III.

Cách làm d ng bài so sánh nhi ng theo nhi u tiêu chí

Ví d :

The following chart shows the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to Housing
preferences of UK people.

Housing preferences in the UK 2009

70%

60%

50%

40%
30%

20%

10%

0%
Apartments Terraced Houses Detached Houses Semi-detached houses

Liverpool London Manchester

c 1: Phân tích bi :
ng (ch ng ) c a bi là gì?

T l i dân ba thành ph t i UK ch n s ng t i nh ng th lo u
m cl ng)

là gì?

c tính b ng %

Có m c hay kho ng th i gian không? Thì c ng t ?

Kho ng th i gian t 09. V y nên chúng ta s t c bài.

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 bài - vi t Introduction

Subject Verb WHAT WHERE WHEN

Housing preferences of UK
bài The chart shows in the UK In 2009
people

The bar illustrates

housing preferences among people who lived in
Vi t l i In the year 2009
chart Liverpool, London and Manchester

Câu introduction có th c vi t l

The bar chart illustrates housing preferences among people who lived in Liverpool, London and
Manchester in the year 2009.

c 3: Vi t Overview:

m t ng quan v giá tr

Cao nh t: Apartments là s l a ch n ph bi n nh t t i Liverpool, trong khi Semi-detached houses l i

Th p nh t: L a ch n Terraced houses th p nh t c 3 thành ph

Chênh l ch nhi u nh t: T l S ng t i Apartments có s chênh l ch l n t i các thành ph

T m trên, ta có th ch n thông tin vi t overview v

Nhìn chung, s ng trong c trung It is clear that living in an apartment

l a ch n ph bi n nh t c a
t i Liverpool, trong khi nh ng
i s ng London và Manchester
ng s ng t
c l i, con s
th p nh t thu c v nhà li n k
c các thành ph .
was the most popular choice among
Liverpool residents, while people
living in London and Manchester had
a tendency towards semi-detached
houses. In contrast, the lowest figure
t t belonged to terraced Houses in all
cities.

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 c 4. Cách l a ch n thông tin và phân chia thành 2 ph n Detail

V i d ng này, chúng ta có th chia 2 body theo 2 cách sau:

ng.
Cách 2: Chia theo tiêu chí so sánh.

ng

Detail 1: Phân tích-so sánh t l ch n l a nhà t i Liverpool và Manchester

Apartments: kho i dân Liverpool noi r ng h thích s ng ng p3

con s i Manchester
i ch n detached houses (15%) và semi-detached houses (g n 20%) Liverpool th
nhi u so v i Manchester (g n 35%)
Terraced houses là s l a ch n ít nh ng quanh 10%.

Detail 1:

As can be seen from the chart, nearly 60% of

Có th th y trong bi , g n 60% s
respondents to the survey in Liverpool
i tr l i cu c kh o sát Liverpool yêu
preferred apartments, nearly three times as
thích Apartment, g n g p ba l n c a
much as that of Manchester. However, the
London, v i kho ng 20%. Tuy nhiên, xu
opposite tendency could be seen in the
c l i có th th y trong các con
figures for detached houses and semi-
s c a Detached houses and semi-
detached houses, accounting for around 16%
detached houses, chi m kho ng 16% và
and well over 30% respectively. In contrast,
trên 30% th hi n trong m i l a ch n
there was just roughly 10% of residents in
ng.
both cities choosing Terraced houses in
c l i, ch có kho c
2009.
hai thành ph ch n Terrace houses trong

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Detail 2: Ph n tích-so sánh t l ch n l a nhà t i London

G i dân London cho r ng h thích s ng Semi-detached houses

n 30% thích Apartment và 25% thich Detached houses
Terraced houses có s ng vote th p nh t, ch kho i 20%.

T vi c phân tích trên, ta s

Detail 2:

Regarding the survey result in London, well

V k t qu kh o sát t t
over a third of the preferences went on
ph n ba s l a ch n thu c v Semi-
Semi-detached houses. This was followed by
detached houses. Theo sau b i nó là g n
nearly 30% and 25% of citizens choosing
30% và 25% dân s l t a ch n
Apartments and Detached houses
c
respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for
l i, con s ch n l a Terraced houses th p
terraced houses was lower, with slightly less
i m i
than 20% of survey participants selecting
tham gia kh o sát l a ch n.
them.

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 Toàn b bài m u:

The bar chart illustrates housing preferences among people who lived in the British cities of Liverpool,

London and Manchester in the year 2009.

It is clear that Living in flats was the most popular choice among Liverpool residents, while people living

in London and Manchester had a tendency towards Semi-detached houses. In contrast, the lowest

figure belonged to Terraced Houses in all cities.

As can be seen from the chart, nearly 60% of respondents to the survey in Liverpool preferred

apartments, nearly three times as much as that of Manchester. However, the opposite tendency could

be seen in the figures for detached houses and semi-detached houses, accounting for around 16% and

well over 30% respectively. In contrast, there was just roughly 10% of residents in both cities choosing

Terraced houses in 2009.

Regarding the survey result in London, well over a third of the preferences went on Semi-detached

houses. This was followed by nearly 30% and 25% of citizens choosing Apartments and Detached houses

respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for terraced houses was lower, with slightly less than 20% of survey

participants selecting them.

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4.2 Cách 2: Chia theo tiêu chí so sánh

Detail 1: Phân tích-so sánh t l l a ch n Apartments và Terraced houses

Apartments: kho i dân Liverpool noi r ng h thích s ng n g p 2 và

3 con s i London và Manchester.
c l i, Terraced houses là l a ch n ít ph bi t nhi u, v i kho ng g n 20% t i London và
xung quanh 10% t i 2 thành ph còn l i.

Detail 1:

As can be seen from the chart, nearly 60%

Có th th y trong bi , g n 60% s of respondents to the survey in Liverpool
i tr l i kh o sát preferred flats, almost twice and three
flats, g p ba l n times as much as that of London and
c l i, s ng t i Manchester respectively. In contrast,
Terraced houses là m t s l a ch n ít ph residing in Terraced Houses was a much
bi m kho ng 20% s i tr less popular, accounting for just under 20%
l i kh o sát t i London và kho ng 10% of survey respondents in London and
Manchester và Liverpool. around 10% in Manchester and Liverpool.

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Detail 2: Ph n tích-so sánh t l ch n Detached houses và Semi-detached houses

Ph n l a semi-detached houses t i London và Manchester là b ng nhau kho ng 37%,

trong khi t l ch n lo i nhà này Liverpool th u kho ng 18%.
Ngoài ra, detached houses là s l a ch n ph bi n th 2 t i Manchester v i kho
t 10% và 20% t i London và Liverpool.

Detail 2:

Looking at the chart in more detail, there

was an equal proportion of citizens
Nhìn vào bi chi ti tt l
choosing Semi-detached houses in London
b ng nhau trong vi c l a ch n Semi-
and Manchester with well over a third of
detached houses t i London và
survey participants, which was twice as
Manchester v i tham gia
high as the figure for Liverpool with only
kh o sát, cao g p hai l n con s c a
17%. Meanwhile, the percentage of
Liverpool v i ch t l
residents choosing detached houses in
a ch n nhà t i Manchester là
Manchester was roundly 35%, which was
ng 10% và 20% so sánh
about 10% and 20% higher than in
v i t l c a London và Liverpool.
comparison with that of London and
Liverpool respectively.

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 Toàn b bài m u:

The bar chart illustrates housing preferences among people who lived in the British cities of Liverpool,

London and Manchester in the year 2009.

It is clear that Living in flats was the most popular choice among Liverpool residents, while people living

in London and Manchester had a tendency towards Semi-detached houses. In contrast, the lowest

figure belonged to Terraced Houses in all cities.

As can be seen from the chart, nearly 60% of respondents to the survey in Liverpool preferred flats,

almost twice and three times as much as that of London and Manchester respectively. In contrast,

residing in Terraced Houses was a much less popular, accounting for just under 20% of survey

respondents in London and around 10% in Manchester and Liverpool.

Looking at the chart in more detail, there was an equal proportion of citizens choosing Semi-detached

houses in London and Manchester with well over a third of survey participants, which was twice as high

as the figure for Liverpool with only 17%. Meanwhile, the percentage of residents choosing detached

houses in Manchester was roundly 35%, which was about 10% and 20% higher than in comparison with

that of London and Liverpool respectively.

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Luy n t p

Exercise 4

The Chart shows expected city visits by country of origin for 2018 (Thousands/Year)

Expected City Visits by Country of Origin for

2018 (Thousands/Year)

Roma

Marid USA
Canada
Paris
Mexico
Liverpool
0 20 40 60 80 100 120

c 1: Phân tích bi :
ng (ch ng ) c a bi là gì?

S i t 3 qu cd khác nhau

v là gì?

c tính b i

Có m c hay kho ng th i gian không? Thì c ng t ?

Kho ng th i gian t y nên chúng ta s t c bài.

Note: Các c nói v d/ predicted/ forecasted

bài
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 c 3: Vi t overview:
m v giá tr l n nh t:
cd m có s ng khách du l ch l n nh n t c ba qu c gia
S ng khách du l ch n t M là nhi u nh t t i c b n thành ph
m v giá tr nh nh t: cd m ít thu hút nh t
m v giá tr chênh l ch nhi u nh t: Không có s rõ r t trong tiêu chí này

Overview (vi m giá tr l n nh t và nh nh t)

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c 4: Cách l a ch n thông tin và phân chia thành 2 ph n Detail

Detail 1: Phân tích s ng khách du l ch t i Marid và Liverpool

Có m t 100 ngàn khách du l ch m cd i 80 ngàn khách du l ch

t Canada và 70 ngàn t Mexico.
c l i, S ng khách du l ch d n Liverpool thì th t nhi
th , s ng khách du l nt m i, g li u c a Canada v i 25 nghìn
i. S li u c a Mexico th t nhi u, ch có kho cd n.

Detail 2: Phân tích s ng khách du l ch t i Paries và Roma

im cd i 50 nghìn khách t Canada.

c l i, s ng khách du l ch t Mexico ch b ng ¼ so v i s i m , kho ng 20 nghìn
i
D li u cho khách du l nv cd
n t m i qu c gia

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