khizr ki chaap
Jo ab mairi zarorat nahain
Mujhy ik khaab likhna hai
Aankhoon main mahtaab likhna
hai
***
Nice One Again Maqsood Ji,.
Azeem Aarzu
March 30, 2009, AM
***
Wah wah dr. sb. aap bahut
accha likhte ho. Daad kabul
kijiyega. and be regular.
Roja
March 30, 2009,AM

***
Once again so nice to read such
lines from you..
You write really well.. Keep
writing plz
{Angel}
March 30, 2009,AM
***
lafzoon kay moamla main kam
hi kamzoor parta hoon likin aaj
janay lafz kahaan gay kah
shukarriya ada karnay k qabil
bhi nahain raha.
aap sab maira asasa hain.
Eshvar aap sab ko hamaisha
salamat rakhy.
Dr Maqsood Hasni

March 30, 2009, AM

***
Wow Very nice Dr Ji. kya khoob
likha hai. keep writing....
Nysha
March 30, 2009,AM
{Angel}
March 30, 2009,AM
***
Khoobsurat Alfaazon ko
hamesha taarifein hi milti hia...
{Angel}
March 30, 2009, 12:00:57 PM

***
shukarreya janab

Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 31, 2009, AM
***
Bahoot khoob Dr. Hasni ji!
Rau
March 31, 2009, AM
***
tovajo k liay,
bari bari mehar'bani janab.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 31, 2009, AM
http://www.yoindia.com/shayari
adab/shairi-e-zindagi/mujhy-ekkhaab-likhna-hai-t44995.0.html
Bai'nawa dastak

Reet bot ki shanasaee mangay

Ishq karbala si aabla paee
mangay
Hosn talu kay dosh
Bala ka golnosh
Chasham bakaf nikla
Zist nay hathoon hath liya
Dhoop main saya-e-shajar
tehra
Koee ossay namood-e-sahar
samjha
Wo paikar-e-firdous
Aankh kay sab tarkash
Jo sath laya tha
Kab chala paya tha

Apnay saay say lot giya

Aaena patharoon say
Apni kichioon ki binaee mangay
Lafzoon ki bainawa dastak
Fakhtaoon say bairiyaee
mangay
Parsaee mangay
Darya baresh
Sehra badloon say rihaee
mangay
Zist ka hr naqsh
Sila-e-bairadaee mangay
Reet bot ki shanasaee mangay
Ishq karbala se aabla pae
mangay
***

bahoot khoob Dr. ji behad

umada likha hai aapne... kadi
gehrai hai isme
Nysha
March 31, 2009, AM
***
tovajo farmae k liay
shukar'gozar hoon.
Allah aap ko kush rakhay.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 31, 2009, AM
http://www.yoindia.com/shayari
adab/shairi-e-zindagi/baibawadastak-t45002.0.html
*********

Mein jo bhi hoon

Mein jo bhi hoon
Is say kiya
Chaand aur suraj ki kirnoon par
Maira bhi to haq hai
Dharti ka her mosam
Khuda ka her ghar
Maira bhi to hai
Quran ho kah Gita
Romrain ka her qissa
Baebal ka her warqa
Garanth ka her panna
Maira bhi to hai
Taqseem ka dar

Jab bhi khulta hai

Laat kay daftar ka her munshi
Barood ka malik
Parchi ka mangat
Taqseem ka dar band kar daita
hai
Daftari molaan kay monh main
Kheer ka chancha rehta hai
Pandat aur Father
Madrassay ka mashtar
Haan naan kay pul par baithay
Totay ko fakhta kehtay hain
Dadgar kay dar ka sawali
Pani balota hai
Kamtar say bhi kamtar

Kalaj ka monshi
Jivan'dan hawa ko tarsay
Gholamoon kay sum pitay
Barshoon ki zad main hai
Sab acha ka tilk saja kar
Sofaid ghar kay chamchay
Toni kay karchay
Taqat kay pait main
Korbal korbal kartay yah kiray
Ajmal ka monh charatay hain
Raam aur Esa kay bool
Maical Jaksan ki phorti
Kareshma ki chosti main
Rol khol gay hain
Masael ki rori par baitha

Mein gonga behra

Zakhmi zakhmi
Madinay walay ki rah daikhay
hoon
Ali Ali pokaray hoon
Nanak say bhudhi'maan
Lakchaman aur Baha say Veer
Talashay hoon
Mein jo bhi hoon
Is say kiya
Mithay boloon par
Maira bhi to haq hai
*********
Aap ki feelings aapki
soch...bohot hi umdah... Bohot
hi Khoob Hasni Ji

Celmira
March 31, 2009, AM
*********
khasusi tovajo k liay
ehsan'mand hoon.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 31, 2009, AM
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/mein-jo-bhi-hoon-t45014.0.html

*********
Sonny main aaya hai
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Suraj ab sharaq say othta hai?!
Sofaid ghar kay mundar ka

bout
Kis Mahmood nay tora hai?!
Os ki gardan ka sarya
Kis Tipu nay phora hai?!
Pound satarling dallor
Ropay kay dou miltay hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Baiwa ko tok milta hai,
Woh pait bhar khati hai?!
Ghareeb ki bitya
Doli charti hai?!
Jo jivan dan karay
Wo daroo ki shishi

Moft main milti hai?!

Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Mosa ho kah Esa
Girjay aur Haikal kay zindan
say
Mokt howay hain?!
Budh Ram Baha
Kah Nanak kay pairo hoon
Ya phir
Chirad Shrif kay basi
Apna jivan jitay hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain

Taraqi kar gay hain

Gotay aur Bali
Taigor tay Jami
Sue Feng aur Shelle
Sab kay tehray hain?!
Molaan Pandat aur Gijay ka
waris
Insanoon ko insanoon kay
kaam aanay ki kehta hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Shair aur bakri
Eak ghaat pay pani pitay hain,
Eak kach main rehtay bastay
hain?!

Saithoon ki basti main

Mil bant kar khanay ki charcha
hai?!
Khail rishwat ka nakaam howa
hai?!
Monsaf,
Kayoonkar Iman Quran ki
kehta hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Mun tan ka waris
Tan mun ka bhaidi
Jab bhi tehray ga
Jivan ka her sukh
Qadmoon ki thokar

Ambar kay os par

Insan ka ghar ho ga
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
*********
Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji
Celmira
April 01, 2009, AM
*********
wow Very nice! bhaoot khoob
likha hai aapne.
Nysha
April 01, 2009, AM
*********

Nice One Again Maqsood Ji,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
Pardhne Ka Mazaa Milta
Rahega,.
Nice One,.
Azeem Aarzu
April 01, 2009, AM
*********
aap sahiban ki mohabat mairay
liay bari anmool hai.
Ehvar ki kirpa aap sab par bani
rahay
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Reply #4 on: April 01, 2009,
09:31:07 AM
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/sonnay-main-aaya-hai-t45018.0.html

*********
Mein janta hoon
Tumharay aanay ki aasha
Din bhar,
Mujh ko zinda rakhti hai
Suraj kay sath
Mein bhi mar jata hoon
Suraj ki mirtu par
Gharab lahoo se obalta hai
Talu kay sath hi
Yaas ki lahad say
Aas,
Mujhy otha lati hai
Mairi aankhain
Mairi palkain

Jivan ki dehleez par

Saj sanwar kay
Baith jati hain
Mein janta hoon
Jab tum
Mairay kochay say
Gozro gay
Tumharay aanay ka wo pal
Mout ka pal ho ga
Tumharay naaanay ka
Yah pal
Sadyoon say
Jivan aur mirti kay bich
Diwar-e-chin ban kar
Hael chala aata hai

Tumharay aanay ki ommeed

Din bhar
Mujh ko zinda rahti hai
*********
sajid_ghayel
Bohat khoob Dr. Saheb aap ek
bilkul naye andaz me apne
kalam pesh karte hain, jo
kabile tareef hain. Aapki ek
ghazal padhne ki badi ummeed
hain....
Reply #1 on: April 01, 2009,
05:43:12 AM
*********
Wow .. Lovely Thumbs UP
Roja
April 01, 2009, AM

*********
Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji
Celmira
April 01, 2009, AM
*********
Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji, Nice
One,.
Azeem Aarzu
April 01, 2009, 07 AM
*********
aap dost mujhy apni yaad main
rakhtay hain yah mairay liay
bohat bara izaz hai.
Allah aap sab ko kuch rakhy
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 01, 2009, 09:39:08 AM

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/mein-janta-hoon-t45032.0.html

*********
Sadyoon say
Ankh somondar
Jaisay tabeer say oljha khaab
Paimanay say lipti sharaab
Lehrain samait kar soya
somondar
Chop main khoya somondar
Magar bala ka chasham shanas
Khoon main dobi piyas
Dam toorti aas
Shanakht odas odas
Kinaray somondar kay
Pursakoon sahi

Magar teh main samri ka

bhachra
Aur saleeb-e- Essa
Ai kash koee aaay
Bond bond piyas laay
Rooh ki bhook mitaay
Kirishan kay geet sonaay
Magar boti boti anna ki
maslihat ki qabr
Koch kay qaflay kohlu kay baiel
Baihimat hoslay
Zindgi ka qraz hain
Sadyoon say karbala
Odasi ka somondar
*********
wah wah,

Bahut hi khoob... Applause

{Angel}
April 03, 2009, AM
*********
Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji,.
Azeem Aarzu
April 03, 2009, AM
*********
banda'navazi k liay aap donoon
ka shukarreya.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 03, 2009, AM
*********
bahoot khoob DR. Ji
Nysha

 April 03, 2009, AM

*********
bari bari meharbani janab.
April 03, 2009, PM
Dr Maqsood Hasni
http://www.yoindia.com/shayaa
ridab/shairi-e-zindagi/sadyoonsay-t45050.0.html
*********
Teh karnay say pehlay
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay
hain
Zara sochna
Dil say niklo gay kaisay

Yah bhi kah

Tairay mun aangan main
Mairi mohabatoon kay dairay
hain
Soch ki sirioon par
Wafa kay naqash-e-marmarein
Phailay howay hain
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Zara sochna
Rastay anjanay hain
Kahein iqrar kay somandar ki
gehraeyaan
Kahein bainoqi inkar ki
khaeyaan
Bhoji aankhoon kay sitaray
Dohaee dain gay

Lot aaoo
Tum kab doo rastoon kay rahi
ho
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Zara sochna
Mairay baichain ratjagay
Taira rasta rokain gay
Damun say pakrain gay
Chopa kar cehra tum apna
Mairi mohabatoon kay suraj say
Kayoonkar nikal pao gay?!
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay
hain
Zara sochna
Mairi bahoon main aakash si

vosatain hain
Tairay thakay qadmoon ko
Mairay hath sehlaein gay
Tairi garam sansoon ko
Aanch jazboon ko
Mairi chahat kay mashroob
Pinay ko milain gay
Phir kehta hoon
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay
hain
Zara sochna
Kah ehal-e-wafa ka itbaar baqi
rahay
*********
Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji

Celmira
April 03, 2009, PM
*********
janab ki tovajo aur mohabat k
liay dil-o-jan say ehsan'mand
hoon.
Allah aap ko salamat rakhy.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 04, 2009, AM
*********
wah wah kya baat hai Dr. ji.
behad umda likha hai . keep
writing ......
Nysha
April 04, 2009, AM
*********

mein janab ki tovajo mohabat

aur hosla'afzae k liay
shukar'gozar hoon.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 04, 2009, AM
*********
Bahut bahut khoobsurat shayri
hai, har ek alfaaz dilko chhu
jaata hai...
{Angel}
April 04, 2009, AM
*********
bari bari mehar'bani janab.
Allah aap ko kush rakhy.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 04, 2009, AM

http://www.yoindia.com/shayari
adab/shairi-e-zindagi/tehkarnay-say-pehlayt44993.0.html
*********
Ik Pal
Ik pal nay
Aaksh aur dharti ko
Ik dhagay main bon kay
Rang dhanak ochalay
Doja pal
Jo bhik tha pehlay pal ki
Khisay say otra
Mathay ki raikha tehra
Kirpa aur dan ka pal

Phun chakar ka mara

Girta hai monh kay bal
Silwat say pak sahi
Phir bhi,
Hantal say karwa
Otran ka phal
Ulfat main,
Kuch day kar
Panay ki icha
Hatam say hai chal
Gairat say aari
Halaq main tapka
wo qatra,
Soqrat ka zahir
Na Ganga jal

Mehar mohabat say bharpoor

Neem ka pani
Na karwa na khara
Wo to
Aab-e-zam zam
Os main Rehman ka bal
Her farzana
Ehad say mokti chahay
Her diwana
Ehad ka bandi
Mar mitnay ki batain
Taltatay rehna
Kal ta kal
Jab bhi
Pal ki bigri kal

Dar Nanak kay baitha

Baikal, baikal
*********
Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji
Celmira
March 29, 2009, PM
*********
Good 1 Hasni ji
Roja
March 29, 2009, PM
*********
Nce one hasni ji
jannatjahan
March 29, 2009, PM
*********

Great, Hasni Ji !!!!!!!!!

karndhar
March 30, 2009, AM
*********
-RahimMarch 30, 2009, AM
Nice one Hasni jee
*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 30, 2009, AM
aap sab mairay liay bari
maniviat rakhtay hain.
mein aap sab ki mohabat ka
qaraz'dar hoon.
Palan'har aap sab ko kush
rakhay

*********
Nysha
March 30, 2009, AM
Very NICe Hasni Ji
*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 30, 2009, AM
bari bari meharbani janab
*********
Pooja
April 06, 2009, PM
bahoot khoob Hasni ji
*********
tovajo kay liay ehsan'mand
hoon.

Eshvar aap par apni kirpa

banay rakhy.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 06, 2009, PM
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/ek-pal-t44961.0.html

*********
Jagtay rehn
Choor tairay sohaag ki choriaan
chora na lay
Jagtay rehna
Chanda ki koe mast kiran
aankhoon ki masti
Hontoon ki surkhi
Chora na lay

Jagtay rehna
Hawa ka koee jhonka
Tairay badan, tairay cehray
Haya-o-taqadas kay sab
reshtay
Apnay napak lams say
Choor choor na kar day
Jagtay rehna
Shab kay pechlay pehar ki
anaetoon main
Khuda tujh ko bhi shareek kar
lay
Jagtay rehna
Gholab chanda ki ragoon say
Sari shabnum nachoor na lay
Jagtay rehna

Raqeeb tujh ko tairi

mohabatoon say
Mehroom na kar day
Jagtay rehna, Mairay dost
jagtay rehna
Jaagna hi zindgi,
Jagtay hi aazad hain
*********
sajid_ghayel
April 13, 2009, AM
Bohat khoob Doctor Saheb...
*********
aap ki mohabat aap ki tovajo
mairay liay bari maneviat ki
hamil hai.
Allah aap ko kush rakhy

Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 13, 2009, AM
*********
Wah wah Dr. Ji wah kya baat
hai. bahoot khoob likha hai.
Nysha
April 13, 2009, AM
*********
janab nay apni mohabat anaet
aur tovajo main rakha,
yahhi maira hasal hai.
Eshvar ki daya aur kirpa aap
par bani rahay.
issi tara apni yaad main
rakheay
Dr Maqsood Hasni

April 13, 2009, AM

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/jagtay-rehna-t45333.0.html

*********
Laaj
Fart-e-Jajbaat main jab tum nay
Anabi hont apnay
Hontoon par mairay rakh diay
Zidagi!
Mein to
Oon lamhoon ki laaj nibha raha
hoon
*********
Azeem Aarzu
April 17, 2009,
Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji, Nice
One,.
*********

Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 17, 2009, PM
shukarreya janab
*********
Rajesh Harish
April 17, 2009, PM
Nice one Hasni Ji
*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 17, 2009, PM
shukarriya janab
Eshvar ki kirpa aap par bani
rahay
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/laag-t45454.0.html

*********

Yaksaan
Taqat ki khudaee
Odher ho kah edhar
Kha jati hai
Reham aur kirpa kay shabad
Ozv-e-zaeef par
Yaksaan rehtay hain
Khizaan aur bahar kay mosam
*********
khamosh_aawaaz
April 18, 2009, 01:02:06 AM
VERY NICE LINES ....DR SB
K_A

*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 18, 2009, AM
janab ki es tovajo aur mohabat
k liay mumnoon hoon.
*********
Nysha
April 18, 2009, AM
Very Nice Dr , Maqsood Ji!
*********
Tanha(Saurabh)
Maqbool Shayar
April 18, 2009, 10:15:17 AM
bohat khoob Hasni ji!
*********

Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 18, 2009, AM
janab ki tovajo nay maira hosla
boland kiya hai.
Allah Sahib aap ko kush rakhy.
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/yaksaan-t45460.0.html

*********
Sanjh
Bahmi ehtaram say nibh rahi
hai
Bailuos sanjh hai hamari
Jab woh roth jatay hain
Hum mana laitay hain
Hum rothain to,

Raqeeb ki ban aati hai

Sar-e-Mehfal tohein kay dar say
Hum khud hi man jatay hain
*********
Azeem Aarzu
April 17, 2009, PM
Nice One Again Maqsood Bhai,.
*********
Rajesh Harish
April 17, 2009, PM
Nice one Hasni Ji
*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 17, 2009, PM
navazesh,

meharbani janab
*********
khamosh_aawaaz
April 18, 2009, AM
NICE LINES............DR SB.
*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 18, 2009, AM
shukarreya janab
*********
Nysha
April 18, 2009, AM
Very Nice Dr, Ji! Keep
writing................
*********

Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 18, 2009, AM
janab nay hamaisha mairi hosla
afzae farmae hai.
nahain janta aap ka kin alfaz
main shukariya ada karoon.
Eshvar aap ko her moamla
main safal rakhy.
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/sanjh-t45455.0.html

*********
Taraqqi
Tariki mehman bani ojaloon ki
April 19, 2009, AM
*********

wah ji wa kiya baat hai.

saaz_haldwanvi
April 21, 2009, PM
*********
ye mehman sahar hone tak hai
maqsood se mash-hoor hone
tak hai
a-daab !
[saaz haldwanvi]
*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 21, 2009, PM
aap ki mohabat aur pazirie k
sabab kuch na'kuch qalam say
nikal jata hai.

dua hai,
aap par sada Hazrat Barana ji
ki kirpa ka hon barsta rahay
aur kushaan aap ka moqadar
rahain.
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/taraqqi-t45485.0.html

*********
Door ofaq main
Jin ko hum pojtay thay
Ramooz-e-khuda'wandi say
naaashna niklay
Mairay vote nay
Masnd-e-khudaee bakhshi thi
jin ko
Aaj subh hi say

Door ofaq main

Roposh ho gay hain
*********
khamosh_aawaaz
April 19, 2009, AM
KYAA BAAT HAI DR SB.............
NETAAON KAA YAHI HAAL HAI
*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 19, 2009, AM
shukariya janab
Eshvar aap ko her moamaly
main safl rakhy.
*********
Tanha(Saurabh)
Maqbool Shayar

April 20, 2009, AM

bohat khoob kaha aapne hasni
sahab.....
*********
Celmira
April 20, 2009, AM
Nice one Hasni Ji
*********
Dr Maqsood Hasni
April 20, 2009, AM
aap donoon dostoon ki es
mohabat aur inyat k liay
mumnoon hoon.
Allah Sahib aap ko kush rakhy.
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-ezindagi/door-ofaq-main-t45484.0.html

*********
Ab main tujhay
Ab main tujhay tairi ijazat say
sochta hoon
Tairi Aankh ka kajal abhi phela
nahain
Tairay boloon ki kalyaan abhi
jowaan hain
Kalaee kay talaee churay ki
khanak
Kab kal say joda hoee hai
Kuch bhi to badla nahain
Tairi donyan main koee aur tha
Main yah kaisay maan loon

Tu to wohi hai
Jis nay mairy soch kay
darwazay par
Sabr ka phera batha rakha hai
Sochna yah hai
Kis karda jurm ki wo saza thi
Kah tu mujh say khafa thi
Ya yah koee annokhi adda thi?
Tu kayoon mujh say bai'parwa
thi
Tum nay mujh ko sochnay
nahain diya
Apni zaat kay jaziroon ko
khojnay nahain diya
Band kowaroon kay pechay
Tujhy sochnay ki Aarzoo ka

chehra
Kabhi jita tha kabhi marta tha
Main sochay hoon?!
Kaisay tum ko scoh sakoon ga
Mairi itni basaat kahaan
Tum wahaan ho jahaan main
nahain
Main zarra tu paharoon ka
badsha
Main zamein tu Aasmaan
Haan itni tashfi zaroor hai
Aakash ki shanakhat zamein
hai
Main tairi shanakhat hoon
Aur tu mairy honay ka saboot
Ab main tujhay tairi ijazat say

sochta hoon
Mon May 31, 2010 10:30 pm
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Alex9090
5 Star Member
It is a nice one, doc. Did you
write it??
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
punjab
bari bari meharbani janab.
ji haan,
yah satrain mairay hi qalam se
nikli thein.
Tue Jun 01, 2010 2:12 pm
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Alex9090
5 Star Member
That makes it even more
brilliant. Very touching and not
a bit of it amateurish, NICE!
Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:42 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
aap k qlam se nikle her lafz ne
mujhy itabar diya hai. achy aur
khoob'surat log achi aur
khoob'surat baat karte hain.
ab to dil chahta hai aisi hi aur
chizain paish nkaroon.
Allah aap ko kush rakhy

Wed Jun 02, 2010 1:51 pm

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Aatish
Forum Family Member
V.nICe ShArIng G.!!!
Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:38 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
tovajo k liay ehsan'mand hoon
Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:23 pm
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Sohni Kurri
5 Star Member

Location: Pakistan, Norway

zabardast!!!
Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:05 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
aap sab kitne ache aur
mohabat kane wale log ho.
Allah aap sab ko kush rakhy.
Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:41 pm
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Sohni Kurri
5 Star Member
Pakistan, Norway
Dr Maqsood Hasni wrote:

aap sab kitne ache aur

mohabat kane wale log ho.
Allah aap sab ko kush rakhy.
Ameen ,, or ap bhi hamesha
khush rahe Razz
http://www.forumpakistan.com/ab-main-tujhaytairi-ijazat-say-sochta-hoont53362.html#ixzz4HOyCdYzl

--

http://www.forumpakistan.com/ghazal-

t95391.html#ixzz4HOzlaOWB

Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:36 pm

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Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
bht ala... Smile
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shukarriya janab
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:11 pm
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mayosi ki had pe shair ne tapte
tawway pe beth k jalte dil ki barras
nikalte khayalat k waseeh tar kichao
tanao k mahol me kuch likha he wo
share kar raha hon Laughing

Yeh sach hai ke tujhe main kehta tha

zindagi apni
Aur aaj tujhse mein bezaar hoon
zindagi ki tarah
Laughing lol ( had darje k jhoote hote
hein kuch shair )
Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:55 pm
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shukarriya janab
bohat khoob kaha aap ne
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Tue Feb 05, 2013 6:49 pm

http://www.forumpakistan.com/sarab-ka-jangalt95371.html#ixzz4HOzzllke

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Sun Feb 10, 2013 7:47 pm

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!!!Nice one
I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Wed Feb 13, 2013 4:23 pm
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tovjo ke liay ehsan'mand hoon

Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
http://www.forumpakistan.com/muska-ke-batan-set95631.html#ixzz4HP07orwo

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Wed Jan 30, 2013 7:12 pm

_________________
bht umdaa Smile
Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
Sun Feb 03, 2013 11:43 pm

_________________
bari bari meharbani
janab.................................
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:13 pm
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dhobte soraj jesi kuch ankhien b hoti
hena Dr. Saheb ? kabi dekhi hein ?
aap to aksar mareezon ki ankhon me
dekhte hongein lolzz Laughing
Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:58 pm
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*% h@d w%*
5 Star Member
Very nice sharings Smile
Tue Feb 05, 2013 1:41 pm
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aap ahbab ki mohabatoon ke liay
ehsan'mand hoon
Allah aap sab ko khush rakhe
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
Tue Feb 05, 2013 6:45 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
I K QAZI wrote:

!!!Aap Samet
bari bari meharbani janab..............
Wed Feb 06, 2013 2:24 pm
http://www.forumpakistan.com/surajdoob-raha-hait95319.html#ixzz4HP0Fq1vz
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Sat Dec 31, 2011

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sanaahamed
Full PK Member
Pakistan
Very very nice that is great.....
Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:28 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
aap ne tovajo farmaee, es ke liay aap
ki bari bari meharbani.
Allah aap ko kush rakhe.
Tue Feb 21, 2012 12:33 pm
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http://www.forumpakistan.com/faqiro

un-ki-basti-maint84278.html#ixzz4HP0VBlVw

Sun Feb 10, 2013 7:51 pm

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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Dear newbee!! We are very mature
people here so we can go along with
it. But we always keep this forum as a
familly forum there4 I think that this
type of poetry is too blunt.There are
some poetry; topics,conversation etc
which are too sensitive in its nature. I
m requesting you to please realise
this.

Thu Mar 14, 2013 8:27 pm

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jaribhai
Senior Proud Pakistani
Karachi
Yeh newbie to lagta hai doctor sahib
se koi purana intiqam lena chah rahi
hain Razz
Thu Mar 14, 2013 10:06 pm
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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Dr.Sahib Bhi Saadhay/Shareef aadmi
Hain K Aisi "Tavajo" l liye Bhi
Shukriya Adaa Kar Rahe Hain. Rolling
Eyes Rolling Eyes Laughing Ye Tou

Khud Tavajo Dilao Notice hai! !!

Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
Tue Mar 19, 2013 3:16 pm
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Ibn
5 Star Member
I K QAZI wrote:
Dr.Sahib Bhi Saadhay/Shareef
aadmi Hain K Aisi "Tavajo" l liye Bhi
Shukriya Adaa Kar Rahe Hain. Rolling
Eyes Rolling Eyes Laughing Ye Tou
Khud Tavajo Dilao Notice hai! !!
Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
Hahaha lolz
Samaj m ye nahi ata, k is ko kesy

samjhaain??
Ye pagli phool or titli ki baaten q nahi
karti,,
Dar'e'weh'shat py har dam q ye dery
daal rakhti hy??
M kehta hun, sambhal ja tu,
K jis rasty py tu nikli hy wo rasta
bhayanak hy,
Tujhy barbad kr dy ga, tujhy ye noch
daaly ga,
Kahin esa naho, ye zindegani ik
nasoor ban jay,
K fir tu moat jo chahy or wo bhi na
aay,
M kehta hun sambhal ja tu,,
Tue Mar 19, 2013 4:06 pm
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jaribhai
Senior Proud Pakistani
Karachi
Reply with quote
I K QAZI wrote:
Dr.Sahib Bhi Saadhay/Shareef
aadmi Hain K Aisi "Tavajo" l liye Bhi
Shukriya Adaa Kar Rahe Hain. Rolling
Eyes Rolling Eyes Laughing Ye Tou
Khud Tavajo Dilao Notice hai! !!
Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
Hahahahahaha,,, doctor sahib mature
hain,, unpe aisi chezain asar nahin
karteen!!!
Tue Mar 19, 2013 4:13 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
bohat socha hai jawab main kya
likhoon, kuch samjh main nahain aa
raha ta'hum itna janta hoon aap log
maire bachoon ki tara ho aur baroon
se kis tara aur kis andaz se baat karni
chahiay khoob jante ho. mein
nazar'andaz karne ke siwa aur kar hi
kya sakta tha. bache nadaniyaan
sharatain aur shokhyaan karte hi
rehte hain.
Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:46 pm
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Ibn
5 Star Member

Dr Maqsood Hasni wrote:

bohat socha hai jawab main kya
likhoon, kuch samjh main nahain aa
raha ta'hum itna janta hoon aap log
maire bachoon ki tara ho aur baroon
se kis tara aur kis andaz se baat karni
chahiay khoob jante ho. mein
nazar'andaz karne ke siwa aur kar hi
kya sakta tha. bache nadaniyaan
sharatain aur shokhyaan karte hi
rehte hain.
a sign ov a wise man,,
Yahan py apko loveu bolny ka dil kar
raha hy,
Coz ap k ye wordz bohot sweet lagy,,
n jesa k m ny bad habbits m mention
kia k jo dil m aay bol deta hun so

aadat to aadat hoti hy na,, fo yuh

Thu Mar 21, 2013 12:52 am
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
shukarriya baita
Allah aap ko shad-o-shadab rakhe
aur barkat se nawaze
Thu Mar 21, 2013 9:50 pm
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Ibn
5 Star Member
Dr Maqsood Hasni wrote:
shukarriya baita
Allah aap ko shad-o-shadab rakhe

aur barkat se nawaze

Khuda apko b dhero dher khushiaan
dy or apki dili hajaat ko pura kary,,
sehet'o'tandrusti sy nawazy, kabhi
koi gham ap k qareeb na bhat'ky,,
U r so speciel <3
Fri Mar 22, 2013 12:39 am
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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Dr.Sahib!! Hum Aur Aap Tou Kuch
Harsay Sey Isi Forum Ki Tawasat Sey
Aik Doosray Ko Thorra Bohat Jaanty
Hain.Mey Ney Barray "Light"
tareeqay Sey Baat Aap Tak

Poanchanay Ki Koshish Ki Thi.

Warna Tou aap Jaantay Hain K Mey
Aap Ki Bhi Bohat Izzat Karta Hoon.
Aur Aap k Illawa Bhi Mey Har
Chotay/Barray Sey Adab o Adaab Sey
Guftagoo Kartha Hoon.Yahi Meri
Tarbiyat bhi Hai aur aadat Bhi, Hope
K Meri taraf Sey Aap ka Dil saaf
Hogaya Hoga.Agar Phir Bhi DilAazari
Hiwi Ho Tou Muhazrat!!!!Aap Bila
Shuba Humaray Liye Laiq e Ehtaram
Hain.
Fri Mar 22, 2013 2:50 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab

Reply with quote

nhain janab aisi koee baat hi nahain
mujhy to yaad bhi nahain kah aap
kab ki aur koon si baat kar rahe hain
aap to hain hi piyare aur yar'bash
admi
Allah aap ko shadab-o-shad rakhe
Sat Mar 23, 2013 10:01 am
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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Mey Mutmahin Ho Gaya hoon. Mey
Ney Samjha Shahid Nadanastagi Mey
Koi Dil Azaari Na Kar Di Ho. Aap
Humaray Liye Qabil e Ehteraam
Shakhsiyat Hain.

Sat Mar 23, 2013 4:54 pm

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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
nahain janab aisi koee baat nahain.
mein bhi aap ko bara aziz rakhta
hoon
Allah aap ko salamat rakhe
Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:53 pm
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Ibn
5 Star Member
Dr Maqsood Hasni wrote:
nahain janab aisi koee baat
nahain. mein bhi aap ko bara aziz

rakhta hoon
Allah aap ko salamat rakhe
aamin, Khuda sab ko abad rakhy,,
Tue Apr 02, 2013 12:39 am
http://www.forumpakistan.com/dhartika-indar-t95632.html#ixzz4HP0gzt5z
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Thu Jan 23, 2014 2:28 pm

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karansher
karacih
great shayari by ustaad
Fri May 02, 2014 4:08 pm
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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Dr.Sahib Khush amaded!! Kaafi
Harsay Baad Tashreef Laye Hain Aik
Khubsurat Nazam K saath.Umeed hai
K Kheriat sey aur Khush o Khuram
Hoangen.Waisey Aik baat Kahoon K
Apnay Haan Tou aaj Kal Loag Jaagti
aankhon Sey Bhi Suurmaa Chori Kar
lehtay hain Rolling Eyes Rolling
Eyes .Hukmaraanon K Naam Par
Musalat Siasi Chor Tou Inn Aqal K
Band jaagnay Waalon Ko Sab Kuch
Ghaib Kar K haath K Karishmay
Dikha Dehtay Hain.apnay Loag
Hoanaqon Ki Taran sirf Taktay hi Reh
Jaatay Hain.Kyun K waisey Bhi Be
Basi,Be Hisi Mey Tabdeel ho jaati Hai

aur isi Liye Ziada Tar Loag Nafsa

Nafsi Mey Mubtila Ho Jaatay Hain.
Fri May 02, 2014 6:00 pm
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29-10-1970

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1970

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Sun Jan 11, 2015 11:34 am

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Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
bht Umda sharing
Sun Jan 11, 2015 6:50 pm
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Ibn
5 Star Member
bohot umda,,
Mon Jan 12, 2015 1:35 pm
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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Hasni Sahib!!

!!!!Pehlay Asalam Alehkum

Soachnay Walon K Zehnon Par achi
!!!Dastak di Hai aap ney
!!!Shukriya
Mon Jan 12, 2015 4:53 pm
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Sat Aug 16, 2014 7:51 am

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Ibn
5 Star Member
bohot bohot achi baat ki ap ny dear,,
wah,,
Sun Sep 14, 2014 6:58 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
bari bari meharbani
Allah aap ko khush rakhe
Thu Sep 18, 2014 7:32 am
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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Bhat hi Achay
Dr.Sahab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fri Sep 19, 2014 3:27 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
bari bari meharbani janab
Allah aap ko asanioon main rakhe
Mon Sep 22, 2014 9:05 pm
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I K QAZI
Moderator

Germany
Aap Samet!! Kya Shiraana Dua Di
Hai!!!!Dr.Sahib!!!
Thu Sep 25, 2014 5:02 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
shukarriya janab.............
aap bareek nazar rakhne wale hain
Mon Dec 08, 2014 9:59 pm
http://www.forumpakistan.com/mein-nay-daikhat115043.html#ixzz4HPKajjlf

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