Document Development Exposition: Workplace Correspondence

Explain in detail your document’s development from planning to finish, describing your
challenges, how you overcame them, and what you learned.

Planning
The planning seemed pretty simple for me. I went and created this idea for a website on my
instructional packet on how to change a tire. I’ve wrote multiple emails to other colleagues and I feel
like this was simple for me

First Draft (for peer editing)

For the peer edit, I feel like I had most of what I needed. I was struggling understanding how to
phrase the email due to acting like I was trying to sell and item rather than review my item.

Second Draft (for your packet)

Submitted for my packet. I sold too much in the email. The memo on the other hand felt pretty
strong. I feel like the examples and help from the professor really helped me go the extra step with
the memo.

Final Draft (for your portfolio)

I fixed the selling portion and made it into a third person point of view and made it seem like a
review instead of trying to sell a product on wikihow.