PRACTICE TEST 3 (30’)

The bar chart indicates illustrates employment sectors of a particular nation over a century from 2003 to
2013.

The initial impression from the graph is that only medical and business showed an upward trends,
whereas the other categories followed the opposite direction. Business, despite a marginal decrease,
still remained prevalent among the other given classifications.

Between 2003 and 2013, there was the slight increase by 10% in both the percentages of people who
were employed in education training and building. Similarly, the given period witnessed the identicalA
similar pattern is evident , withwith regard to freelancers and unemployed, with each of the sector
having the same 20-percent growth. It is recorded that the proportion of those working in hotel industry
saw a rise, with the figures going up from 5% to 19%.

In contrast, the rates of individuals working medical and business sectors experienced a decreasing
tendencydownswing/a drop. There was a marginal dip in the proportion of people doing medical jobs,
with its rates dropping from 22% to 12%. The employment category of business, in spite of a 10-percent
decline over the 10-year period, maintained its highest figures of 35% towards the end of the time
frame.
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