TEST 3

Task 1:
The given bar chart compares data about different kinds of jobs in an unspecified
country over the period of 10 years between 2003 and 2013.

The initial impression from the graph is that employment rates showed upward
trends, apart from medical field and the jodlessjobless. Besides, it is clear that
business always peaked during the given period.

In 2003, the number of people who were employed in the hotel industry attained the
lowest point, around 4%. For the following 10 years, the figure rose as much as
fivefold to nearly 20%. In that period, education training and building fields also
underwent a considerable boom, from about 8% to 18% and from 11% to 21%
respectively. The figure for people who were out of work also climbed dramatically,
from less than 15% in 2003 to approximately over 30% until 2013.

Contrary to above groups, the percentage of people who worked in medical and
business fields experienced downward trends. There was over 20% in medical rate
in 2003 and this was halved to around 10% in 2013. Similarly, over the 10 – year
course, more than two fifths were businessman and this figure underwent a
significant drop to about 33%.

Writing Marking Sheet

Task Coherence & Lexical Grammatical
Achievement Cohesion Resource Range &
Accuracy

7 7 7 7
ckFeedba Band

 Thô ng tin bà i  Bài viết có kết  Từ vự ng bài  Ngữ phá p bà i

viết đượ c kếu hợ p lý, viết nhìn viết tố ; many
covered ổ n, liên từ đượ c chung phù error-free
overview tương sử dụ ng logic hợ p sentences are
đố i rõ produced.
scoreBand

7.0 – 1.0 (exceeding time limit) = 6.0

(40 minutes)
Task 2:
In recent years, owning a reputable brand names with garments, vehicles, and other
items become more and more popular. People prefer purchasing top ranked labels
due to many reasons. From my perspective, I strongly agree with this trend.

There are several causes why people nowadays tend to buy luxirious luxurious
products. First of all, it is inevitable that the highest status items branded
merchandise/household names bring high quality and reliability, providing buyers
with a great sense of satisfaction. For example, the users almost prefer Nike or
Adidas shoes due to their durability and the fact that they are light. Secondly, the
after-sales service as well as consumerism of the expensive brand names are
considered to be extremely great. As an illustration, Apple’s products like smart
phones, laptops, watches and other electronic device are famous for their high
security level.

Furthermore, the desire for high-end products, which represent success and
prosperity in today’s society, is also considered as a positive motivation to push
striving and contribution to economic and social development. In addition, the
prestige of large fashion, cosmetic or accessary accessory cprporation corporations
also carry purchasers’s faith.

However, it is difficult for users to evade the disadvantages of utilizing the authentic
products. Firstly, people who make use of exclusive labels are able to be paid
attention by may fall prey to robbers. Besides, they can experience with some fake
products if they do not find out about them carefully.

To sum up, utilizing the famous brands is the positive development. Otherwise,
consumers should consider elaborately before purchasing products.
(1 hour 30 minutes)

Writing Marking Sheet

Task Response Coherence & Lexical Grammatical
Cohesion Resource Range &
Accuracy

5 7 6 6
ckFeedba Band

 Phầ n luậ n điểm   Phầ n từ vự ng  target đầ u tiên

đượ c nêu chưa phù hợ p, củ a mộ t bà i
rõ rà ng! Ở trên nhưng có viết band 7 là
mở bà i đã nhắ c nhiều lỗ i về khô ng sai ngữ
nhữ ng gì, thì word choice. phá p
scoreBand

6.0 – 1.0 (exceeding time limit) = 5.0

Để ý kĩ phầ n nêu luậ n điểm – chú ng ta chỉ viết