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TỔNG QUAN VỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 1
TỔNG QUAN VỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 1
Decrease Decrease
Decline Decline
Xu hướng giảm Fall Fall
Drop Drop
Reduction
Downward trend
Xu hướng duy trì ổn định Remain/stay stable
ở mức nào đó Remain/stay unchanged
Stabilize
Xu hướng dao động Fluctuate Fluctuation
Vary Variation
Oscillate
Đạt mức cao nhất Peak
Hit/reach the highest point
Top out
Giảm xuống mức thấp Hit/reach the lowest point
nhất Hit a low
Fall to a low
Hit/reach the bottom
Bottom out
In 1970, around 5 million UK commuters travelled by car on a daily basis, while the bus and
train were used by about 4 million and 2 million people respectively. In the year2000, the
number of those driving to work rose to 7 million and the numberof commuting rail passengers
reached 3 million. However, there was a small drop of approxiamately 0.5millions of bus users.
By 2030, the number of people who commune by car is expected to reach almost 9 million, and
the number of train users is also predicted to rise, to nearly 5 million.By contrast, buses is
predicted to becomea less popular choice, with only 3 million daily users.
Ở đây, người viết đã chia Body làm 2 phần:
Body 1 (từ năm 1970 đến năm 2000)
Body 2 (“By 2030”, để chỉ mốc thời gian từ năm 2000 đến 2030).
Cách 2: Nhóm body theo đặc điểm về xu hướng
Đối với đề bài này, ta có thể nhóm để mô tả hai đường đầu tiên (United Kingdom, Sweden)
trong đoạn 1 vì chúng đều có xu hướng giảm qua thời gian như nhau. Ở đoạn 2, ta sẽ mô tả 2
đường có xu hướng tăng là Italy và Sweden.
Body 1: In 1967, the UK showed the highest proportion of carbon emissions at around 11
metric tonnes per person. However, this figure declined steadily ending at approximately 9
metric tonnes for each individual. Sweden’s output started at just over 8 metric tonnes. This then
rose to a peak of approximately 11 tonnes in 1977 and then witnessed a sharp decline to
approximately half of that by 2007.
Body 2: In contrast, Portugal in 1967 had the lowest output at just over 1 tonne per person.
Over the next four decades, this increased sharply ending at over 5 metric tonnes. Italy
demonstrated a similar rising pattern, beginning at a little over 4 metric tonnes and leveling off
at nearly 8 tonnes of carbon dioxide for each person by 2007.