Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to

find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an increasing trend for some individuals to believe that avoiding

extreme weather is not the best method, we should adapt to survive it. I
THINK IT’S QUITE AN UGLY PARAPHRASE… YOU DON’T HAVE TO
REALLY STRICTLY REPHRASE LIKE THAT. SEE BELOW* I com-
pletely disagree with this opinion, NO REBUTTAL? YOU WILL LOSE
POINTS LIKE THIS! IT’S TOO SIMPLE TO JUST 100% AGREE. TRY TO
CONSIDER THE PROBLEM FORM SEVERAL VIEWPOINTS. as I believe
we should try our best to solve the global warming problem. However, I
also believe there are a few exceptions in which this is not possible.
NOW I’M CONFUSED! YOU JUST SAID YOU 100% AGREE!!! In this es-
say, I will outline my reasons for thinking so using reasons and supporting
examples.

*THE ISSUE OF CLIMATE CHANGE AND WHAT IT MEANS FOR THE FUTURE OF OUR
PLANET IS A TOPIC WHICH IS HOTLY DEBATED IN CONTEMPORARY TIMES. WHILE
SOME BELIEVE IT IS OF PARAMOUNT IMPORTANCE THAT WE REVERSE THE EF-
FECTS OF ENVIRONMENTAL DAMAGE, OTHERS HOLD THE VIEW THAT WE SHOULD
ADAPT IN ORDER TO SURVIVE.

Firstly, it is vital for the government to encourage carbon reduction and en-
ergy saving. The administration should impose laws to limit fuel emissions,
which can help to avoid global warming issues. It is better for the authori-
ties to raise the awareness of the general population to protect and be re-
sponsible to the world environment. For example, a 2019 report by the Tai-
wan Commission revealed that 89% of residents have started to take pub-
lic transportation regularly due to the implementation of green taxes.

1) idea - if we do nothing we will all die

2) extreme weather is causing more disasters which are taking lives
3) as the sea level rises more and more places will become uninhabitable
4) example…

UMMM… I CAN FEEL THE IDEAS BUT ARE YOU REALLY ANSWER-
ING THE QUESTION? YOU’RE TALKING ABOUT WAYS TO SOLVE
THE PROBLEM… BUT THAT’S NOT REALLY WHAT THE QUESTION
IS ASKING. THE QUESTIONS ASKS, SHOULD WE LEARN TO LIVE
WITH IT OR NOT?

IDEAS:
1) IF WE DON’T DEAL WITH IT, THE PLANET WILL BECOME TOO
HOT FOR FUTURE GENERATIONS
2) IF WE DON’T DEAL WITH IT WE WILL LOSE ANIMAL SPECIES
3) IF WE DON’T DEAL WITH IT, HUMANITY WILL BECOME EXTINCT

I THINK YOU SHOULD BE TALKING ABOUT HOW WE CAN’T LIVE

WITH IT AND WHY, RATHER THAN TALKING ABOUT SOLUTIONS TO
PROBLEMS. THIS IS NOT A PROBLEM/SOLUTION QUESTION.

CONSEQUENCES… NOT PROBLEMS/SOLUTIONS…

However, there are some circumstances in which human beings need to

protect themselves in this extreme climate. In reality, weather change is a
fact, so the government and companies should construct safer buildings or
bridges to deter the weather damage residents. Therefore, it is important to
learn how to seek shelter or survive during different disaster situations. For
instance, according to a survey conducted by Taiwan University in 2021,
nine out of ten high schools have taught students survival skills.

SAME HERE, KAYLA… WHY SHOULD WE LEARN TO LIVE WITH IT…

NOT HOW…

1) it is too late to reverse the problem

2) companies will not stop damaging the environment so we have no
control over it
3) as a result we need to learn to live with it
4) for example, in the future it’s possible we will live underground

It is better to give more effort to prevent global warming, the government

should set laws and raise the green awareness of the general population.
However, there are some circumstances in which individuals need to know
how to protect themselves and have more stable buildings.

MMM, NO, NOT REALLY! SORRY, KAYLA! IT’S A BAD ONE! MAKE
SURE YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT THE QUESTION IS ASKING YOU
BEFORE YOU ANSWER AS I FEEL MOST OF THIS ESSAY IS NOT
RELEVANT TO THE QUESTION!

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