The given line graph illustrates how many enquiries were received by

the Tourist Information Office according to three different forms in

one city during the first half of the year 2011.

Overall, the number of enquiries through letter or email decreased

while the opposite was true for those via face-to-face and telephone-
based forms.

In January, the figure of enquiries based on face-to-face and letter or

email forms was roughly 400 and 780 respectively, lower than 900
enquiries through telephone. In the following two months, the
statistics of face-to-face form doubled to approximately 800 whereas
the number of enquiries via letter or email declined marginally to 700.
Meanwhile, the proportion of telephone-based enquiries fluctuated
drammatically between 800 and 1000 before remaining unchanged
within the next one month.
From March onwards, the figure of enquiries based on face-to-face
and telephone forms increased significantly to 1900 and 1600 in
turns. Meanwhile, there was a downward trend in the quatity of
enquiries through telephone to about 390 before staying unchanged
till the end of the given period.

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Duration: 30 mins
Date: 02 May 2022
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PARAPHRASE
Enquiries or inquiries – information requests – tourists/ visitors who
enquired
Enquire – request for information
The number of – the figure for – the quantity of

SUMMARY
Paragraph 1:
Xanh cao nhất gấp đôi vàng (tháng 1)
Tháng 2: xanh giảm trong khi cam tăng
Tháng 3: xanh và cam cùng tăng thêm 200
Vàng giảm dần trong 3 tháng đầu từ 750 xuống 700

Paragraph 2:
Xanh giữ nguyên ko đổi rồi tăng
Ngược lại, vàng giảm rồi ko duy trì ko đổi
Cam tăng mạnh đến tháng 6

NOTE
- Figure for
- No use “proportion” – từ chỉ tỷ lệ, không được dùng
- Lưu ý khi viết bài cần có thông tin về thời gian, số liệu cụ thể

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The given line graph illustrates how many enquiries were received by
the Tourist Information Office in three different forms in a city during
the first half of the year 2011.
Overall, the number of enquiries through letter or email decreased
while the opposite was true for those via face-to-face and telephone-
based forms.

In January, the figure for telephone-based enquiries was the highest

with over 900 and doubled that of in-person enquiries. In the next
month, the Tourism Information Office revealed a significant increase
in the number of in-person information requests whereas the
opposite was true for that of telephone-based enquiries. In March,
the numbers of in-person and telephone-based enquiries increased
with an equal quantity of 200. Meanwhile, the Tourism Information
Office recorded a gradual downward trend in the number of
information requests by letter or email from roughly 790 to 700
during the first three months.

In the following three months, the number of enquiries by letter or

email continued going down before maintaining stable at
approximately 390. Meanwhile, the number of information requests
by telephone stayed unchanged at the level of 1000 before going up
to 1600 in the end of the given period. It is noticeable that the figure
for in-person information requests kept soaring to roughly 1900 in
June.

(212 words)
Date: 03 May 2022