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Hướng Dẫn Giải Bộ Dự Đoán Chủ Đề Writing 2022
Hướng Dẫn Giải Bộ Dự Đoán Chủ Đề Writing 2022
MỤC LỤC
LỜI NÓI ĐẦU ......................................................................................................................... 1
HƯỚNG DẪN SỬ DỤNG TÀI LIỆU ................................................................................... 2
A. CÂU HỎI VÀ Ý TƯỞNG VIẾT BÀI ............................................................................... 4
I. BUSINESS .................................................................................................................. 4
II. EDUCATION............................................................................................................ 9
III. ENTERTAINMENT............................................................................................. 14
IV. ENVIRONMENT .................................................................................................. 19
V. HEALTH ................................................................................................................. 24
VI. LANGUAGE ........................................................................................................ 29
VII. SOCIAL ISSUES ................................................................................................. 34
VIII. SPORTS .............................................................................................................. 41
IX. TECHNOLOGY .................................................................................................. 47
X. WORK ................................................................................................................... 51
XI. INTERNET ........................................................................................................... 60
XII. CHILDREN AND SCHOOL .............................................................................. 64
B. HƯỚNG DẪN CÁCH VIẾT ĐOẠN VĂN ..................................................................... 67
HƯỚNG DẪN CÔNG THỨC PEER TỔNG QUÁT ......................................................... 67
I. OPINION .................................................................................................................. 69
II. DISCUSSION.......................................................................................................... 76
III. PROBLEM-SOLUTION ...................................................................................... 80
IV. TWO-PART QUESTION .................................................................................... 94
V. ADVANTAGES VS DISADVANTAGES ............................................................ 97
C. KHUNG BÀI VIẾT CHI TIẾT..................................................................................... 107
I. BUSINESS .............................................................................................................. 107
II. EDUCATION........................................................................................................ 108
III. ENTERTAINMENT........................................................................................... 109
IV. ENVIRONMENT ................................................................................................ 110
V. HEALTH ............................................................................................................... 111
VI. LANGUAGE: ...................................................................................................... 112
VII. SOCIAL ISSUES ............................................................................................... 113
VIII. SPORTS ............................................................................................................ 114
IX. TECHNOLOGY.................................................................................................. 115
X. WORK ................................................................................................................... 116
XI. INTERNET .......................................................................................................... 117
XII. CHILDREN AND SCHOOL ............................................................................ 118
LỜI NÓI ĐẦU
Xin chào các bạn học viên IELTS!
Chắc hẳn những người đã và đang tiếp cận với IELTS như chúng ta đều đã có một sự yêu
thích cùng nền tảng tiếng Anh nhất định rồi phải không? Mình cũng như vậy, mặc dù là một
chàng trai theo chuyên ngành kỹ thuật nhưng mình khá yêu thích ngôn ngữ nói chung cũng
như tiếng Anh nói riêng. Tuy nhiên, cũng như rất nhiều các bạn học sinh, sinh viên khác ở
Việt Nam, hiểu biết về tiếng Anh của mình chủ yếu nằm ở những bài tập ngữ pháp trong sách
giáo khoa, những câu giao tiếp cơ bản ―Hello. How are you?‖ ―I am fine. Thank you. And
you?‖. Chính vì thế, khi lần đầu tiếp xúc với IELTS, mình không khỏi choáng váng với khối
lượng kiến thức khổng lồ mà trước đây mình chưa từng biết tới, sự vận dụng ngôn ngữ sâu
sắc trong cả 4 kỹ năng nghe - nói - đọc - viết mà mình vẫn chưa thể làm tốt. Mình cũng có đi
học một vài lớp học đại trà nhưng không thể bật lên được vì giáo trình, phương pháp dạy
khiến mình rất khó tiếp thu.
May mắn thay, mình đã được động viên, khích lệ bởi một người thầy tâm huyết với nghề.
Thầy đã hướng mình đến một mục tiêu rõ ràng là mình cần IELTS để làm gì, nhìn nhận rõ
ràng về trình độ của bản thân, tự tìm cho mình một cách học hiệu quả nhất. Từ đó, mình mới
biết đến phương pháp học IELTS ―cá nhân hóa‖. Sau khi làm một bài test toàn diện cả 4 kỹ
năng, mình sẽ đánh giá sâu vào từng kỹ năng để xem mình có điểm mạnh, điểm yếu nào, đâu
là phần kiến thức mình cần bổ sung nhiều nhất, đâu là dạng kiến thức mình có thể tiếp thu
nhanh nhất, từ đó lên một lộ trình học riêng biệt dành riêng cho bản thân mình. Mọi thứ thay
đổi nhanh chóng từ sau khi mình áp dụng phương pháp cá nhân hóa này. Chỉ sau hơn một
năm, từ một học sinh mất gốc tiếng Anh, mình thi IELTS được 7.0 và tự tin ―chém gió‖ với
Tây không phải ―xoắn‖ điều gì.
Bây giờ mình đã có IELTS 8.0, TOEIC 975, kinh nghiệm làm việc môi trường quốc tế và
gần 10 năm kinh nghiệm đào tạo chuyên sâu IELTS. Mình nhận ra rằng tiếng Anh đã thực sự
trở thành một phần quan trọng, không thể thiếu tạo nên giá trị của bản thân mình. Mình bắt
đầu học muộn, nhưng may mắn lại đi được nhanh và không vất vả, thậm chí có phần thoải
mái bởi tìm được đúng phương pháp. Đối với kỹ năng Viết trong IELTS, mình chọn cách tư
duy đơn giản, phát triển ý tưởng rõ ràng, mạch lạc để tiếp cận đề bài. Mình nhận thấy bài viết
càng rõ ràng, tư duy càng đơn giản, sắc bén thì điểm bài viết càng cao. Để làm được điều đó
thì mình nên trang bị những cấu trúc câu hiệu quả. Muốn áp dụng chúng trong bài viết tốt,
bạn sẽ cần thời gian để luyện tập, sử dụng thành thạo. Vậy nên nếu bạn chỉ đọc tài liệu này
để biết hay lưu lại cho yên tâm thì đừng nên mất thời gian cho nó. Còn nếu bạn đã sẵn sàng
hành động, hay đang hành động, đang quyết tâm mà chưa có phương pháp thì mình xin trao
tài liệu này cho bạn.
Chúc các bạn thành công!
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HƯỚNG DẪN SỬ DỤNG TÀI LIỆU
NỘI DUNG:
Phần (A): Câu hỏi và ý tưởng viết bài: Trong phần này, các bạn sẽ được cung cấp đề và ý
tưởng cho 68 đề với 12 chủ đề khác nhau.
Phần (B): Hướng dẫn cách viết đoạn văn: Ở phần này, các bạn sẽ được hướng dẫn triển khai
bài viết với từng dạng cụ thể theo công thức PEER
Phần (C): Khung bài viết chi tiết: Tong phần nội dung này, các bạn sẽ được cung cấp 24
khung bài viết do Ex-examiner chấm.
CÁCH HỌC:
Bước 1: Chọn một đề tài trong phần (A) sau đó đọc ý tưởng đã cho sẵn.
Bước 2: Đọc kỹ phần hướng dẫn cách triển khai bài viết cho dạng bài này ở phần (B) Hướng
dẫn cách viết đoạn văn
Sau khi thực hiện các bước này, các bạn đã nắm rõ ý tưởng và cách triển khai bài viết, bạn
hãy bắt tay vào viết bài ngay cho nóng nhé.
Ngoài ra, sau khi viết bài các bạn có thể tham khảo khung bài viết chi tiết để tham khảo lối
hành văn của giám khảo nhé.
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A. CÂU HỎI VÀ Ý TƯỞNG VIẾT BÀI
I. BUSINESS
Practice questions
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Main points
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3. Climate Change and Business
Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they
are an opportunity for businesses.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
REFERENCE:
Climate business | business climate
Climate change, new risks and opportunities for businesses
Climate change is an opportunity for business to thrive
Companies are under pressure on climate change and need to do more
4. Marketing Strategy
Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and, as a result, people
gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local
products?
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This practice might lead to a The ban on targeted advertising
hypercompetitive market, leading can be applied.
to the loss of many small local
brands.
REFERENCE:
Top advertising problems today
Advertising makes us unhappy
EU parliament backs tighter rules on behavioral ads
The disadvantages of target marketing
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II. EDUCATION
Practice questions
2. Mandatory education
Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
4. Purpose of education
Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become
useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their
ambitions.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
5. Food science
Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it.
Others think students should spend time on other important subjects.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Main point
1. Free access to university
Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and
that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial
background they have.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2. Mandatory education
Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Right to education
4. Purpose of education
Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become
useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their
ambitions.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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An introduction to equality of opportunity
The purpose of education
5. Food Science
Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it.
Others think students should spend time on other important subjects.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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III. ENTERTAINMENT
Practice questions:
3. Dangerous Sports
Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think
people should have freedom to do any sports or activity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
5. Independent Filmmakers
Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a
film.
Is this a negative or positive development?
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Main points
1. Watching live events
Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable
than watching the same event on television.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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3. Dangerous Sports
Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think
people should have freedom to do any sports or activity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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5. Independent Filmmakers
Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a
film.
Is this a negative or positive development?
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IV. ENVIRONMENT
Practice questions:
1. Plastic Bags
Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some
people say they should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3. Car-Free Days
Some people believe that international free-car days are effective ways to reduce the air
pollution. However, the others argue that there are several ways that are more effective
Discuss both views & give your own opinion.
4. Overpopulation In Cities
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
What are the problems? What should governments and individuals do to tackle these
problems?
5. Nuclear Power
Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some
people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger.
What is your opinion?
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Main points
1. Plastic bags
Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some
people say they should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Reasons for a ban on plastic bags Reasons against a ban on plastic bags
Plastics bags pollute both land and It is hard to find other alternatives
water. to plastic packaging.
They can be dangerous for Potentially lead to negative job
wildlife. impacts.
The cost accumulation of using The production of alternative
plastics bags may be expensive. might cause more harm to the
A ban on plastic bags opens more green land.
opportunities for new market.
REFERENCE:
The hidden economic benefits of banning plastic bags
The negative environmental effects of plastic shopping bags
The economic effect of plastic bag bans
Is your reusable tote worse for the environment than a plastic bag?
REFERENCE:
Hereditary defects and conservation genetic management of captive populations
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Pros and cons of marine zoological parks according to marine conservationists
3. Car-Free Days
Some people believe that international free-car days are effective ways to reduce air
pollution. However, the others argue that there are several ways that are more effective.
Discuss both views & give your own opinion.
4. Overpopulation In Cities
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
What are the problems? What should governments and individuals do to tackle these
problems?
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5. Nuclear Power
Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some
people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger.
What is your opinion?
REFERENCE:
Global trends in city population growth
Urban threats
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V. HEALTH
Practice questions:
3. Healthy Lifestyle
Some people believe that governments should make laws about people’s nutrition and
food choice while others argue that it is their choice.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Main points
1. Public Health
It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to
prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Healthcare – Private vs public sector
3. Healthy Lifestyle
Some people believe that governments should make laws about people’s nutrition and
food choice while others argue that it is their choice.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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REFERENCE:
Why soda is so addictive -- and some good alternative beverages
What is soda addiction? All you need to know
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VI. LANGUAGE
Practice questions
3. An International Language
Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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Main points
REFERENCE:
5 reasons why exploring new cultures is the best part of travelling
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10 reasons why studying a language abroad is better than at home
3. An International Language
Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
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5. The Prevalence of English
The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent
language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only
language to be spoken legally.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world?
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VII. SOCIAL ISSUES
Practice questions:
7. Perfect Society
People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making
this happen.
What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
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In what ways can history be passed on to the next generation? Why is history important
to society?
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Main points
1. The Meaning behind Traditions
Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional and religious festivals; during
festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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REFERENCE:
What are some benefits of sharing household chores in the family?
The secret to… sharing household chores fairly with your partner
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Financial aid can directly help While financial aids may be taken
emerging nations to relieve the advantages by corrupted
distress caused by man-made or governments, practical aids can
natural disasters like drought, benefit directly to the citizens.
illness, and conflict.
REFERENCE:
Why foreign aid is harmful
What is foreign aid?
Does financial aid help or harm developing countries: Case of Albania
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Problems for an increase in urban Solutions for increase in urban
immigration immigration
Urban population might put a lot Governments can grant incentives
of burden on the city’s to big companies if they establish
infrastructure. an operation in the rural regions.
The young countrymen abandon The authorities should construct
their hometowns will create a more public infrastructure in rural
scarcity of human resources for areas such as schools or hospitals.
the local industry. Lawmakers can waive or grant a
This can create a competitive job deduction in personal income tax
market in the urban areas. for people living in the villages.
REFERENCE:
Migration from rural areas to cities: challenges and opportunities
Urbanization and the mass movement of people to cities
People fleeing big cities may spur economic growth in smaller metros
7. Perfect Society
People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making
this happen.
What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
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History contests can be held to Historic preservation can be a
attract people into researching powerful tool used to strengthen
about their national history. local economies and stabilize
property values. For example,
many tourist destinations are
historical sites.
History helps a nation to identify
its traditions and cultures.
REFERENCE:
National heritage areas preserve America’s landscapes and history
How to preserve your own history
Why preserve history?
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VIII. SPORTS
Practice questions:
3. Obesity in Population
With an increasing overweight population some think universities should make sport a
compulsory module on all degree courses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
7. Sports Facilities
Some countries invest in specialized sports facilities for top athletes but not for the
average people.
Is this a positive or negative development?
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Main points
1. Sports and Marketing
Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think it has a
negative impact on sports.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Sportspeople can be good
examples of how to overcome life
difficulties in order to be
successful.
REFERENCE:
Are athletes good role models?
Opinion: athletes should be positive role models
3. Obesity in Population
With an increasing overweight population some think universities should make sport a
compulsory module on all degree courses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Arguments for and against banning boxing
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gyms, or offer health insurance
incentives for physical activity.
REFERENCE:
Obesity prevention source
Designing cities for health: how to change urban environments for the better?
7. Sports Facilities
Some countries invest in specialized sports facilities for top athletes but not for the
average people.
Is this a positive or negative development?
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IX. TECHNOLOGY
Practice questions:
2. Self-Driving Cars
In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling
inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
3. Artificial Intelligence
Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human
beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative
consequences.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
4. Modern Electronics
Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones
and computers.
What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?
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Main points
1. The Internet and School
Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so
much from the internet and be educated at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
REFERENCE:
Will the internet replace traditional education?
Face off: will online learning replace traditional schooling?
2. Self-Driving Cars
In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling
inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
3. Artificial Intelligence
Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human
beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative
consequences.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Positive side of computers Negative side of computers
Errors are reduced and the chance Many employees may lose their
of reaching accuracy with a job due to automatic machines.
greater degree of precision is a If may encounter a situation that is
possibility. unfamiliar to them then they
People can overcome many risky perform incorrectly or else break
limitations of humans by down in such situations.
developing an AI Robot Machines can hinder creativity
Some of the highly advanced because humans may become
organizations use digital assistants overdependent in machines.
to interact with users which saves
the need for human resources.
REFERENCE:
Advantages and disadvantages of artificial intelligence
Pros and cons of artificial intelligence – a threat or a blessing?
4. Modern Electronics
Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones
and computers.
What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?
Causes of seniors struggling with new Solutions seniors struggling with new
technologies technologies
Old people might not see the Through simple instructions from
benefits they acquire from family members, it is possible that
computers thus leads to their old people can use certain
reluctance to learn. machines.
Seniors generally have a lesser Workshops should be set up in
frame of reference to enable them offices which impart training of
to absorb new knowledge. these gadgets to older people who
The elderly may not want to exit are still working.
their ―comfort zones‖.
REFERENCE:
16 reasons why the elderly struggle with technology
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X. WORK
Practice questions:
1. Changing Jobs
The job market today is very competitive, and it is best to choose a career or field of
study early in order to get a good job later in life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2. Interviews
First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the
key to securing a good job.
To what extent do you agree?
3. Societal Contribution
Doctor, nurse, and teachers make a great contribution to the society and should be paid
more than entertainment and sports celebrities.
To what extent do you agree?
4. Part-Time Jobs
Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
5. Job Mobility
Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace.
Do the advantages of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
7. Retirement age
Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
8. Job Satisfaction/Security
Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others
believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more
important.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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9. Human Capital Flight
An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their
own poorer countries to work in developed countries.
What problems do this cause? What are the solutions?
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Main points
1. Career choosing
The job market today is very competitive, and it is best to choose a career or field of
study early in order to get a good job later in life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2. Interviews
First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the
key to securing a good job.
To what extent do you agree?
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3. Societal Contribution
Doctors or nurses make a great contribution to the society and should be paid more than
entertainment and sports celebrities.
To what extent do you agree?
Reasons to support higher paid for Reasons why public figures should be
social workers paid the same
Health professionals are Artists help people from
vulnerable to many diseases in the tediousness and monotony.
course of providing care to their Sportspeople and artists contribute
patients. to many aspects of society.
They often have to work nightshift Celebrities tend to have short
with heavy workload. career than general practitioners.
These jobs are often associated
with intense training and job
placement during and post
college.
REFERENCE:
Health workers deserve higher pay. The economics are grim.
Essential but undervalued: millions of health care workers aren’t getting the
pay or respect they deserve in the covid-19 pandemic
Why pay artists? Hey, would you do your job for free?
4. Part-Time Jobs
Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
5. Job Mobility
Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace.
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Do the advantages of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
7. Retirement age
Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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Advantages of no retirement age Disadvantages of no retirement age
threshold threshold
This trend may provide the senior Senior workers may be
with extra income to cover their predisposed to certain health issues
living expenses. which may adversely affect their
The senior can combat boredom. productivity.
Many elder employees are Labour market is already
expertise in their fields in which competitive, thus, working without
they can deliver experienced a retirement age may deprive the
lessons to junior workers. job opportunities of young people.
For workers who are either not
passionate about their work, or
who are working in a job that is
physically demanding or extremely
stressful, the idea of keeping that
job for longer is not a pleasant one.
REFERENCE:
The pros and cons of working past 65
8. Job Satisfaction/Security
Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others
believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more
important.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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9. Human Capital Flight
An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their
own poorer countries to work in developed countries.
What problems do this cause? What are the solutions?
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10. Working overtime
Many people are working longer hours. Why is this happening?
What problems can this cause to people?
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XI. INTERNET
Practice questions:
1. Social media
The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?
2. Online shopping
Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
3. Online communication
Online communication is becoming more popular than face-to-face communication in many
companies.
Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
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Main points
1. Social media
The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society.
REFERENCE:
• 5 benefits of using social media
• Advantages and disadvantages of social media
• Top 14 advantages and disadvantages of social media
2. Online shopping
Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree.
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How has modern technology made shopping How has modern technology made
easier? shopping harder?
REFERENCE:
• 20 advantages and disadvantages of e-commerce
• Advantages and disadvantages of online shopping
3. Online communication
Online communication is becoming more popular than face-to-face communication in many companies.
REFERENCE:
• 10 pros and cons of online communication for businesses
• Advantages and disadvantages of online communication
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XII. CHILDREN AND SCHOOL
Practice questions:
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Main points
1. Reading books or watching TV
Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing
computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
REFERENCE:
• Benefits & importance of reading to children
• Good things about television
• Benefits of video games in learning
Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
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Arguments for learning foreign language Arguments against learning foreign language
REFERENCE:
• 15 Reasons for Kids to Learn a Foreign Language
• Kids Learning A 2nd Language (10 Reasons They Should And 10 Reasons They
Shouldn’t)
It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Arguments for learning local history Arguments for learning world history
REFERENCE:
• 3 reasons why you should know your local history
• Why learn world history
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B. HƯỚNG DẪN CÁCH VIẾT ĐOẠN VĂN
HƯỚNG DẪN CÔNG THỨC PEER TỔNG QUÁT
Phát triển ý tưởng có lẽ là vấn đề nhiều bạn gặp phải nhất khi viết bài IELTS Writing task 2.
Các bạn không biết viết làm sao cho dài, cho đủ ý và logic. Và có một công thức rất đơn giản có
thể giúp bạn xử lý hiệu quả vấn đề đó. Công thức đó chỉ gồm 4 chữ: P – E – E – R
P- E – E - R là viết tắt của 4 từ:
P = Point (Luận điểm)
E = Explanation (Giải thích)
E = Example (Ví dụ)
R = Result (Kết quả)
Mình lấy một câu hỏi ví dụ: “Trẻ em có nên tham gia chơi hoạt động ngoài trời không? (Should
children join in outdoor activities?)”
Giả sử như các bạn đồng ý với quan điểm này, và đưa ra Luận điểm (Point) đầu tiên để bảo vệ ý
kiến của mình.
POINT (Luận điểm): Các hoạt động ngoài trời có thể thúc đẩy khả năng thể chất của trẻ.
(Outdoor activities could foster children’s physical abilities).
Sau khi có Point này, các bạn sẽ cần mở rộng ý tưởng của mình bằng cách đưa thêm
Explanation (Giải thích), Example (Ví dụ) và Result (Kết quả) vào.
EXPLANATION (Giải thích): Các bạn đưa ra lý do giải thích tại sao lại có luận điểm trình
bày tại Point.
Ví dụ: Khi tham gia các hoạt động ngoài trời, trẻ thường phải vận động nhiều hơn (When
playing outdoors, children tend to be involved in various physical movements)
EXAMPLE (Ví dụ): Sau khi có giải thích, bạn đưa một ví dụ cụ thể nhằm chứng minh phần
giải thích này.
Ví dụ: Nếu một đứa trẻ tham gia vào một trận bóng, nó sẽ cần di chuyển nhiều để phối hợp với
đồng đội để ghi bàn (If a child is playing a football match, he is supposed to move around the
pitch to collaborate with his teammates to score against the opposing team).
Tuy nhiên trong thực tế, phần ví dụ là phần khó triển khai nhất trong một đoạn văn, với
nhiều lối viết khác nhau và các yêu cầu khác nhau. Lập luận của một đoạn văn có chắc chắn
hay không phụ thuộc khá nhiều vào cách các bạn đưa ví dụ. Bởi vậy, ở tài liệu này, chúng ta
sẽ có một phần hướng dẫn và luyện tập viết ví dụ riêng nhé.
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RESULT (Kết quả): Cuối cùng, bạn đưa một kết quả/ hậu quả để tăng độ thuyết phục, chắc
chắn của ý tưởng. Kết quả/ hậu quả này có thể được phát triển từ Ví dụ hoặc là kết quả/ hậu quả
của ý trong Point.
Ví dụ: Khi trẻ hoạt bát hơn, chúng có thể phát triển một cách toàn diện hơn. (Once children are
more active, they can benefit from a more holistic development).
“Outdoor activities could foster children’s physical abilities. It is because when joining these
activities, they tend to be involved in various physical movements. For example, if a child is
playing a football match, he is supposed to move around the pitch to collaborate with his
teammates to score against the opposing team. Once the child players become more active, they
can benefit from a more holistic development.”
Đây chỉ là một ví dụ đơn giản nhất để các bạn hiểu được cách phát triển ý tưởng theo PEER.
Các bài viết đầy đủ, được giám khảo chấm 8.0+ được trình bày ở phần sau của tài liệu này.
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I. OPINION
Ở dạng bài Opinion, đề bài sẽ đưa ra câu hỏi:
- To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Để trả lời câu hỏi này, các bạn sẽ có hai hướng:
1. Partly Agree/Disagree (đồng ý/không đồng ý một phần)
2. Completely Agree/Disagree (đồng ý/không đồng ý hoàn toàn)
Do có hai cách trả lời khác nhau, chúng ta sẽ có hai template khác nhau cho dạng bài Opinion.
PARTLY AGREE/DISAGREE
Trước khi đi vào các template cụ thể, chúng ta hãy cùng đọc đề bài sau:
Question: Some people believe that children should play outdoor games. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
1. INTRODUCTION
Ở phần Introduction, các bạn sẽ có hai câu văn. Câu đầu tiên các bạn sẽ Paraphrase lại thông tin
đề bài cho, và câu thứ hai các bạn sẽ đưa quan điểm của mình.
Sentence 1: Suggested structures
- Many people argue that ....
- It is true that ...
- It is sometimes argued that ...
Sentence 2: Suggested structures
- While there are some benefits/drawbacks to…, I maintain/ am of the opinion that ...
- Many people believe that …, whereas I believe/ am of the opinion that …
- Although some people argue that …, I partly agree with this notion due to …
Sample:
“Many people believe that children should engage in outdoor activities. While there are some
benefits to this practice, I partly disagree with this notion due to the risk it presents”
2. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Khi các bạn đồng ý/không đồng ý một phần với vấn đề của đề bài đưa, các bạn sẽ phân tích cả 2
hướng của đề (agree + disagree) trong hai đoạn thân bài.
Ở đoạn đầu tiên này, chúng ta sẽ viết ý ―agree‖ trước nhé. Các bạn sẽ có 5 câu, cụ thể như sau:
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
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- On the one hand, the option to … is attractive for several reasons.
- On the one hand, the idea of … is beneficial to some extent. - The argument that ... is
reasonable to some extent.
Point 1 Introduction:
- Firstly, ....
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Secondly, ...
- Another reason is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
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- Therefore, …
Sample:
- “On the one hand, the option to let children play outdoor games is attractive for several
reasons. Firstly, ... This is mainly due to … Secondly, ... For example, …”
- “On the one hand, the idea of letting participate in outdoor activities is beneficial to
some extent. The first reason for this is, ... This is because … Another reason is,
... This can be exemplified in the case of …”
- “The argument that allowing children engage in outdoor games are beneficial for them is
reasonable to some extent. Firstly, ... This could be explained by the fact …
Secondly, ... This is because …”
3. BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Ở đoạn thân bài thứ hai, chúng ta sẽ viết ý còn lại - ―disagree‖ nhé. Các bạn cũng sẽ có 5
câu, cụ thể như sau:
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- Nevertheless, I believe that …
- On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I also believe ...
- Despite the above-mentioned advantages, I believe that …
Point 1 Introduction
- The main one is ...
- The first reason relates to ...
- Firstly, …
Point 1 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
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- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
Point 2 Introduction
- Furthermore/In addition, ...
- The second reason relates to ...
- Another reason is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
Sample:
- “On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I also believe that children should
not be allowed to play these games. The first reason is … This is because … The second
reason relates to … For example …”
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4. CONCLUSION
Một Conclusion thông thường sẽ bao gồm hai câu. Ở dạng bài này, câu đầu tiên bạn sẽ tóm tắt lại
các ý mà bạn đã viết và đưa quan điểm cá nhân của bạn. Câu thứ hai bạn sẽ đưa một câu Final
Thought dưới dạng ―Prediction‖ hoặc ―Recommendation‖.
Suggested structures
- In conclusion, while there are many benefits/drawbacks regarding ..., I still believe that it
is more beneficial/disadvantageous to … because … It is advisable that ...
- In conclusion, although … presents certain advantages/disadvantages, I contend that it
should/should not be encouraged due to … It can be predicted that …
Sample:
“In conclusion, although letting children freely engage in outdoor games presents physical
health benefits, I contend that it should not be encouraged due to the risk these games pose to
children. It is advisable that parents take the appropriate measures to protect their offspring
from the health hazard that outdoor activities present”
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COMPLETELY AGREE/DISAGREE
1. INTRODUCTION
Ở phần Introduction của dạng này, các bạn cũng sẽ có hai câu văn:
Sentence 1: Paraphrase the question
- Many people argue that ....
- It is true that ...
- It is sometimes argued that ...
Sentence 2: State your opinion and ideas
- Personally, I completely agree with this view.
Sample:
“Many people believe that children should engage in outdoor activities. Personally, I completely
agree with this view”
2. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Khác với dạng ―Partly Agree/Disagree‖, các bạn chỉ nên viết một ý tưởng cho mỗi Body
Paragraph. Bởi vậy, các bạn sẽ phát triển ý tưởng theo công thức PEER một cách đầy đủ.
*Trong trường hợp các bạn vẫn muốn đưa hai ý tưởng một đoạn, các bạn có thể viết tương tự
như Body Paragraph của dạng “Partly Agree/Disagree” nhé.
3. BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Ở đoạn thân bài thứ hai, chúng ta sẽ tiếp tục phát triển ý tưởng với format tương tự như body 1,
các bạn tham khảo phần Body Paragraph của dạng ―Partly Agree/Disagree‖ hoặc phần PEER
Template nha.
4. CONCLUSION
Conclusion của dạng bài này cũng sẽ tương đối giống dạng ―Partly Agree/Disagree‖ - sẽ bao
gồm hai câu. Câu đầu tiên bạn sẽ tóm tắt lại các ý tưởng bạn đã viết và đưa quan điểm cá nhân để
trả lời câu hỏi của đề. Câu thứ hai bạn sẽ đưa một câu Final Thought dưới dạng
―Prediction‖ hoặc ―Recommendation‖.
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Suggested structures
- In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I maintain that … It can be
predicted that …
Sample:
“In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I maintain that children should be
encouraged to engage in outdoor activities. It is advisable that parents take the appropriate
initiatives to facilitate an environment most suitable for this practice”
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II. DISCUSSION
1. INTRODUCTION
Ở phần này, các bạn vẫn sẽ có hai câu văn như dạng Opinion. Câu đầu tiên các bạn sẽ
Paraphrase lại thông tin đề bài cho, và câu thứ hai các bạn sẽ đưa quan điểm của mình.
Sentence 1: Suggested structures
- It is true that ...
- It is sometimes argued that ...
- Many people argue that ....
Sentence 2: Suggested structures
- While there are some benefits/drawbacks/reasons to…, I maintain/ am of the opinion that
...
- Although some people argue that …, I partly agree with this notion due to …
Sample:
“It is true that the existence of zoos is a topic of much debate. While there might be some reasons
to support their existence, I am of the opinion that they should be completely abolished”
2. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
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Ở đoạn đầu tiên này, chúng ta sẽ viết về ý thứ 2 của đề bài ―zoos can be useful in protecting wild
animals‖ nhé. Các bạn sẽ có 5 câu, cụ thể như sau:
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- On the one hand, the option to … is attractive for several reasons.
- On the one hand, the idea of … is beneficial to some extent. - The argument that ... is
reasonable to some extent.
Point 1 Introduction:
- Firstly, ....
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Secondly, ...
- Another reason is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
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- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
- “On the one hand, the option to allow zoos to exist is attractive for several reasons.
Firstly, ... This is mainly due to … Secondly, ... For example, …”
- “On the one hand, the idea of maintaining zoos is beneficial to some extent. The first
reason for this is, ... This is because … Another reason is, ... This can be exemplified in
the case of …”
- “The argument that zoos are beneficial for wild animals is reasonable to some extent.
Firstly, ... This could be explained by the fact … Secondly, ... This is because
…”
3. BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Ở đoạn thân bài thứ hai, chúng ta sẽ viết ý còn lại - và cũng là ý chúng ta ủng hộ ―zoos should be
closed down‖ nhé. Các bạn cũng sẽ có 5 câu, cụ thể như sau:
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- Firstly, …
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Point 1 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Furthermore/In addition, ...
- The second reason relates to ...
- Another reason is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
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- “On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe that all zoos should be
asked to close. The first reason is … This is because … The second reason relates to …
For example …”
- “Nevertheless, I believe that zoos are unethical and therefore musted be banned from
operating. Firstly, … This is mainly due to … Secondly, … This can be perfectly
exemplified in the case of …”
- “Despite the above-mentioned advantages, I believe that zoos should not be maintained
given its cruelty toward animals. The first reason relates to … This could be explained by
the fact … Furthermore, … For example, …”
4. CONCLUSION
Tương tự như dạng Opinion, Conclusion ở dạng bài này cũng sẽ bao gồm hai câu. Câu đầu tiên
bạn sẽ tóm tắt lại các ý tưởng bạn đã viết và đưa quan điểm cá nhân để trả lời câu hỏi của đề.
Câu thứ hai bạn sẽ đưa một câu Final Thought dưới dạng ―Prediction‖ hoặc ―Recommendation‖.
Suggested structures
- In conclusion, while there are many benefits/drawbacks regarding ..., I still believe that it is
more beneficial/disadvantageous to … because … It is advisable that ...
- In conclusion, although … presents certain advantages/disadvantages, I contend that it
should/should not be encouraged due to … It can be predicted that …
Sample:
“In conclusion, although preserving zoos can somewhat contribute to the survival of animals, I
contend that zoos should not be kept open due to the cruelty these facilities exert to animals. It is
advisable that governments take the initiative to close down these venues in the near future”
III. PROBLEM-SOLUTION
Ở dạng bài Problem-Solution, đề bài sẽ yêu cầu các bạn đưa ra vấn đề hoặc nguyên nhân của 1
hiện tượng nào đó, đồng thời nêu giải pháp cho vấn đề đó. Bởi vậy, dạng bài này sẽ được chia
làm hai hướng với hai template khác nhau:
- Cause - Solution (Nguyên nhân - Giải pháp)
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- Problem - Solution (Hậu quả - Giải pháp)
Với hai hướng này, đề sẽ có hai cách hỏi:
- Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
- What are the problems and solutions?
Trước khi đi vào Template cụ thể, chúng ta hãy cùng đọc đề bài sau:
“Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment in prison”
Đầu tiên, chúng ta sẽ cùng đi vào Template cụ thể cho hướng đầu tiên - Cause - Solution nhé.
CAUSE-SOLUTION
1. INTRODUCTION
Ở phần Introduction, các bạn sẽ có hai câu văn. Câu đầu tiên các bạn sẽ Paraphrase lại thông tin
đề bài cho, và câu thứ hai các bạn sẽ trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài.
Sentence 1: Suggested structures
- Many people argue that ....
- These days, …
- It is true that ...
- It is sometimes argued that ...
Sentence 2: Suggested structures
- There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon/tendency/trend/view and several
solutions should be adopted by … to improve the situation.
- This phenomenon can be attributed to a number of reasons, and solutions should be taken
by … to alleviate the circumstance.
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Sample:
“It is true that many offenders recommit crimes after being released from prison. There are a
number of reasons behind this phenomenon, and several solutions should be adopted by the
governments to improve the situation.”
2. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Ở đoạn đầu tiên này, chúng ta sẽ trả lời câu hỏi đầu tiên của đề bài (Why is this happening) - tức
là đưa các nguyên nhân gây nên vấn đề đề bài đưa. Các bạn cũng sẽ có 5 câu, cụ thể như sau:
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- One reason is …
- First of which is …
Point 1 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
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Point 2 Introduction:
- Secondly, ...
- Another reason is …
- Furthermore/In addition/Additionally, …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
- “There are two primary reasons why criminals recommit after serving their sentence.
One reason is … This is due to … Furthermore, … According to a study conducted by
IELTS Xuan Phi in 2019, …”
- “There are two main reasons associated with this phenomenon. Firstly, ... This is mainly
due to … Secondly, ... For example, …”
- “This issue can be explained by two main reasons. First of which is, ... This is because …
Another reason is, ... This can be exemplified in the case of …”
*Ở dạng bài này, nếu đề dùng từ “reasonS” thì các bạn bắt buộc phải đưa hai lý do cho đoạn
văn này. Ngược lại, nếu đề dùng “reason” số ít hoặc sử dụng cấu trúc “Why…”, các bạn có
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thể đưa một hoặc hai lý do tùy theo ý muốn. Trong trường hợp bạn chỉ đưa một, các bạn sẽ
phát triển ý theo công thức PEER một cách hoàn chỉnh bằng cách gộp câu Point với câu
Topic sentence, đưa Explanation, Example và Result cụ thể. (các bạn tham khảo phần PEER
Template nhé)
3. BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Ở đoạn thân bài thứ hai, chúng ta sẽ viết về các ―Solution‖ cho vấn đề của đề bài. Các bạn lưu ý
sẽ cố gắng đưa các giải pháp có liên quan tới các nguyên nhân bạn nêu ở Body 1.
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- Fortunately, several measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.
- However, several solutions could be implemented to tackle this issue.
- There are several solutions that can be adopted by … to resolve this problem.
Point 1 Introduction:
- The first solution would be …
- First of which is …
- Firstly, …
Point 1 Explanation/Example/Result:
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction
- Furthermore/In addition, ...
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- The second solution requires the cooperation of … to …
- The second solution is …
- Another solution is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This could be done by …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
- “Fortunately, several measures could be taken to alleviate this problem. The first
solution would be … This could be done by … Another solution is … According to some
research, …”
- “There are several solutions that can be adopted by the authorities and individuals to
resolve this problem. First of which is … This could be carried out by … The second
solution requires the cooperation of individuals to … This was successfully done by …”
*Lưu ý 1: Tương tự như lưu ý ở đoạn trên, nếu đề dùng từ “solutionS/measureS” thì các bạn
bắt buộc phải đưa hai giải pháp cho đoạn văn này. Ngược lại, nếu đề chỉ dùng “solution” số ít
hoặc sử dụng cấu trúc “What can be done to …”, các bạn có thể đưa một hoặc hai giải pháp
tùy theo ý muốn. Trong trường hợp bạn chỉ đưa một, các bạn sẽ phát triển ý theo công thức
PEER một cách hoàn chỉnh bằng cách gộp câu Point với câu Topic sentence, đưa
Explanation, Example và Result cụ thể. (các bạn tham khảo phần PEER Template nhé)
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* Lưu ý 2: Các giải pháp bạn đưa ở đoạn này nên tương xứng với các ý bạn nêu ở đoạn trước,
cả về mặt thông tin lẫn thứ tự trong đoạn văn.
4. CONCLUSION
Ở dạng bài này, Conclusion cũng sẽ bao gồm hai câu. Câu đầu tiên bạn sẽ tóm tắt lại các nguyên
do - giải pháp bạn đã viết và câu thứ hai bạn sẽ đưa một câu Final Thought dưới dạng
―Prediction‖. (các bạn không nên đưa recommendation vì nó sẽ tương ứng như một solution mới
- mà bạn đã đưa solution trong thân bài rồi)
Suggested structures
- In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for …, and steps need to be taken by
… to tackle this problem. It can be predicted that …
- These days,
- It is true that
- It is sometimes argued that
Sentence 2: Suggested structures
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- There are a number of problems result from this phenomenon/tendency/trend/view and
several solutions should be adopted by … to improve the situation.
- Several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a
number of effective solutions from …
Sample:
“It is true that many offenders recommit crimes after being released from prison. Several
problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number of effective
solutions from the government and individuals”
2. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Ở đoạn đầu tiên này, chúng ta sẽ trả lời câu hỏi đầu tiên của đề bài (What are the problems) tức
là đưa các hậu quả của vấn đề đề bài đưa. Các bạn cũng sẽ có 5 câu, cụ thể như sau:
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- As …, several related problems can be anticipated. - This issue has led to two main
problems.
- There are two main problems engendered by this phenomenon.
Point 1 Introduction:
- Firstly, ....
- One problem is …
- First of which is …
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- For example, …
- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Secondly, ...
- Another problem is …
- Furthermore/In addition/Additionally, …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
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- “As ex-prisoners are committing more crimes, several related problems can be
anticipated. The main issue is that ... This is due to … Another problem is that .... This
can be seen in the case of …”
- “This issue has led to two main problems. Firstly, ... This is mainly due to … Secondly, ...
For example, …”
- “There are two main problems engendered by this phenomenon. First of which is, ... This
is because … Another reason is, ... This can be exemplified in the case of …”
*Tương tự, nếu đề dùng từ “problemS” thì các bạn bắt buộc phải đưa hai hậu quả cho đoạn
văn này. Ngược lại, nếu đề dùng “problem” số ít hoặc sử dụng các cấu trúc khác, các bạn có
thể đưa một hoặc hai “problem” tùy theo ý muốn. Trong trường hợp bạn chỉ đưa một, các bạn
sẽ phát triển ý theo công thức PEER một cách hoàn chỉnh bằng cách gộp câu Point với câu
Topic sentence, đưa Explanation, Example và Result cụ thể. (các bạn tham khảo phần PEER
Template nhé)
3. BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Ở đoạn thân bài thứ hai, chúng ta sẽ viết về các ―Solution‖ cho vấn đề của đề bài. Các bạn lưu ý
sẽ cố gắng đưa các giải pháp có liên quan tới các nguyên nhân bạn nêu ở Body 1.
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should immediately take
steps to address these problems.
- Fortunately, several measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.
- However, several solutions could be implemented to tackle this issue.
- There are several solutions that can be adopted by … to resolve this problem.
Point 1 Introduction:
- The first solution would be …
- First of which is …
- Firstly, …
Point 1 Explanation/Example/Result:
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- This could be done by …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Furthermore/In addition, ...
- Another solution is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
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- “Since such issues are serious, the government should immediately take steps to address
these problems. The first solution would be ... This could be carried out by ...
The second measure would be … Indeed, …”
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- “Fortunately, several measures could be taken to alleviate this problem. The first
solution would be … This could be done by … Another solution is … According to some
research, …”
- “There are several solutions that can be adopted by the authorities and individuals to
resolve this problem. First of which is … This could be carried out by … The second
solution requires the cooperation of individuals to … This was successfully done by …”
*Lưu ý 1: Tương tự như lưu ý ở đoạn trên, nếu đề dùng từ “solutionS/measureS” thì các
bạn bắt buộc phải đưa hai giải pháp cho đoạn văn này. Ngược lại, nếu đề chỉ dùng
“solution” số ít hoặc sử dụng cấu trúc “What can be done to …”, các bạn có thể đưa một
hoặc hai giải pháp tùy theo ý muốn. Trong trường hợp bạn chỉ đưa một, các bạn sẽ phát
triển ý theo công thức PEER một cách hoàn chỉnh bằng cách gộp câu Point với câu Topic
sentence, đưa Explanation, Example và Result cụ thể. (các bạn tham khảo phần PEER
Template nhé)
* Lưu ý 2: Các giải pháp bạn đưa ở đoạn này nên tương xứng với các ý bạn nêu ở đoạn
trước, cả về mặt thông tin lẫn thứ tự trong đoạn văn.
4. CONCLUSION
Ở dạng bài này, Conclusion cũng sẽ bao gồm hai câu. Câu đầu tiên bạn sẽ tóm tắt lại các vấn đề
- giải pháp bạn đã viết và câu thứ hai bạn sẽ đưa một câu Final Thought dưới dạng
―Prediction‖. (các bạn không nên đưa recommendation vì nó sẽ tương ứng như một solution
mới - mà bạn đã đưa solution trong thân bài rồi)
Suggested structures
- In conclusion, it is clear that there are various problems resulted from …, and steps need
to be taken by … to tackle this problem. It can be predicted that …
- In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of … and appropriate steps need
to be taken to tackle these problems by …
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Sample:
“In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of re-committing crimes and
appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems. It can be predicted that with
appropriate funding and implementation of these suggested measures, this issue would likely be
alleviated in the next 10 years”
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IV. TWO-PART QUESTION
Ở dạng bài này, đề bài sẽ yêu cầu các bạn trả lời hai câu hỏi khác nhau cho cùng một chủ đề.
Các câu hỏi của dạng này cũng khá đa dạng, tuy nhiên nhìn chung các bạn vẫn sẽ có cấu trúc
bài 4 đoạn tương tự như các bài trước:
- Introduction
- Body Paragraph 1 - Answer the first question
- Body Paragraph 2 - Answer the second question
- Conclusion
Nội dung trong các đoạn văn này sẽ thay đổi dựa theo từng câu hỏi, vậy nên sẽ không có một
Template cụ thể có thể áp dụng cho tất cả các bài. Trước khi đi vào các thông tin cụ thể, mời
các bạn đọc đề bài sau:
“These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to
work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a negative or positive
development?”
1. INTRODUCTION
Tương tự như các dạng trước, ở phần Introduction các bạn cũng vẫn sẽ có hai câu văn. Câu đầu
tiên các bạn sẽ Paraphrase lại thông tin đề bài cho, và câu thứ hai các bạn sẽ trả lời câu hỏi của
đề bài. Bạn sẽ cần trả lời đầy đủ cả hai câu hỏi của đề bài trong câu thứ hai này nhé.
Sentence 1: Suggested structures
- Many people argue that ....
- These days, …
- It is true that ...
- It is sometimes argued that ...
Sentence 2: Do các câu hỏi thay đổi theo từng bài, và do có rất nhiều cách hỏi khác nhau, các
bạn cần cân nhắc trả lời sao cho trực tiếp, đầy đủ và rõ ràng nhé.
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Sample:
“The phenomenon of mothers becoming the chief breadwinners and fathers becoming stayat-
home husbands has been growing in popularity. This change can be attributed to a number of
reasons, and I consider this a positive development”
2. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Ở đoạn đầu tiên này, chúng ta sẽ trả lời câu hỏi đầu tiên của đề bài (What could be the reasons
for this) - tức là đưa các nguyên nhân gây nên vấn đề đề bài đưa. Câu hỏi này có yêu cầu tương
tự như phần ―Cause - Solution‖ trong dạng số 3, vậy nên các bạn có thể tham khảo Template của
phần đó nhé.
3. BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Ở đoạn thân bài thứ hai, chúng ta sẽ trả lời câu hỏi số 2 – ―Do you think it is a negative or
positive development”. Nhìn chung, cách viết đoạn văn này cũng giống một đoạn văn trong một
bài Opinion hay Discussion thông thường, các bạn sẽ phát triển từ 1-2 ý tưởng trong một đoạn
văn. Điểm khác biệt duy nhất là bạn cần trả lời rõ rằng đây là một ―positive‖ hay
―negative development‖ ngay từ câu Topic Sentence đầu tiên.
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- Personally, I deem this a positive/negative development - I consider this trend as progress
for several reasons.
- I am of the opinion that this is a negative trend considering its adverse impacts on
…
Point 1 Introduction:
- First of which is …
- Firstly, …
Point 1 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
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- This could be explained by the fact that …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction
- Furthermore/In addition, ...
- Secondly, …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- For example, …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
- “Personally, I deem this a positive/negative development. Firstly, ... This is mainly due to
… Secondly, ... For example, …”
- “I consider this trend as progress for several reasons. The first reason for this is, ... This is
because … Another reason is, ... This can be exemplified in the case of …”
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- “I am of the opinion that this is a negative trend considering its adverse impacts on
children. Firstly, ... This could be explained by the fact … Secondly, ... This is because
…”
*Trong thực tế, có rất nhiều cách hỏi trong dạng bài Two-part Question, đồng nghĩa với việc
có nhiều cách trả lời khác nhau. Tuy nhiên, các cấu trúc triển khai đoạn văn nhìn chung
cũng vẫn khá tương đồng với các dạng khác, vậy nên các bạn chỉ cần đọc kỹ 3 dạng đầu là
hoàn toàn có thể tự tin viết dạng bài này.
4. CONCLUSION
Ở dạng bài này, Conclusion cũng sẽ bao gồm hai câu. Câu đầu tiên bạn sẽ tóm tắt lại câu trả lời
mà bạn đã viết trong hai đoạn than bài. Câu thứ hai bạn sẽ đưa một câu Final Thought dưới dạng
―Recommendation‖ hoặc ―Prediction‖.
Sample:
“In conclusion, while the role-swap between husband and wife can be attributed to the changes
in people’s perception and the ever-increasing living expenses, I consider this a positive
development given the flexibility and financial security it provides for families. It is
recommended that this practice be encouraged for the benefits of women in particular and the
economy as a whole”
V. ADVANTAGES VS DISADVANTAGES
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Sentence 2: Suggested structures
- While there are some drawbacks to…, I maintain/ am of the opinion that the strengths
will likely be more significant.
- Although there can be no doubt that … can be beneficial to society to a certain extent, I
assert/ hold a belief that … will do more harm than good.
Sample:
“Many believe that the teaching of horticulture and animal domestication should be included in
the school’ s curriculum. While there are some advantages to this proposal,
I am of the opinion that the drawbacks will likely be more significant”
2. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Ở đoạn văn này, chúng ta sẽ đi vào phần ―Advantages‖ trước nhé – đoạn văn cũng sẽ bao gồm 5
câu:
Topic sentence: Suggested structures
- On the one hand, the option to … can exert many positive effects.
- On the one hand, the idea of … is advantageous to some extent.
- The argument that ... is beneficial for … is reasonable to some extent.
Point 1 Introduction:
- Firstly, ....
- The first advantage of this is …
Point 1 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- This is mainly due to …
- This could be explained by the fact …
- For example, …
- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
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- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Secondly, ...
- The second advantage of this is …
- Another advantage is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- This is mainly due to …
- This could be explained by the fact …
- For example, …
- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
- “On the one hand, the option to teach schoolchildren planting and animal raising skills
can exert certain benefits. Firstly, ... This is because … Secondly, … This is mainly due to
…”
- “On the one hand, the idea of letting children learn to grow plants and look after animals
is advantageous to some extent. The first advantage of this is … This could be explained
by the fact … Another advantage is … For example, …”
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3. BODY PARAGRAPH 2
- This is because …
- This is mainly due to …
- This could be explained by the fact …
- For example, …
- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Furthermore/In addition, ...
- The second disadvantage relates to ...
- Another disadvantage is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
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- This is because …
- This is mainly due to …
- This could be explained by the fact …
- For example, …
- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
- “Nevertheless, I believe that this trend may carry a certain degree of risk. The first
drawback relates to ... This is because … Furthermore, … This is perfectly exemplified in
case of …”
- “On the other hand, this practice can highlight a number of valid concerns. The first
drawback relates to... This is mainly due to … The second one is that … For example,
…”
- “Despite the above-mentioned advantages, I believe that these activities might be
associated with many detrimental effects on children. The main one is ... This could be
explained by the fact … In addition, ... This is perfectly exemplified in case of …”
* Nếu các bạn cho rằng ưu điểm lớn hơn nhược điểm thì các bạn sẽ viết đoạn
“Advantages” ở body thứ 2 nhé.
4. CONCLUSION
Suggested structures
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- In conclusion, while there are many advantages/ disadvantages regarding ..., I believe
the benefits/ drawbacks that result from this trend/ practice is of more vital significance.
It is recommended that...
- In conclusion, this trend might possess many advantages/ disadvantages. However, I am
more inclined to the view that the disadvantages/ advantages will likely prevail.
Sample:
“In conclusion, while there may disadvantage regarding teaching children cultivation and
domestication skills, I believe that drawback that result from this trend is of more vital
significance. It is recommended that an extracurricular program relevant to these activities
should be imparted in the study timetable”
1. INTRODUCTION
Sentence 1: Suggested structures
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2. BODY PARAGRAPH 1
- This is because …
- This is mainly due to …
- This could be explained by the fact …
- For example, …
- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Secondly, ...
- The second advantage of this is …
- Another advantage is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- This is mainly due to …
- This could be explained by the fact …
- For example, …
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- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
- “On the one hand, moving companies outside the metropolises is beneficial to society for
many rationales. Firstly, ... This is because … Secondly, … This is mainly due to …”
- “On the one hand, the idea of moving companies outside the metropolises is favorable to
some extent. Firstly, ... Secondly, ........”
3. BODY PARAGRAPH 2
- This is because …
- This is mainly due to …
- This could be explained by the fact …
- For example, …
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- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Point 2 Introduction:
- Furthermore/In addition, ...
- The second disadvantage relates to ...
- Another disadvantage is …
Point 2 Explanation/Example/Result:
- This is because …
- This is mainly due to …
- This could be explained by the fact …
- For example, …
- This is perfectly exemplified in case of …
- As a result, …
- Consequently, …
- Therefore, …
- As such, …
Sample:
- “Nevertheless, I believe that this trend may constitute a number of valid concerns. The
first drawback relates to ... Furthermore, ...”
- “On the other hand, this practice may have two primary shortcomings. The first one
relates to ... The second one is that ...”
- “Despite the above-mentioned advantages, I believe that this trend might have its
downside.”
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4. CONCLUSION
Suggested structures
- In conclusion, while there are many advantages/ disadvantages regarding ..., its/ their
demerits are worth considering. It is recommended that...
- In conclusion, this trend might possess many advantages/ disadvantages. However, the
demerits/ merits of … should not be overlooked.
Sample:
“In conclusion, this trend might possess many advantages. However, the demerits of business
relocation from the urban areas to the rural ones should not be overlooked”
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C. KHUNG BÀI VIẾT CHI TIẾT
I. Business
Social responsibility (agree or disagree)
As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction: It has been argued that businesses should fulfill their duty towards society in
addition to generating profits. In my view, I completely agree as social responsibility can
improve customers’ perceptions of a brand and can attract more shareholders.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, businesses undertaking social responsibility initiatives can improve
their brand image.
Conclusion: In conclusion, I fully agree that businesses should feel an obligation towards
helping society since it can positively change how their brand will be perceived and can entice
more shareholders to support that business. In the near future, I predict that more businesses
will engage in socially responsible activities due to these legitimate benefits.
Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are
an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Introduction: Some assert that climate change reforms will harm businesses, whereas others
claim they can benefit industry. While these reforms will likely detrimentally affect businesses to
an extent, I would ultimately argue that they present an opportunity for these businesses to
reshape their business models and thrive through demand for sustainable goods and services.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, climate change reforms can harm businesses to some extent.
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, these reforms are more beneficial than detrimental for the
following reasons.
Conclusion: In conclusion, though measures to mitigate climate change can hurt businesses to
varying degrees, I assert that they are more beneficial as they serve as a catalyst for innovation
and new services. In the near future, I predict that businesses will embrace these reforms and be
able to reconcile their operations with sustainable practices.
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II. Education
Free access to university (agree or disagree)
Some people believe that everyone has a right to access to university education and that
governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they
come from. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction: It has been argued by some that all citizens are entitled to a university education
and it should be provided by the government. In my opinion, although this measure might foster
an overly competitive labour market, I mostly agree since the educational system would be more
accessible to lower-income segments of society.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, making tertiary education free for all would result in a more
competitive labor market.
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, free access to tertiary education should be guaranteed by
the state in order to ensure a more stable society.
Conclusion: In conclusion, though this reform might make it more difficult for individuals to
secure jobs generally, free tertiary education should still be implemented widely as it guarantees
that less privileged students will have a basic means of sustaining themselves. The implications
of this for society will naturally be far-reaching.
It is often suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep
animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Introduction: Some have advocated that primary school children should learn to raise animals
and grow vegetables. Though the disadvantages of this should not be underestimated, the
advantages, which include encouraging children to participate in physical exercise and the
imparting of agricultural knowledge, are greater.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, there are legitimate disadvantages to teaching primary school
children to care for animals and vegetables regarding their physical health.
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, the physical and educational advantages of children
learning basic farming knowledge are more substantial.
Conclusion: In conclusion, there are clear disadvantages to teaching children how to raise
animals and grow vegetables for their health. However, the advantages of motivating children to
be more physically active and learning vital knowledge concerning agriculture are of greater
consequence in the long-term.
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III. Entertainment
Watching live events (agree or disagree)
Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable
than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this statement?
Introduction: It has been argued by some that watching a live performance firsthand is a more
enjoyable experience than watching it on TV. I am in complete agreement since in person
attendance allows for a more engaging and social atmosphere.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, watching live shows in person offers audiences a more exciting
atmosphere.
Topic sentence 2: Furthermore, while attending live shows, audience members are more likely to
make new friends.
Conclusion: To conclude, I would assert that watching live performances in person is more
enjoyable than watching them on TV as they provide an engrossing experience that allows for
the possibility of making new social connections. Therefore, individuals should continue to
support and attend a variety of shows.
Today many children spend a lot of time playing video games and little time on sports.
What are the negative effects of playing computer games? What can be done to minimize
these bad effects?
Introduction: It has been argued by some that children today spend too much time playing video
games instead of sports. This can potentially harm people’s social skills and engender mental
health issues. However, these repercussions can be tackled by both the state and parents.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, children playing video games more than sports impairs their ability to
forge social connections and mental health.
Topic sentence 2: Fortunately, there are sensible solutions that can be implemented by the state
and parents.
Conclusion: In conclusion, playing video games more than sports can cause the deterioration of
social skills and mental health issues. However, these problems can be mitigated by closer
parental supervision and banning video game advertising. I predict that once these solutions are
in effect, children will be less inclined to play video games and engage more in sports.
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IV. Environment
Car-free days (discussion)
Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However,
others argue that there are several other ways that are more effective. Discuss both views
and give your own opinion.
Introduction: There have been differing opinions as to whether car-free days can actually work to
curb air pollution. In my view, though car-free days will have an impact, I would argue that there
are more effective measures that can be taken such as encouraging the use of public transport and
teaching the importance of environmental protection in schools.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, car-free days effectively limit the amount of fossil fuels
burned on a daily basis.
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, there are more effective ways to reduce air pollution related
to infrastructure and education.
Conclusion: In conclusion, though car-free days can to a degree reduce air pollution, I would
assert that this goal can be better accomplished by encouraging public transportation and
incorporating environmental protection into school curricula. Governments should naturally
employ a variety of strategies.
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. What are the problems? What
should governments and individuals do to tackle these problems?
Introduction: Cities these days are facing unprecedented challenges related to overpopulation.
These issues include environmental damage and rising crime rates. However, there are legitimate
solutions to these problems that can be undertaken by the state.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, urban overpopulation has engendered critical problems concerning the
safety and the environment.
Topic sentence 2: Thankfully, the government can implement reasonable long-term solutions to
tackle the problems of overpopulation in urban areas.
Conclusion: In conclusion, though urban overpopulation has caused existential problems related
to environmental degradation and an increase in crime, these issues can be curbed by the state
investing more in rural areas and implementing a one-child policy. Such solutions should be
pursued to guarantee higher standards of living for future generations.
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V. Health
Healthy lifestyle (discussion)
Some people believe that governments should make laws about people’s nutrition and food
choices while others argue that these are individual choices. Discuss both views and give
your opinion.
Introduction: Some have proposed that the government should intervene to regulate nutrition
while others assert that food choices should be left to individuals themselves. While there are
valid grounds for the former viewpoint, I would maintain that people should be free to choose
what food they would like to eat as taste is a subjective preference that relates directly to one’s
health.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, there are valid justifications for governments to dictate
nutritional laws regarding eliminating malnutrition.
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, I would nonetheless assert that consumers should be free to
make their own food choices owing to their personal proclivities.
Conclusion: In conclusion, though the government can play a role in mandating what people
should eat to an extent, I would argue that individuals should make their own food choices in
order to satisfy their individual preferences. Therefore, current nutritional policies should remain
in place.
People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What
can be done to make people consume fewer of such drinks?
Introduction: Soft drinks have become increasingly popular and common in recent decades. This
trend can be attributed to more competitive pricing and the effects of these drinks. However,
solutions from the government can be adopted to rectify this pressing situation.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, consumers drink more soft drinks as they are affordable and can
provide immediate energy boosts.
Conclusion: In conclusion, the rise in soda consumption can be ascribed to lower prices and the
energy boosts they provide. However, the government can counter this trend by introducing
higher taxes and limiting advertising.
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VI. Language:
Learning languages and customs (agree or disagree)
Some think that students must travel to another country in order to learn its language and
customs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction: It has been argued by certain individuals that students should travel abroad to learn
the vernacular and traditions of foreign nations. While this may present certain obstacles, I
largely agree that they should do this to be completely immersed in a foreign language and widen
their perspectives on different cultures and traditions.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, traveling abroad is neither cost-effective nor completely safe
for some students.
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, students should still travel to foreign nations for
educational and cultural reasons.
Conclusion: In conclusion, despite the apparent obstacles of sending students abroad to learn
foreign languages and customs, I still believe they should do this in order to be better immersed
in a foreign language and expand their understanding of unfamiliar cultures and traditions.
Governments should therefore support funding for such initiatives.
The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent
language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only
language in the future. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a single universal
language?
Introduction: Thanks to the tourism industry, the use of English has proliferated to the point
where it has become the leading language around the world. This has led some to proclaim that
English will become the only language that will be spoken by future generations. The advantages
of this trend concerning communication and economics do not outweigh the cultural drawbacks.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, using only English offers some substantial advantages related to
convenience and economics.
Topic sentence 2: However, there are significant disadvantages to only using English regarding
linguistic and cultural diversity.
Conclusion: In conclusion, the advantages to having only English as the main global language
include better employment opportunities for individuals and seamless communication between
different cultures. However, the disadvantages are the disappearance of indigenous minor
languages and threats to cultural preservation.
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VII. Social issues
Consumerism in today’s society (two-part question)
In many countries, people are living in a “throw-away society” where things are used for a
short time and thrown away.
What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?
Introduction: These days, many individuals are in the habit of discarding consumer goods after
their intended use. In my opinion, the main cause of this is the pervasiveness of advertising
coupled with advancing technologies, and the main result of this phenomenon is degradation of
the natural world.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, the proliferation of single-use products stems from advertising and
scientific advancement.
Topic sentence 2: This trend has unfortunately resulted in the over-exploitation of natural
resources, which in turn exacerbates existing environmental issues.
Topic sentence 1: An increase in urban migration has resulted in poorer living conditions and
greater competition for limited employment positions.
Topic sentence 2: The aforementioned problems can be best countered by rural economic
development policies.
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VIII. Sports
Sports and marketing (agree or disagree)
Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a
negative impact on sports.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction: There has been growing controversy over large corporations promoting their
products through sporting events. In my opinion, though this enhances the spread of a given
sport, I agree that it is negative overall as it diverts focus away from the sports themselves.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, sport sponsorships help sports expand their influence
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, commodification also necessarily entails a reduction in
focus on the actual sport.
Some people think that sports play an important role in society. Others think they are
nothing more than a leisure activity.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Introduction: Some believe that sports play a crucial role in society while others consider them to
be merely recreational activities. In my opinion, though the primary goal of sports is
entertainment, they can also serve to promote relationships between nations.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, the majority of individuals play sports merely as a leisure
pastime.
Topic sentence 2: Nonetheless, I would argue that sports can greatly contribute to a more
peaceful world.
Conclusion: In conclusion, despite the main purpose of sports being to entertain, I firmly hold
the view that they can also help to forge more harmonious relationships between nations.
Therefore, international sports events such as The Olympics or The World Cup should continue
to be held.
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IX. Technology
The Internet and school (agree or disagree)
Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much
from the internet and be educated at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction: It is often argued that formal education is no longer essential as children nowadays
can acquire knowledge via the Internet at home. In my opinion, although online schooling is
more flexible, I agree that schools are still the indispensable foundation for quality education.
Topic sentence 2: Nonetheless, formal education is crucial due to the value of teachers and one’s
peers.
Conclusion: To conclude, though homeschooling via the Internet is more flexible, I maintain that
schools are still of great necessity because they provide students with a comprehensive education
from qualified professionals and their peers. Governments should be mindful of this fact when
developing future educational policies.
Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones
and computers.
Why is this the case? What are some possible solutions?
Introduction: These days, many senior citizens find it hard to acclimate to the pervasive use of
electronic devices in society generally. The main cause of this is a lack of specialized knowledge
on their part and the best solution is to educate them.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, the elderly have difficulty in using modern technology because these
devices are fundamentally novel experiences.
Topic sentence 2: This contemporary problem can be best countered by educating the elderly on
the proper uses of technology.
Conclusion: In conclusion, seniors struggle to become familiar with modern technology mainly
because they do not understand how they operate and the optimal solution involves education. In
this way, old people might enjoy the modern benefits of smartphones and computers.
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X. Work
Part-time jobs (advantages/disadvantages)
Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, opponents of part-time jobs worry about teenagers becoming distracted
from their studies.
Topic sentence 2: However, working part-time is a crucial opportunity for young students to
learn skills necessary for their future.
Conclusion: In conclusion, although part-time work can distract adolescents from their studies, I
am strongly of the opinion that it helps them develop essential life skills. Therefore, high
schoolers should attempt various jobs to better prepare themselves for the future.
Many people today are working longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can
this cause for people?
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, working additional hours is largely due to increased competition in
various industries.
Topic sentence 2: Furthermore, working overtime can adversely affect workers’ physical and
mental well-being.
Conclusion: To conclude, working longer hours is the result of a highly competitive job market
and this has detrimental repercussions on individuals’ health. Therefore, citizens should attempt
to achieve a more ideal work-life balance.
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XI. Internet
Online shopping (discussion)
Some people claim that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others
disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Introduction: It is sometimes argued that technological advances have enhanced the current
consumer shopping experience. Although I agree with this statement, I would concede it has also
led to an increase in internet fraud.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, modern technology has improved customers’ shopping
experiences both online and offline.
Topic sentence 2: However, shopping online can naturally increase the possibility of cybercrime.
Conclusion: In conclusion, despite a wider range of choices and greater convenience, shoppers
may encounter potential dangers related to online fraud. Thus, consumers should be wary of the
information they provide when shopping.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, this trend contains definitive disadvantages relating to
weaker social connections and potential interruptions.
Topic sentence 2: Despite the valid arguments mentioned above, I would argue that online
communication is more beneficial both for employees and businesses.
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XII. Children and school
Reading books or watching TV (agree or disagree)
Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing
computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction: It is often argued that reading books is more beneficial for children compared to
watching television or playing computer games. Personally, I completely disagree with this
statement due to the benefits modern media confers in terms of education and cognitive
development.
Topic sentence 1: Firstly, electronic devices are powerful learning tools for children.
Topic sentence 2: In addition, watching TV or playing computer games can boost a child’s
cognitive abilities.
Conclusion: In conclusion, I firmly hold the view that watching TV or playing computer games
is advantageous for children since these are both great sources of learning that can enhance
cognitive development. Parents should allow their children ample time to engage with
technology.
It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
Introduction: Many people believe that learning about local history is more essential than world
history. Personally, I totally disagree with this statement as they are equally important.
Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, local history enables schoolchildren to develop a deep
understanding and connection with their ancestors.
Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, learning about world history aids individuals in attaining
cultural literacy on a global scale.
Conclusion: In conclusion, while domestic history helps citizens understand their forefathers,
international study gives them global cultural knowledge. Therefore, children should be
encouraged to learn both in equal measure.
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